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Part-11

Heer is angry and not talking to anybody'not even to Prem'..

Prem: Heay come-on Heer today is our engagement'and you are not happy'.

Heer: I'am happy but I'am angry with Chutki on my engagement she is fighting'

Geet come to her and embrace her'around her neck Di I'am soory I'dint do ant thing intentionally this is all because of that looser'

Heer: I'am not talking to you so please leave me'

Geet: Di I said na I am really sorry'

Heer: no I'am not talking to you'

Maan smiles to see Geet in this situation'.

Geet saw him smiling on her '' she make annoyed face to him ' and sid to herself' tujhe to main nahi chodungi' it is all because of this looser'. Mujhe kuch to karna padega'.

Geet: now make a sad face' I know nobody loves me because of me Di mood is also spoiled I spoiled my di's engagement'. I'am leaving and going back to London'

Paa (she winks to him '') I 'am going back please book my tickets I'am leaving''

Every one is shocked' Mr.Khurana knows she is doing all drama' to cheerup Heer'

Geet: bye Di.. I'am going you enjoy your engagement' Jiju always take care of my Di'.

Heer: Chutki' where are u going '' I'am just fooling u all' I'am not angy at all ' I didi all this to gain all you people attention'

Geet: No Di you don't love me'''

Heer: I'am soory Chutki'' I love u very much''..

Geet: no Di I'am going'''

Heer: Cries and hugs her''' Geet also hugs her''.

Geet: Di u really love me naa''

Heer: Haan pagal''

Geet: brakes their hug'' Di'' main tho bas majak kar rahithi''.and she ran'.

Heer: Chutki kii bachhi'..main tujhe chodungii nahi'.. and she also ran behind her'.. and are happy to see this''..

Mr. Malhotra: Chutki ke aate hii haamre ghar main phir sey Jaa aa gayiii'''.

Mrs. Malhotra: nodes her head in yes and having khusi wale tears in her eyes'.

Mr. Malhotra & Mrs. Malhotra Hugs'''..

Geet: Comes behind Mr. & Mrs. Malhotra'.. Maa Paa Plese help me'

Heer: also comes there Maa Paa aap dono aaj beach main nahi aayenge'isko tho aaj maine nahi chodne waali'

Geet: Di aaj maaf kar do nextime nahi kaungi''.

Heer: Nahi tujhe aaj main nahi chodnewaali''

Geet: also ran from there'.

Heer: also run behind her'. But in between Prem Stops her''..

Geet see this and hide behind the couch

Heer: Prem abhi nahi'. Phele mujhe iss nautankii ko pakadna hain'. She see here and there but not seen her'' so she starts finding her''

Then see saw her head behind the Couch' She go silently over there and pull her ears and stands her up''.

Geet: oowach owach di dard ho raha hain''..chodo please'' owach'..soory bola na dubaara nahi karungi'' (she make a very cute face)

Maan also see this and smiles but this time not on the sitution by seeing Geet with that cute face'' Geet see him smiles '' and said isko tho main nahi chodungi'' mujhe takleef main dekhar bahut hassi aati hain naa isko''

Geet: dii sooory'

Heer: sleaves her ears and smiles and hugs her''.. I really Miss u nautanki'..

Geet: Me..to Nautanki ki di'''

All smiles to see them'''.

Now its Dinner time''''.

All having dinner'''.

Maan is all the time with Sameera and also enjoying her company''

Sameera Lets have dinner''' maan ok lets go''.

Sameera wait let me serve u the food ''..

Maan: OK ''.

Geet Listen this then uske shaitaani dimagh main ek khatarnaak idea aaya'

Sameera is making the plate for the Maan Geet also comes there and start talking to her''

Geet: Hi'..

Sameera: Heloo''

Geet: Your Saare is looking very prity'''.from where u bought this' (in geet's hand there is boel which havig lots of red chilly powder and salt mixed in it)

Sameera: My bought this saare''so I'don't not''.. by the time Sameera is looking down to her saree''. Geet empited the bowl on the Maan's Plate'

Geet: Good Choice haan''

Sameera: smiles and said thanks'.. & Excused herself'.

Geet: yaa sure'..

As she leaves'' Geet ab aayega maza jab vo looser ye mirchi aur namak sey bhara khana khayega''..

Sameera gives the plate to Maan''.

Maan: Thanks Sameera'''

Sameera: my pleasure''.

Geet is still standing near the buffe'
Geet Pleasure tho abhi mera hone wala hain'

Maan takes the first bites'''and shouts mirchi''and runs towards the water corner''.. Geet having a good time to see all this''..

Maan take glass on glass of water and swallow it''..

Geet comes to him''. And laughs ''.. he understands everything now he is very much annoyed

He pull Geet near him and pore all the water of large Jug (that was on the table)on her' ''.. She is completely wet as she going to hit him her foot slip because of water and Maan again saves her from falling''' Geet is having her eyes closed due to the fear of falling Maan is just starring her beauty and watching her face which cover with droplet of water which attracts him more towards her'. Then he moved his eyes towards her lip which also having droplet of water '' Maan cant stop himself''' geet Slowly opens her eyes and saw her self on the arms of Maan'' she is furious''. And shouts now I'll not leave you' after listening this maan comes to his senses''..and fall her down and ran from there'''She has hurt badly'..now she is more furious'..and I'll not leave u , You monster'''..you have to pay for this''''..

Next day'''..

Geet and Heer are slept together in the same room last night.as they are sharing each other talks'''.

Heer wakes up first and saw geet sleeping next to her''' and kiss her forhead' Goodmornig chutki'

Geet also opens her eyes and said good morning di'''.

Mrs. Malhotra Comes in the Room with tea''..

Good Morning beta tum dono uthgaye so lets have tea togather'

Geet: nahi maa main phle jogging sey hokar aati hun''.

Heer: lets have tea together we'll go from tomorrow''.

Geet: anything for u Dii' and smiles'

Then they all have tea'

They were gossiping about last night party'''. And laughing'''.

After finishing ther tea'.

Geet went to her room to fresh n up' she take the bath and start doing her unpacking'

By the time heer comes to her to call her for the brekfast'

Now both went to have their brekfast'''

Geet & Heer wishes their Paa goodmoring'

Mrs. Malhora also come there and start serving them breakfast'.

Heer: Paa do u have ur medicen '''

Mr. Malhotra: Yea beta I had''..

Geet: Paa Dii told me that u also have dibeties'.

Mr. Malhotra: Yes beta.

Then also u are having tea' u know u are not supposed to have tea'.

Heer: Chutki I tpld him lots of time but he din't listen to me'..

Geet: Di you don't worry now I am here so I'll handle it'

Mrs. Malhotra: Yea beta you are the one who stops him to drink tea'.

Geet: Goes up to him and take the cup and put it in the kitchen'.

And comes out and yes Paa tomorrow onwards u'll have to go with me for walking ok''.

Mr. Malhotra: Ok' with a sad face' And mummers now I know why Mr. Khurana named you Hitler' Heer heard this and smiles'

Geet: Paa did u say any thing ''

Mr. Malhota: No ''I did not'

In Khurana Manssion'

All family members are having' Their breakfast'

Suddenly'. Their phone rings''

Maan picks it up''. Geet is on the other side of the phone'..

Maan: Heloo'..

Geet: Papa hain''.

Maan: Tum ' subaha subha aur koi kaam nahi hain tumhaare paas'

Geet: Apna kaam hi karne ke liye hii phone kiya''. Tumhaari yea ghatiya awaj sune k liye nahi kiya hain'. Subha subha tumhaari aawaj sunlii aab aaj kaa pura di kharb jayega'' tumhare paas aur koi kaam nhai'.. jo tune phone uthaya''..

Chalo Papa ko phone dooo''

Maan: Tum kitna bolti hoo tumhaara muuah nahi thakta '' tumhaara naam tho basanti hona chahiye '. Par problem tho yea hain kii. Tume kya kya khekar bole'' Hitler, Basanti'. Jhooti''. Aur pata nahi kya kya'''

Geet: ohey looser chalo Papa koo phone do' maine kaha naa mujhe tumsey baath nahi karni''

Mr. Khurana ask Maan that whom he is talking this loud'..

Maan: Daad Hitler kaa phone hain'' he intentionally shouts on the Phone to made listen her''

Geet: Tere tho main' tujhe tho main dhek loongi'

Maan: Phele samne to aa Basanti'

And Maan handed phone to Mr. Khurana''.

Mr. Khurana: hello beta how are you''

Geet: Shubah '2 iss looser ki awaz sunli tho main kaise hoo sakti hun ''

Mr. Khurana: Oye meri Hitler'' calm down' ok'.

Geet: iss looser ney mujhe yea bhi bhula diya kii maine aapko kyun phone kiya tha''

Mr. Khurana: I know why'' for know that I'am taking my medices in time or not'.. don't worry'.. I'am taking them in time ''

Geet: and do u go for the walk every day''.

Mr. Khurana: yea yes yes beta every day''

Geet: u are liying naa''. I know u are not going for walk'''and from tomarrow you have to go for the walk ok'

Mr. Khurana: Ok' meri Maa'. I have to go now I'am getting late for the office ''

Geet: Ok Papa bye and take care''.. and put the phone down''..

Maan is leaving for the College, as today is his last exam'

He touches his parent's feet and they blessed him'

Mrs. Khurana: feeds him sweet dahi'and whises him best of luck'

& He leaves'''

Prem is in the Hotel '.. and doing his work'''

Suddenly' his phone rings'.. he picks it up and its Heer on other side of Phone'..

Prem: Hello' baby'' how are u'

Heer: I'am not fine'

Prem: Why what happen''..

Heer: we are going to married and u are in the office''' lets go and lets see movie tonight'

Prem: Baby'I have an important work. & I dont think kii main aaj aa paungaa'.

Heer: Plese Prem lets go'.. you can finish it tomarrow also'.

Prem: No heer I'ts very important I have to finish it today only'.

Now Heer is angy

Heer: You hell with your work .. And after this if you ask me for go anywhere I'll not come with dropdown the phone ''

Prem: on the other side' Heer please listen to me' Yea dono bhene naa puri kii puri nautankii hain'

In evening'.. Prem is trying Heer's Phone but she is not picking it up'..

Geet heard her phone ringing '

Geet: Di your phone is ringing'please pick it up'

Heer: No' no I'am not going to pick it up'

Geet picked it up ''.. and said

So jiju whats up'''

Prem: Yaar tumhaari Di mujhse naaraz ho rakhi hain''

Geet: Haan aur apko pata hain aap ko lesson teach karne k liye vo mere saath picture dekhne ka plan bana liya hain' aur tickets bhi book kara di hain'. Ab tho kuch nahi hoo sakta'.

Prem: But I also booked tickets'.

Geet: Jiju one minute'' Di Jiiju na app dono ki liye tickets booked kara li hain'' please di Go' with him''

Heer: No Chutki '. If you also don't want to come with me I'll go alone'

Geet: Di' I'am coming with u ''..

Geet: Jiju ab kuch nahi ho sakta' Soory' and she cuts the Phone'

After 20 Minutes Prem recived a message from Geet'. Jiiju you also come here then will see what we can do'' I'll try to make your patch up with her''

Prem reply ok'. I'am coming there'''.

Prem come out hotel and directly went up to Maan ''.

Perm goes to Maan's room''.

Maan is geeting ready to go with Sameera for a party

Prem: Maan please come with me''.

Maan: Where'.

Prem: dude Heer is angry with me'. And explain him the whole situation '.

Maan: Yaar'.. Tu pagal hain ladkiyoon koo kabhi bhi naaraaz nahi karna chahiiye'.

Prem: Yaar I no I had make mistake '' Now please help me''.

Maan: How can I help u'..

Prem: I also going there please u also come with me naa'.

Maan: Why will I come with u''

Prem: yaar for moral support'..

Maan: No dude not this time '' today I am going with Sameera in a party'

Prem: Tu ek ladki key liye apne Bhi ko thanga (thumb) dikha raha hain'..

Maan: Don't try do emotional blackmail ' ok but Sameera is waiting for me'.

Prem: also call her ise bahaney vo bhi Free main movie dekh legi' aur tum dono kii party bhi hoo jaayingi saath saath'.

Maan: Ha ha ha'' ok I'll try'. Achha bata vahan tere vo saali tho nahi a rahi naa'

Prem: oh.. u mean Chutki'' arey yea puura plan uska hi tho hain'.

Maan: tho phir main nahi aa raha ''.

Prem: Lets go naa'.. tu usko dekhyoo bhi maat ok'. Tu sooch naa kii vo vahan nahi hain'' tere paas tho Sammera hain naa'. Tho Tu Chutki pey kahan dhayan degaa'. Chal'.. Naa please'

Maan: Ok 'lets go'..i'll call Sameera and directly call her there''

Prem: you are the best bhi in the world.. and kiss him on her cheeks'.and thanks him'..

Maan: Chi Chi yaar kya kar raha hain'

Prem smiles'

Outside the theater'

Geet & Heer arrived'

Geet is wearing a red colour suit with black embroidery on it' and ties her hairs she is looking simple yet beautiful'

Heer is wearing Jeans and T- shirt'. And looking great'

Geet is looking for Prem'

Heer: what are u looking for'.

Geet: Di nothing' just looking for the popcorn corner'

Heer there it is' u wait I'll go and buy it'..

Geet: No Di you wait I'll go and buy'..

Heer: ok''

Geet: Thank god di maan gayi chalo isi bhaane kam sey kam main jiju ka wait tho kar paaungi'

Prem and Maan also come there'''..

Prem: tu chal main car park kar k aata huun'

Maan enters the place he also go to buy popcorn' Geet bought the papcorn and she coming back to Heer but

She does'nt realize and bumps onto Maan and he just catches her from her waist all the popcorn shattered on the ground''''.

She was like inches away from the ground..Maan slowly lifts her.. full moon light falling on Geet face..
Maan keep on starring her, her eyes are closed in fear, Maan is not able to stop looking at her..Maan could feel Geet's heart beat..
Geet suddenly snaps back.. saw Maan

Geet: By God tum'. tum tho meri kundali par Naag (snake) kii thera aake beth Gaye hoo'Jahan main jaati huun vahi aa jaate ho..

Heer is waiting for her' Yaar yea ladki kahan rah gayi'

Prem come over there'and notice her he went up to her

Heer saw him' and turns her face ''

Prem : Yaar soory maine bola tho''. Ab maaan bhi jaao'..

Heer: No'..

Prem: agar tum nahi maani tho main yaahn kya karungaa na tum sooch bhi nahi sakti'.

Heer: Tum mujhe dhamki de rahe ho''

Prem: nahi baby bas tume mananey ki koshis kar raha hun'..

Heer smiles'' Prem agar ladki hasi tho Pati''.

And both hugs ''.

Heer: I u do this again then'..

Prem: I promise this will never happened again'

Now Heer realize that Geet is not yet come and they both coming towads Popcorn stall where Geet & Maa were fighting'.

On the other Hand Geet & Maan are still fighting'

Maan: Main tumhaare peeche aata hun''. Shakal dekhi hain kabhi aaine (mirror) main Bhenji lagti ho'.. khane ko tho London sey aayei ho par lagti ho ek dum bhenji'.. Main tu jaise ladkiyon ko naa dekhta bhi nahi hun ok'..

Geet: Good for u'.. aager tumne mujhe dekha bhi naa tho phir maine tumhaara kya haal karungi vo main khud bhi nahi jaanti.. vo tho tum Papa ke bate ho isliye chod rahi hun'. Kisi aur key hote naa tho main and shows him fist ' aur haan tumne mujhe bhenji boola naa kam sey kam main un ladkiyon sey tho theek hii hun jinke peeche tumjaise ladkey baagthe hain.. Tum jaise par kate ladkon ko naa par kati ladkiyana hi pasand aati hain' aur vaise bhi tum mere bare main kuch bhi soocho tum gandey hoo tho tumhaari sooch bhi tho gandi hoogi'.

Heer & Prem came there and saw them fighting. Sameera also reaches there'

Heer, Prem & Sameera tries to stop them but they are riding on shatabdii Express...and their bickering. Is nonstop'..all people came around them'''..now Heer Shouts stop u both of u

Heer: Tum dono kaa aur koi kaam nhi hain'.. jab dekho zhagadthe rhete ho''

Tum dono agar frinds nahi bansakte ho naa to phir ek doosre sey lad bhi mat karo''. Geet: Di main nahi ladthi hamesha yeh hii ladh tha hain'

Maan: Phir jhooth bol rahi hain''.

Prem: Tum dono phir suru mat ho jaana ''..

Prem to Sameera: tum isko le jaao and handed over them their tickets'..

And they both leaves from there''

Please also read this...

Note: Friend now i can' t update regular as my exam is comming... and not yet opened my books.once... 😭 & u know i hate exams ...

So this is for the man who first invented exam...

Exam bananey wale kya tere maan main samaaya tune kahe ko exam banaaya... tune kahe ko exam banaya...😭😭


PART-12

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was realllllllllllllly good
i wonder how will geet react once she knows he is the one and only maan whom she liked and who broke her heart
and same for maan too
maan nhi naa ek taraf uski beauty main doob raha hai aur doosri taraf usse behenji bhi keh raha hai😆
Edited by sushups - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update
Awesome
Heheh Love Maaneet Fights
Hope maan finds about geet soon
Loved their falling scenes..hehe
Good luck for ur exam
Continue soon
loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update geeta!!!..

u are a good writer.. i want to know what will happen to maan when he will get to know that this is Geet the one who insulted...

update when u have time.. will await ur updates!!!

and good luck with ur exams.. study and write well!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved d updateeeeeeeeee it was just superbbbbbbbbbbbb
maan n geet always need a chance 2 just cm back 2 each other 2 fight if nt anything else
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha I'm so happy I came across this ff it's totally different i felt for geet when maan used he and said all those mean hints and I love her bonding with mr khurana it's too cute and haha they don't k iw who they are actually but always fighting and maan the player this time if he falls for geet I hope she does the same as he did and I think yash is going to play a big part soon but yeh great ff and loved all the updates and goodluck for your exams and hope you revise enough and when you get time ease updates 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

awsome..love maan n geet fight.

do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey lovely update yaar
loved their bickering session
too good.......geet gave a mooh tod jawab to maan....love her a lot
all the best for ur exam...everything will b fine
its ok if u cant update regularly......but do update atleast once a week plz
keep writing

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