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Posted: 14 years ago

despair 33



Evening
Geet: brushing her hairs..
Maan: sitting pretending as if he is watching Tv but looking at her
Geet: kya huwa why are you staring at me?
Maan: i am not?
Geet: chori uper se seena zori.
Maan: where are you going?
Geet: wink on a date
Maan: really
Geet: yes
Maan: ok enjoy
Geet: gave last touch to her lipstick turn back & look at him ... aap ko kuch nai huwa . no jealousy?
Maan: nai
Geet: uff if you had said this to me i would have killed you.
Maan: hmmm
Geet: kya hmmm
Maan: if i was
Geet: stop having self pity Maan. walked to him. look at them. pointed at screen.
they have lost there everything . & by the way you were giving me lecturer to be brave to fight .what happen to that Maan?
Maan: pata nai.
Geet: Maan please stop having this long face. you look awful .
Maan: looked at her . the spark in her eyes the dreams scared him.
Geet: you should have reacted how dare you can go on a date or bus itna se pyar tha. but instant of getting angry you said enjoy.. she slight hit his chest .you are my ganda bacha .
Maan: tum ko huwa kya ha bari khush ho?
Geet: kuchi kuchi pull his cheeks "i have a aim now that why i am happy ?"
Maan: smiled pagal ho
Geet: yes madly in love .
Maan : mental in love with a
Geet: chup my hubby get ready we have to go.
Maan: where?
Geet: kya mein akely date per jao gai? started removing his shirt.
Maan: hey you are tickling me.
Geet: ok sorry
Maan: Geet i don't want to go.grab her hands
Geet: why?
Maan: i want to be alone.
Geet:but i don't want to be i want my friend with me.
Maan looked at her in anger.
Geet: even you look me in anger i will be with you wrap her arm around his & placed her head on his shoulder.
Maan: Geet tumhara problem kya ha .
Geet: kuch nai
Maan: pull her in front of him. "why you want to go with me?"
Geet: ok don't go .she started taking off her earing.
Maan: smiled
Geet: try to leave her arm
Maan: lets go
Geet: really
Maan: yes
Geet: ok wait a min. she pull his wheel chair. help him to sit.
Maan: Geet you will get tired of taking care of me
Geet: when i will be i will tell you ? abhi nahi ho.
Maan: ziddi
Geet:Adi came he wanted your sign on few file.
Maan:Ok
Geet: but i said tomorrow we will come to office then you will see your self.
Maan: but how i
Geet came in front of him kneel down. "Have you heard a saying behind every successful man there is a woman"
Maan: hmm hold his hand
Geet: i will take you help you till you are fully recover.
Maan: but
Geet: please Maan we are one right. we can support each other in thick & thin.
Maan: Geet you are not understanding
Geet: Maan i am you are just scared to face the world. My dear Maan show them you are Maan Singh Khurana, you can face every challenge that life give you.
Maan: since when you grown up?
Geet: since i became your wife. shyly smiled
Maan: kissed her hand.
Geet: ufff chala warana ved aur tanu will get angry
Maan: smiled
Geet: quickly push his wheelchair out of room
Maan: where is everyone?
Geet: let me take you she push his wheel chair out it was all dark as the reach out it all lighted
Tanu : welcome mr & mrs khurana
ved : like a waiter "may i mama"
Geet: smiled he push the wheel chair
Maan looked around"who did this all ?"
Tanu: we pointed at Geet.
Maan: where is Dadi?
Tanu: we asked dadi beejee & mama to go for shopping.
Maan: why?
Ved: sir actually we wanted privacy ... kissed at Maan check.
Maan: what kind of privacy?
Tanu: off mamoo you ask too many question?
Ved: it is your date mamoo.
Maan :looked at Geet she shyly smiled.he looked at a card reserve for Mr & Mrs Maan..
Tanu: passed a hand made card . "sir would you like to have a stater "
Ved: tanu you are badu . he placed the plate on table.
Maan: smiled.
Geet: too a deep breath .Meera from in side showed her a thumb up.
Dadi : i am sure Geet will succeed.
Beejee : she is very brave girl.
all three walk in.
Tanu: sir why you are not eating . you didnot like our serves
Maan :why you are calling me sir?
Tanu as you are our guest.
Ved : Tanu lets go in & bring the main course .
Tanu: let them eat na.
Ved: Tanu the need privacy .
Maan: had a laughter. "you both " they ran in he looked at Geet who was wiping her tears
Maan: kya huwa?
Geet: kuch nai something went in my eyes.
Maan: Geet you can't lie to me. wipe her tears .
Geet: eat
Maan: dil nai charaha.
Geet: please Maan feed him
Maan: why you guys did this ?
Geet: to see your smile.if we will start getting happy on small things..
Maan:shhh teacher , yeh romance ka waqt ha
Geet: smiled.
they had a light romantic dinner..
Maan: thxs for such a lovely candle night dinner.
Geet:who was tucking in his blanket ." i hope you were not bored."stared in his eyes.
Maan: no he grab her from her waist."you never let me"
Geet: oh really
Maan: yes he pull her more close.
Geet: you are not tired ....
Maan: after such a nice moment how could be i tired? he hug her .
Geet: hug him back
Maan: kissed her eyes whisper "i don't like tears in it"
Geet: whisper promise i will try my level best not to cry.
Maan: kissed her fore head.turn off light.pull her more close .whisper "i love your lips feel like eating it" softly kissed. he placed her head on his chest .
Geet: hug him tightly
Maan: grab her waist& started doing mischief.( sorry folks i am bad in it) Geet let him occupy her just obeyed him. he was loving her like crazy ."i love you Geet"
Geet: i love you too.
Maan: suddenly push her away .."go from here" he was all sweating
Geet: what happen
Maan: just go from her
Geet: why?
Maan: do what i am saying .
Geet : where should i go?she turn on light. huwa kya ha did i do something wrong.
Maan: Geet i can't have relation. you just go.
Geet: looked at him in shocked ."but why?"
Maan: i don't want my kids to say their father is on wheel chair.he just gave her pillow go please.
Geet: was too shocked she just grab blanket & walk .."where should i go ? she just sank next to bed "Maan tell me where to go?placed her head on his side of bed.
Maan: just closed his ears .."how could be i so mean?" both cried the dark room just echo with their painful sob.
to be cont. hope you like it do comment.& those who don't want Pm's or no more interested in reading do tell me as it is really irritating to pm over 450Pm's for each part.

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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee updateeeeeeee
y yaar aan was getting a bit into romance atleast a kiss should hv happened thn intereputted yaar
n yaaaaaaaa 1st 2 commennttttttt

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesomeeeeeeeee updateeeeeeee

y yaar aan was getting a bit into romance atleast a kiss should hv happened thn intereputted yaar
n yaaaaaaaa 1st 2 commennttttttt

bus pata nai kya huwa 😳.better luck next time
yuppi you are first
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful start but Bitter finish.
Gr8 update.
naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dia_ditz

Beautiful start but Bitter finish.
Gr8 update.

sweet & sour together isn't it part of life
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Posted: 14 years ago

the end was sad,

guess he needs some time
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god that was heart wrenching seeing maan like this but wanna know how they r gonna overcome this situation................that dinner plan was cute.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update... liked the dinner date.. tanu n ved are so cute.. hmm maan was really rude.. whts geet goin to do now?? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved da update
Do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh what happened to Maan now

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