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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it naddiya n take ur own sweet time for maan to recover n even im praying for japan

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Soni

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Posted: 14 years ago

Read both part you updated, both are awesome👏, i just loved the way you're writing😍, the way you're showing the feelings & expressions, just loved it😳, update soon ur next part🤗

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

loved it

cute part

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome part Naddiya
loved it
update soon

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved da update

do continue

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known

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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome!

loved the way how geet was handling maan so nicely!

continue soon!

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

move at your own pace

thestory should move the way the writer plans

it is the writers baby

no one knows it better then the writer

you write beautifuly

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey!

Nice update!!!!!!!

the best part of the update was Geets patience.........

Hmmm so Geet is not sick......

that brij is so kameena na........

Well, loved the gussa-thanda session between Maaneet,

amazing job!!!!!!!!!

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286pearl

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Posted: 14 years ago

so nice update.....

dis incident make geet strong

Geet: kissed his eyes. run her fingers in his hairs
Maan:but
Geet: peek at his lips . no but just sleep mera kuchi kuchi kuchi baby.
Maan: what is this kuchi kuchi kuchi looked in her eyes
Geet: pull his cheeks when some one is looking too cute .kissed his cheeks
Maan felt so relax that he forgot his anger slept in her arms . after a while Geet felt he was snoring. she care fully made him lay on pillow. kissed his forehead i will face your this anger Maan ,but i will not stay away from you.
walk out of room.

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