~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 5~ - Page 92

hey yaar wat an episd yaar..................nw i m very bsy ............... bt ur upadt mad me to sty here ..............awesom.........................

wow superb ending. wht a story. the big twist at the last part changes the whole scenario. all the best 4 ur future fictions.

Hi Muskan i have been reading all ur 3 FF on maaneet . pls continue madhoshi dont end it , pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee as i just love to read about them or else u can start with another maaneet FF in place of this.

Thanxs.😊

Wow amaizing
ending
loved it
fantastic
thnx 4 pm

she said is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...dr rushed her to the OT
parents & friends every one rushed, took the statement.
he just stood away watching not even able to be part of anything
police - it was an accident, she slipped from the bridge & hit
her head on the rock below, some one tried saving her but
father - who tried saving her
he just left from there without making his presence known...
she held his cold num hand & hugged him he cried cried out loud burring his head in her
geet - aap wahan se chup chap chale aaye taaki kisi ko pata
na chale. she loved u..she jumped off the bridge because of her love for u
taaki uski abbu ke saamne uski ruswai na ho, taaki unka gumaan na toote
he cried cried & just kept crying like a baby

she moved closer looking lovingly in his eyes - aur aapko lagta hain ki, aapke pyaar ke wajah se mujhe bhi kuch ho jayega lekin aap yeh bhool gaye ke main zinda hoon aaj to sirf humare pyar ke wajah se


maan - lekin tum wahan tak pahunchi meri wajah se
she snapped back in anger almost losing all her patience now...umm thats why STEP 3
she knew the fear in him was so deep it could not be just be removed with few loving words. she gives the divorce papers to him I have signed it all the pages
his heart was shattered into pecies a pain probably was more intense than he ever felt
maan looked at the paper in disbelief & shocked to see she had signed all the sides
geet - aap ko lagta hain main aapke paas rahogi to marjavoongi
aur mujhe lagta hain main aapse door hoke jee nahi payungi lets see who is right
she removes her magalsutra & gives it to him lo ho gayi main aapse alag..that is if I can ever be let me see how long do I live now. she just leaves to the hospital holding her stomach

mother - tumhe sameera's se milna hain
geet - umm
mother - took her to sameera's kabr.., her abbu still not able to recover
from the shock that sameera died, so we all potray at home that she is alive
woh unki zindagi thi
geet - yah kaise huwa
mother - she slipped from the bridge &
geet sat at her kabr the whole day. she rested her head on her kabr & kept feeling his pain
but still confused..then she noticed the carved date on the kabr..same as the torn
pages of the dairy.. she could not believe what she saw..babaji
woh unse mili thi...she looked around...she saw a kabr..next to her
her heart bleeded to see the name just Maan written on that
same date...she could not believe it..she hated that name to be written
on a grave ...she started to rub it, scratch with a stone madly when a box slipped out
she opened it ..it had the torn pages of the dairy.....which had those lines written on them

he remembered...I promise u will have ur baby in ur hand..
he kept the baby close to her ..baby kept crying loud like he knew she was no more
he caressed her check & remembered let me see how long will I live without u
he tied the magalsutar around her neck. he did'nt fear any further, he believed he could love!!
he knew like nothing could happen to her if he was there with her, the belief she filled
him with..he leaned forward & took her lips in & kissed her, like it was the first time they
kissed she cuffed & choked doctors ran with the oxygen mask

maan - i love u ..love u ..2.3.4...10...
baby~snugged ...smiling

4 years later
car just stopped out of the khurana mansion
maan opens the door - chalo
nahi , nahi ummmmoving away from the door
maan - don't u want to cut ur cake
pehle meri gift
maan - I have brought u what ever u asked for, now what do u want
lekin yeh sab meri age ka nahi hain
maan rolls his eyes - looks at the toy, ismein kya problem hain
u said u want a remote toy thats why I got all of them
lekin I am only 4 ismein 8+ lika, meri age wala gift chahiye mujhe
maan - kal pakka
nahi abhi abhi abhi
maan - I promise I will get u 10 toys tomorrow
nahi mujhe abhi 10 toys chahiye


muskan for showing this side of papa ka chamcha

I had enough of ur son
geet - kyun bura bol rahe ho mera bache ke bare mein woh bhi aaj ke din

geet removes her apron & comes out to the hall
SAMEER SAMEER in the house in count of 3, 1...2...
he came running & hugging her mama ..mama mama..
maan kept looking at them in shock..that was easy
..papa ne mujhe koi bhi toy nahi leke diya
geet - ole mera bacha, lekin papa ne to saare gift aapke room mein rakhe hain
sameer - sachi &kissed maan..thank u papa..love u papa..ur the best papa in the world ran to his room

he lifts her & takes her to the room - mujhse nahi sambalta tumhara beta
mujhe ek pyari se beti chahiye tumhari tarah
geet - nahi baba, mujhse 2 bache nahi sambal the 3 kaise manage karoongi
maan lifted his eyes brows 2 bache
geet - sameer aur aur...
maan - aur?
geet - aur aap
maan - aacha main bacha hoon pushing her on the bed
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho, sab log aate honge
maan - bache ki bachkani harkat
geet umm hugging him hidding her face in his embrace.


















waiting for next new ff

Muskaan,