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Posted: 14 years ago
wwo!! di lovely

aww sameera ..OMG!!
that part was too sad..
belive me my eyes are moist after reading that part*m too senti *
but really loved it...

thnks for beautiful story dii:)

ur the best

muahh!! 🤗
Edited by sweetshab - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski,
A quick comment...I cannot believe it is over.
Will comment more tonite.
Love
Rachana
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh nooooooooooooooooooo u cant end da ff oh man plzzz muskaan give us season 2 of dis ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz m so so so sad u ended dis ff will misssssssssss dis ff a lottt anyways awwww da finishing was so senti awww sameera dat was really really really sad n den awww happy ending for maneet aww woww geet so brave n she knew all along maan's feeling n y he was doing dat she smart gal man n den aww der son name sameer n sameer loveee his mom a lot aww n dats y maan jealous hehe n want a cutee daughter hayee jst loved da end man bt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz give us season 2 plzzzz anyways thnx for giving us such a goood story n ff u rock
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb👏
awesome job done
iam speechless
it was so emotional i had tears in my eye,little senti i am
loved it.
beautiful FF
thank u
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wat finished ................😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

Bdw u have given an amazing end it was unpredictable👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Oh no the initial para jst scared me ..........

but still confused..then she noticed the carved date on the kabr..same as the torn
pages of the dairy.. she could not believe what she saw..babaji
woh unse mili thi...
she looked around...she saw a kabr..next to her
her heart bleeded to see the name just Maan written on that
same date...she could not believe it..she hated that name to be written
on a grave...she started to rub it, scratch with a stone madly when a box slipped out
she opened it ..it had the torn pages of the dairy.....which had those lines written on them

this was so affecting how do u manage to write so well that we actually get tears ......u knw sameera's death actually made me so sad😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭....... i felt really bad for maan ........😭😭😭😭😭 how he wud have survived

geet - aap ko lagta hain main aapke paas rahogi to marjavoongi
aur mujhe lagta hain main aapse door hoke jee nahi payungi lets see who is right
she removes her magalsutra & gives it to him lo ho gayi main aapse alag..that is if I can ever be let me see how long do I live now.

geet - aap wahan se chup chap chale aaye taaki kisi ko pata
na chale. she loved u..she jumped off the bridge because of her love for u
taaki uski abbu ke saamne uski ruswai na ho, taaki unka gumaan na toote

Each nd evry line was so touching i got goosebumps .........nd my heart was actually aching 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 .......

jst the feeling of how maan wud have survived without sameera until he met geet jst breaks my heart 😭😭😭😭😭😭

he caressed her check & remembered let me see how long will I live without u
he tied the magalsutar around her neck. he did'nt fear any further, he believed he could love!!
he knew like nothing could happen to her if he was there with her, the belief she filled
him with..he leaned forward & took her lips in & kissed her, like it was the first time they
kissed she cuffed & choked doctors ran with the oxygen mask
dr - she is reviving
maan - no she does'nt need anything
he just kisses her passionately again & again again lieing next to her on the bed
his hands passionately moved all over her feeling the life in her
baby lied between them feeing her warmth now sleeping peacefully
maan - i love u ..love u ..2.3.4...10...
baby~snugged ...smiling
geet - u can say that again & again & again..I can never have enough of it

Musky this was jst beautiful .....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️❤️

i dnt have words to describe..........jst stupendous👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Wow they kept babies name sameer thats really sweet😊😊😊😊😊😊

SAMEER SAMEER in the house in count of 3, 1...2...
he came running & hugging her mama ..mama mama..
maan kept looking at them in shock..that was easy😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

he lifts her & takes her to the room - mujhse nahi sambalta tumhara beta
mujhe ek pyari se beti chahiye tumhari tarah😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

awesum musky 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

u r a fabulous writer 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 ............really

this is for you a big big hug 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

i jsut loved this whole part so much it was so fantastic ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski,
Writing my comment as per my promise.
I cannot believe the FF is over. You know I went on such an emotional roller coster ride with Geet n her unconditional love for Maan.
To be honest, I was expecting more from Maan....I mean it is excellent, fantastic that Geet stood by his side no matter what....and he was back to normal.....
But in the end.....it was very abrupt ending....I felt Geet deserved more to her character in this.....I will use the word 'SHAHEED' for Geet in this FF and that is why I was expecting that she get a recogonition for her character in this FF through Maan.....
But anyways......Loved the FF.
Take care,
Rachana
Talk to your on ur new FF.
Edited by Water. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally it ended i simply loved evry bit of it thnx 4 such a lovely ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooowwwwwwwwwwww
that was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee
im soooooooooooooo sad it finish😭😭😭
but ur ended was tooo good
i love it


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Posted: 14 years ago

woooowwwwww dear....

how could u feel n write all this..😳...
gr8 part..👍🏼..thanks 4 being me a part of this.😊.
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwww😳😳😳
why did you end it up so soon Muskan Di😭😭
omg😛.. i wanna have some more fun with it hehe😆
it was superb Di⭐️👏👏👏.. sooooooooooooo romantic and full of emotions...😉😃😃
i really loved all the parts of this story👏👏👏
especially the last one..👍🏼
how geet and maan are happy with their son😳 - sameer😍
awww... it was toooooo good to be praised sweetheart😃😃😃👏👏
thanks soooooooooooo muchhhh🤗 for sharing your wonderful creativity with us😳😳😳
im really glad to be a member of ur ff list hehe..😉😆
congratz to you jaan❤️
THANKS soooooooooooooo muchhhh once again🤗🤗🤗🤗
love you 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10.....😆☺️
Kituu🤪

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