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Raisa

@radiant_raisa

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#901

OMG!!! 😔

It's done?? 😲 It's seems like just yesterday this FF started 😲
But seriously Di, awesome job!!! You have really done justice to this FF!!
I just wish we had more Geet and Maan's romantic moments 😳
Anyways..Superb Work!! I hope Truly Magical or Pyar Ka Ehsaas won't end any time soon 😆. They're just as great! 😃

Thanks so much for all the updates di!!
Keep Rocking!
🤗

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rohini

@Rohini20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#902

hi hi hi...

wht will i telll..evryone praised u wid evrything....iam no different..but i feel sad tht u ended it...Nice ending..u r awsum writer as i said before ecpecially emotions in words...luved ur FF a lot...having any idea to start a new FF...do tell us...TC

Rohini

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#903

i still can't believe that you have ended this ff!...

but all in all the ending was mindblowing!...

loved the way how geet made maan realize that how strong his love is for geet!.....

loved the epilogue!.....

their son is sooo naughty!...

but i m still in shock that u've ended this ff!

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Hasina

@kellz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#904

aww u ended it

i loved maan's confession about damn time

i thought geet was pregnant again at the end

thanks for writing loved it :)

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Khanna

@ZahariliBichoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#905

Muskaan Just loved it... Jiyo jiyo meri jaan.

Fantastic ending.

Muah Muah

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#906

Hi Muskan,

That was a great story...happy ending, too! In the beg, I thought u might make it a tragic but all good!

-Sona

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sharanya

@shaaranya

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+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#907

OMG Muskan i cant believe u just finished MADHOSHI..................dint even imagine that u'll end it😭😭😭😭 Anywayz a real beautiful end 2 a beautiful jouney............write loads of fan fics more

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aali

@18mypride

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#908

😊👏👏👏👏very very very gooodddd..Muskan you are great ... & u know u made me cry after reading these lines..& i read these lines somany times..,Madhoshi really fantastic... love u muskan ..plz dont stop writing its a God's gift for U! the way u express feelings in words i can feel those feelings and what the charactors are going thruu...🥳🥳🥳Oh God i dont have words... main toh aap ki fan ho sacchi....

dr - we were just looking for u & handed the baby in his hand
he kept looking at the tiny life wrapped in a white cotton crying. he hugged the baby close to his neck & asked the dr geet!
dr - sorry we could not save her
maan rushed in with the baby
maan - GEET GEET
she was life less...he remembered...I promise u will have ur baby in ur hand..
he kept the baby close to her ..baby kept crying loud like he knew she was no more
he caressed her check & remembered let me see how long will I live without u
he tied the magalsutar around her neck. he did'nt fear any further, he believed he could love!!
he knew like nothing could happen to her if he was there with her, the belief she filled
him with..he leaned forward & took her lips in & kissed her, like it was the first time they
kissed she cuffed & choked doctors ran with the oxygen mask
dr - she is reviving
maan - no she does'nt need anything
he just kisses her passionately again & again again lieing next to her on the bed
his hands passionately moved all over her feeling the life in her
baby lied between them feeing her warmth now sleeping peacefully
maan - i love u ..love u ..2.3.4...10...