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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwww was d kiss realllyyyyyyyyyy soooooooooo longgggggggg
loved the updatee😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG They're far beyond cute yaar
They're just perfect
The BEST PART is that they are so innocent
Loved the update

How was ur birthday?
Are u updating more?

Thanks
Love you
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 12


Its Sunday.... Geet on maans lap by the window... Looking at the Garden... Maan is helping geet to fill out her collage application form... Both chosen two different collage.
Geet: another two years!
Maan: well... We still be living in the same house.
Geet: umm! Yea...
Maan kisses her neck... "have you decided your other two subject?"
Geet: I don't know!
Maan: why don't you do business? Dad want us to take over are business soon as we finish university.
Geet: you do it! I am least interested.
Maan: I am... That's why different collage. It's gr8 for business... Economics... M...
Geet: good. They are boring to me. I am going for archeology. I get to travel round the world.
Maan: that's the only reason you choosing the subject.
Geet: ha.. Ooo and maybe sports... I have to move round allot. + good looking boys are there.
Maan gives geet annoying glare.
Geet: what?
Maan: that's the only reason?
Geet: ha.
Maan: you are not doing sport.
Geet: why?
Maan: if you do that I will do something ... Which mean I am surrounded by girls.
Geet: fine.... She makes a baby face.
Maan: now sign your form. Everything is filled up.
Geet: ok....
After few minutes...
Geet: have you done everything?
Maan: yes... Why?
Geet sighs: I want to kiss...

Maan smiles... Seeing her blush... It's 8 months in, since there first kiss.... They have probably kissed one another mostly everyday... And geet still sighs...
Maan loved her innocent sighs... Because he knew exactly what they were heading to...
Geet twists round and they started to enjoy there long kiss....

Years have passed... They shared a weird friendship... It wasn't like other peoples friendship... No one knew about there little snog they do now and then except Ridzy.

Ridzy in collage with geet and dutta.... While sam purposely chooses to go with Maan.

Maan changed allot in past few years... He is more mature... Well concentrated in his study... And started to take over Khurana construction little by little...

They are 19 now... They have skipped the diary completely. There mum and dad spender there first night together on there 18th birthday... Which Maan and geet completely refused. They couldn't do that. Specially when geet was with Dutta. Dadi was going insane about there engagement. Geet and maan kept distance... Except sometime there kiss... Which they couldn't control. They knew well it was wrong. They should not do this. But... Some odd moments. They were not in love. But there kiss was special.

Dinner table... It's nearly time for them to apply for university...

Dad: maan after you come back... I want you to start to take over your dads Khurana industry.
Maan: yes dad.
Geet: which university you are going to again?
Maan: Herbert! I have told you like millions of time.
Geet: yes I know. I just can't believe you got in and I didn't!
Maan: that's because I am clever.
Geet: so am I. I also achieved 4As.
Maan: they look for the Mark and experience.
Geet: I have experience.
Maan: what ... To have girly night out with your friends.
Everyone laughed.
Geet got irritated. This is not funny.
Dad: geet... Calm down. It's just he is better then you.
Geet: dad....
Maan smirking...
Geet: I hate you know. I loved you when you were younger. You used to listen to me more.
Maan: grow up geet.
Geet: ugh... What's with everyone? Telling me to grow up!
Maan: probably because you have to...
Dadi: stop teasing now. Eat your dinner.
Mum comes in with a letter...
Mum: geet it's yours...
Geet: hmm!
Geet opens it... Dutta....
Geet: mum dad! I am not interested to get engaged! After I finish my study.
Dad: but why? Maan and sammera already engaged.
Geet: so!
Mum: we want you two to get married at the same time.
Geet: ugh... Maan! tell them na...
Maan: I agree with mum and dad...
Geet gets irritated. And leaves the dinner table...
Dutta calls...

Mum: geet... It's Dutta.
Geet: for god sake...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the Update:)
Awesome Part
Continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no maan and sameera are engaged..shit yaar...yeh chudail peecha kyun nahi chodti?
Loved it again haha
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god........maan and sameera are engaged.....seriously they have the worlds most weird relationship.....when they will know abt their own feelings......loved it update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
great updates!
why are they getting engaged to ppl they don't really love?!
i hope they realize their mistake before its too late

con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous both update when they gonner fall in love Happy Birthday once again sweet heart pls cont soonnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 13


Geet takes the phone and walks in to her room...
Geet: what is it?
Dutta: why are you refusing?
Geet: I just... I am not ready.
Dutta: why?
Geet: it's too soon.
Dutta: you are 19! Geet... It's perfect timing.
Geet: ok... Ok... I will promise tp tell you by 2moro night.
Dutta: pakka.
Geet: pakka.
Maan knocks...
Geet: come in.
Maan leaned against the door on his side...
Maan: when you will say yes to the bechara?
Geet: idk! I was thinking I might as well.
Maan hugs her... She tries to avoid.
Maan: what's wrong?
Geet: Dutta might not like it. He already annoyed with me about are friendship.
Maan smiles...
Geet: how is sam? Is she like that as well?
Maan: I usually shout at her, if she does bring this up.
Geet: she must demand you to kiss her.
Maan: yea... But... I told her not before are marriage!
Geet: you should. It's her right!
Maan: not yet...
Geet hugs him from the back... "what is happening to us?"
Maan kisses her hand. "you concentrate in your study. I will do something. We still have 3 years."
Geet hugs him tighter... Maan twists him self round... Locking the door... Cupping geets face.
Maan: "I will fix everything!"
Geet: "that's what you have said in your engagement day!"
Maan: but I didn't were her engagement rings. I am wearing yours. We will be in USA together. So don't worry.
Geet: my one is not in USA anymore.
Maan surprised: what? But I made sure.
Geet: dad changed it.
Maan: when?
Geet: 2 days ago.
Maan: why didn't you tell me?
Geet: I have tried. But every time... Mum Dadi or dad will come between us.
Maan started think again... This is all messing up... If they are far way... This will sure create distance between there relationship... His and SAMs engagement happened so fast that... Nothing seems to work well...
Geet became upset... Maan couldn't see her upset. At the same time he couldn't refuge mum and dad about sammera and his marriage... That was fixed by his real mother before he was even born. His mums last wish... But things have changed so much...

Maan and geets relationship started to get deeper and deeper.... Specially living under the same roof... And sometime same bed... It was impossible to control there inner desire....

Maan and geet picks sammera up... Sam didn't like geet sitting next to Maan... But that's what have been happening for last years... Maan and geet always together...

Sam: Maan...
Geet looks at maan angrily...
Maan: yes!
Sam: dad said we need to go shopping soon.
Maan could see geet anger... He is ded today when he goes home.
Geet: why you 2 need to go shopping?
Sam: well it's maans responsibility to buy me everything.
Geet looks at her...
Geet: Oy hello... You are not married yet. Anyway when you 2 are planning to go?
Maan kept quiet ... He knew well geet will do something that will prevent them going. So he left it.
Geet: maan!
Maan: bolo.
Geet: give me your wallet.
Sam looked at them in confusion...
Geet takes the wallet from his pocket... Her touch nearly made him loose the balance in the car...
Geet opens his wallet... She takes one by one cards out...
Geet: my card!... My... Umm.... My... This one my as well.... And my.
Maan just looks at her in amuse...
Sam: it's maans name on it. So it's not your card.
Geet: do you live with him or I?
Sam: you.
Geet: is he buying all your stuff since we were young or my?
Sam: you.
Geet: so who's card are they?
Sam: Maan as he is buying them for you.
Geet: wrong! Because he use this card only to buy my stuff. You can't have it.
Geet hands him the empty wallet taking all the cards and cash.
Maan: leave some cash. I need it for lunch.
Geet: how much?
Maan: just leave me the whole bundle. It's not enough to do shopping.
Sam just looked at them in shock.
Geet: ok.
She hands the wallet back.
Maan: sorry! I can't do shopping anymore. Geet took all my card.
Maan drops geet to the collage.
Geet: stay at the back. Don't you dare sit on my sit.
Sam just sat there num.
Maan: she won't! Just go.

Maan and sam drives to the collage...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Heheh Loved Geet's Dhamki to sam..lol
And wow maan is wearing geet's ring..aww
Loved the update..Amazing!!:)
Thanks

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