The World's Oldest Story!!#5AR I'm No Superman!! - Page 11

roflmaoooooooooooooooo! omg i loved this update. ive mostly been a silent reader but this part was too hilarious not to comment. the prank was epic and i luved armaan's reactions. plz continue asap!

Congo on the 5th thread!! awesome update!!

OMG! rachana you completely bowled me away...what an update yaar!!!

reserved..

Congruats for the 5th thread dear.

About the new update,i dont know what exactly I want to say.Presently my mind is just like Armaan and Ridhima.Everything happened so fast that the reality doesnt sink in completely.Till the end of the part I thought this may be Armaan or Ridhima's dream.All this cant be true.Eventhough I am very much happy,I cant believe this has happened.Shanky played a prank on Armaan???Thats not believable.

Why did you rush to get them engaged so fast?Are you planning to end the ff soon?The life after engagement and before marriage is very beautiful.Please dont spoil that beautiful feeling by getting them married soon.

Originally posted by: -Sary-

HOLY MOLY :| That update TRULY was W.T.F. :| :| :| :| :| I honestly had no idea that was in store for us LOL as if I didn't already love you enough I love you even more after this update :| I honestly react to everything in your ff like I used to with real DMG while watching it LOL. During this update I was all smiley LOL I was grinning like a fool. First off the whole airport scene was to die for man. It was so endearing and cuteeeeee. Riddhima was just too adorable I love how she refused to let go off of him so unlike her but I was loving it. And an embarrassed Armaan was ROFL I loved him and his reaction to Riddhima's PDA. Especially this part - Armaan didn't know what to do as he blushed in embarrassment at the attention they were gathering.. "She.. Uh.. loves me too much.."

AHHH I loved how the whole parting scene was showed <3 </3 I could picture KSG and Jen (the only Riddhima for me) so vividly with this part :| actually in all parts it was like I was watching them. I can see how you put in a lot of to keep the essence of AR alive especially in this update. Um btw this has to be my most favorite part ever! It was a nice combination of cuteness and sadness :( He walked a few paces and turned as a stopped.. , "I don't want to go Riddhima..", he said his voice shaking a little.. This is gonna sound crazy but I could actually almost hear KSG say those words LOL.

"Dr. Mallik.. You were right.. Meri beti ko apne jaal mein fasakar aapne bohot badi galti ki.. Kyunki ab aapko meri ziddi beti ke saath mujhe bhi jhelna padega.. Welcome to the family son.." AND THAT WAS MUSIC TO MY EARS :| Ahhh I didn't realize how much I was looking forward to this approval of Shanky until I read it LOL Let me just tell you, you made me love Shashank Gupta :| which is next to impossible ROFL

Ok so the next part that comes after the amazing realization speech by Shanky reminded me so much of Roka of KaJen :| And he didn't even realize when Dr. Shashank took him in an embrace.. He hugged him tight and let out his tears as everyone watched a father and his son finally reconcile.. Riddhima saw that sight, Armaan and her papa hugging each other, and her tears just flowed out.. I so pictured the scene where Shashank hugged a crying Armaan and Riddhima was looking at her dad and love hugging sigh I loved that scene then and loved it now too :) I seriously got a fuzzy feeling inside reading that scene LOL

"He said I am the best Riddhima.. Did you hear that.. He said..", he was laughing and crying at the same time as he took her face to tell this to her.. That scene was so aw and choochie coo for me LOL I could so imagine a proud Armaan hugging Riddhima and realizing that all is really well :| Ah reading that made me so happy LOL It's too cute for words <3

Last but not least - All their friends and family clapped and hooted as they were nudged forward for the official ring ceremony.. This was much more than they had bargained for.. As they looked at each other, wide-eyed in shock, only one expression was visible on both their faces.. W*F!! That part really did make me go W*F like them as well :| I was so not expecting an engagement but that was an amazing surprise and I absolutely loved it.

You ended the part at such a cute and important moment that it makes me want an update ASAP LOL But as always take your time because you already update fast as it is and not just that you write WAY more than I have seen anyone else do so seriously props to ya <3 Waiting for more and BTW sorry for such a LONG comment but your update was too amazing and I couldn't stop myself LOL

omg i loveeedd this part!! soo happy dr. shashank finally agreed!!

Originally posted by: taniyaarman

What the F..............(Sorry for the language)

god You got to be kidding us...

wat took you in to write this part...

I can Imagine who Excited and Happy you would be to write it...as much as we were to read..it............

Itz amazing n reallly out of the world..............................

Cant get enough of this...Love emotion,Scary feeling,Drama,Prank.....

All came in 1 pack not to forget Shocking Sweet Surprise at the end...................

This one was wholesome Package...............................

God I cant get enough of this.....

Your writing..... for 1 second I really believed that Shanky is a limit....1st I thought its a prank but then again..We shanky got too serious..I really got an attack there.....................

I wanna write sooo much n bore you with it 😆but My exam is there so have to study n itz 4am in India............

Sooooo by for now...

But it was awesome👏...................................................................................

Originally posted by: DMG fan

Nice update....but after such detailed parts earlier this one came on a fast track...not complaing....happy times are always welcome but just what I felt. Ab thoda kuchikooing ho jaye!

rt

Originally posted by: priya..

Hi rachna-

Wonderful update!! I love your writing style and the reunion scene between AR was effortless. You bring my AR to life. This is the AR I fell in love with 3 yrs ago.

I have read the update multiple times and Most of me is Happy!! very happy- but somewhere a part of feels like I am missing something here...Like failing to notice something. I can't explain well- somehow I feel like there is something more to the story.- I know I am not making much sense. May be after reading subsequent happy parts, I will forget my train of thought :) .Monday night Castle influence 😉 Can't take the story for what it looks like 🥱. I am looking forward to ur update!!! Update super soon :)

Priya