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Sana Mustafa Malik

@sana.samir

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

CONGRATS! on the new thread!

W*F! this was amazing! You've got me saying it too 🤣

OMG, finally the sad saga is off.. W*F! LOL

THANKS FOR THE PM.

Lots of love
Sana

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Niharika

@Altaira

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

awesommmmmmmmeeeeeeee!!🤗😆
this is best best prank ever played..!! rahool mocking the lawyer part was funny..!!😆
ahh! i hav no words .............. am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy..!!😆😆
shock after shock mann..!!😲 😆
eagerly waiting for nxt update..!!😳😆

H@rry😃😆

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

congratz for ur 5th thread

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Antara Mazumdar

@dmg_roks_antara

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

congo on new thread n dat was jst AWESOME.............

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

WHOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved each and every bit!! simply mind blowing..1! SUPERB!! hats off yaar..!!! the way u described each detail of the prank made me wanna kill Shanky..but deep down i was HOPING and sort of knew it was a prank..!! lolx...but i still dont like the fact Armaan pe prank kiya??!! HAWWW!!! what shamee..!!! but good one..and love Shanky's controlling factor over Armaan..!! and love Armaan and Riddhima's love..!! simply superbb..!!!! each and every bitt..!!

do cont soon..!!

love,

Sanaa

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taniyaarman

@taniyaarman

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

What the F..............(Sorry for the language)

god You got to be kidding us...

wat took you in to write this part...

I can Imagine who Excited and Happy you would be to write it...as much as we were to read..it............

Itz amazing n reallly out of the world..............................

Cant get enough of this...Love emotion,Scary feeling,Drama,Prank.....

All came in 1 pack not to forget Shocking Sweet Surprise at the end...................

This one was wholesome Package...............................

God I cant get enough of this.....

Your writing..... for 1 second I really believed that Shanky is a limit....1st I thought its a prank but then again..We shanky got too serious..I really got an attack there.....................

I wanna write sooo much n bore you with it 😆but My exam is there so have to study n itz 4am in India............

Sooooo by for now...

But it was awesome👏...................................................................................

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

congrats for the new thread...may u have many more...

n this is the best part...

loved AR scene on the airport...it was sooo superb...

beautifully written...

n the prank they played....omg....i couldnt stop laughing loud...

i was thinking might be some prank....or shanky really stood so low...

but them bang...wat a master plan...

im soooo sooo happy....that shanky accept their relationship...

n is happy on his daughters choice...

n wat amazing surprise they got....

engaged....woowwww along wid armi - rids...even im on cloud 9....

thnx alot for the lovely update........

muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for this....

thnx for the pm...........

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

HOLY MOLY :| That update TRULY was W.T.F. :| :| :| :| :| I honestly had no idea that was in store for us LOL as if I didn't already love you enough I love you even more after this update :| I honestly react to everything in your ff like I used to with real DMG while watching it LOL. During this update I was all smiley LOL I was grinning like a fool. First off the whole airport scene was to die for man. It was so endearing and cuteeeeee. Riddhima was just too adorable I love how she refused to let go off of him so unlike her but I was loving it. And an embarrassed Armaan was ROFL I loved him and his reaction to Riddhima's PDA. Especially this part - Armaan didn't know what to do as he blushed in embarrassment at the attention they were gathering.. "She.. Uh.. loves me too much.."

AHHH I loved how the whole parting scene was showed <3 </3 I could picture KSG and Jen (the only Riddhima for me) so vividly with this part :| actually in all parts it was like I was watching them. I can see how you put in a lot of to keep the essence of AR alive especially in this update. Um btw this has to be my most favorite part ever! It was a nice combination of cuteness and sadness :( He walked a few paces and turned as a stopped.. , "I don't want to go Riddhima..", he said his voice shaking a little.. This is gonna sound crazy but I could actually almost hear KSG say those words LOL.

"Dr. Mallik.. You were right.. Meri beti ko apne jaal mein fasakar aapne bohot badi galti ki.. Kyunki ab aapko meri ziddi beti ke saath mujhe bhi jhelna padega.. Welcome to the family son.." AND THAT WAS MUSIC TO MY EARS :| Ahhh I didn't realize how much I was looking forward to this approval of Shanky until I read it LOL Let me just tell you, you made me love Shashank Gupta :| which is next to impossible ROFL

Ok so the next part that comes after the amazing realization speech by Shanky reminded me so much of Roka of KaJen :| And he didn't even realize when Dr. Shashank took him in an embrace.. He hugged him tight and let out his tears as everyone watched a father and his son finally reconcile.. Riddhima saw that sight, Armaan and her papa hugging each other, and her tears just flowed out.. I so pictured the scene where Shashank hugged a crying Armaan and Riddhima was looking at her dad and love hugging sigh I loved that scene then and loved it now too :) I seriously got a fuzzy feeling inside reading that scene LOL

"He said I am the best Riddhima.. Did you hear that.. He said..", he was laughing and crying at the same time as he took her face to tell this to her.. That scene was so aw and choochie coo for me LOL I could so imagine a proud Armaan hugging Riddhima and realizing that all is really well :| Ah reading that made me so happy LOL It's too cute for words <3

Last but not least - All their friends and family clapped and hooted as they were nudged forward for the official ring ceremony.. This was much more than they had bargained for.. As they looked at each other, wide-eyed in shock, only one expression was visible on both their faces.. W*F!! That part really did make me go W*F like them as well :| I was so not expecting an engagement but that was an amazing surprise and I absolutely loved it.

You ended the part at such a cute and important moment that it makes me want an update ASAP LOL But as always take your time because you already update fast as it is and not just that you write WAY more than I have seen anyone else do so seriously props to ya <3 Waiting for more and BTW sorry for such a LONG comment but your update was too amazing and I couldn't stop myself LOL

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DMG fan

@DMG fan

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Nice update....but after such detailed parts earlier this one came on a fast track...not complaing....happy times are always welcome but just what I felt. Ab thoda kuchikooing ho jaye!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh DAYUM....youre titleee trulyy describes all the emotions this part has ;)

Buttt overall..I JUST LOVED IT!

Though throughout i was likee..W*F...:|...are you furr reall :|...what a MAHA twist..but i guesss end bhala...to sab bhala..haha...okayy ill stop with my messed up hindi!

But really well written zaappy :D...

Glad that Shanky finally agreeed...though i had a feeling this wuld have happened sooner or a later..and AR are obviously just so meant to be <3 hayyee!

and about the beginning..LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDD ITTT!

i could totally imagine riddhima running to armaan and almost falling over him...i reminded of the ending of jaane tu ya jaane na..;)...

niceee part over all...and looking forward to the next part :D...when will you updateee....

and also..from next time im going to have to think of some newww comments for you...because im sure i bore you with my "LOVE IT"...or AWESOME..or NICE WORK..lol :D

But youre writing is just outt of a the world!

Mwah*

Tc..and update soon

devu

Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago