My Maaneet FF Part 8 updated Pg14 - Page 4

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just came across ur ff...........realy nice.
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Thanks guys! I have some uni work to do tonight and have lectures till 5pm tomorrow so i won't be able to update till tomorrow night! 🤢 so i will try and make it extra long to make up for today! 😃
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Awesome part dear
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hey its awesum👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...plzzzzz try to continue.....😊😊😊
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just read ur ff it was awseome luvd it i love maan and geet in this one 2 gd can u add me to ur pm list dont want to miss anything out
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Read ur FF.it's great.add me to ur pm list plz
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Part 6

Geet and Maan reach the hotel..."wooww what a beautiful hotel! Dadima looks after us so well na?" she looked around as she asked Maan. "I have to give it to dadima she has chosen a good hotel!" "Mr. Khurana we were just waiting for you please come we will show you to your ensuite" the manager of the hotel said. Maan nodded and passed his and Geet's suitcase to the bell boy and followed the manager. "here you go sir this is your room if you need anything please don't hesitate to ask..enjoy your stay." "thank you" Maan said as the manager let himself out. Maan turned to Geet "you like it?" "yes but..us 2 and..one bed" Geet hesitated. "So?" Maan looked unconcerned. "after we get married we will be sharing one bed no? So call this practicing..after all I didn't book this room dadima did!" "but Maan before wedding it doesn't feel right.." "Geet..are you planning on leaving me?" Maan put his hands on Geet's shoulders "No..what makes you say that?" "because if you are not then we are practically married anyway and if you are then I can arrange another.." Geet stopped Maan with her finger "We can work with one bed" Geet blushed "so where were we.." Maan pulled Geet into him "what do you mean where were we?" Geet looked confused. "back at home when it was just you and me..alone" Maan leaning his body into Geet his face inches away from Geet's. "someone will come" Geet says. "everytime someone will come someone will come trying to scare me..no one is going to come today! Just you and me" Maan brushed Geet's hair to one side to expose her bare neck Geet's eyes closed her body shivering from the touch of Maan's fingers. Geet manages to wriggle out of Maan's arms and runs behind a glass wall.."how long will you keep running Geet!" he said as he walked up to her...only a piece of glass separating them. "why..whats the rush!" she asked. They both lean forward into the glass their lips meeting for a few seconds. Geet pulls away leaving her lipstick mark on the glass and pulls a funny face before running into the bathroom. Maan smiled at himself and what just happened.."what are you doing Geet?" he yelled. "I'm freshening up I'm really hungry Maan let's go eat please!" Maan smiled "you eat too much Geet! Eat more and you'll become a elephant!" Maan laughed to himself. Geet opened the bathroom door "what did you say? Elephant? Have you forgotten I am eating for two! Do you want me to starve our child! No right?!" Geet said in a huff "our child.." Maan repeated. It was the first time Geet had referred the baby as theirs and not hers. "did I say something wrong?" Geet asked "you accept this baby as yours don't you? Geet said with misty eyes. "ofcourse I do Geet!" Maan said walking up to Geet "I will love this child like he or she is my own!" he placed his hand on Geet's stomach and looked her in the eye. "then lets go coz he or she is starving and me too!" she smiled. "let's go!" Maan said as he put his arm around Geet.

Maan stops the car outside a restaurant. Geet turns around and asks "where have you brought us?" "well last time when we went to a hotel it didn't go so well and your not a big continental fan either soo" "yes yes I know last time it went bad but it wasn't my fault ok!" "of course you can't do anything wrong!" Maan teased her. "Maan!" she said angrily "sorry baba! I've brought you to a small punjabi style dhaba after all my Geet likes places like these no?" "really! Even I was thinking where is this beautiful smell of sarso da saag and maki di roti was coming from!" Geet leaned over and gave Maan a kiss on his cheek and opened her car door not realising what she had done...Maan touched his cheek and smiled to himself "her courage is increasing..at this rate I won't need to do anything!" Geet and Maan enter the small restaurant and are seated to a table "such a cute place isn't it?" Geet asked Maan "just like you" he replied and watched her blush. "giving compliments is something people should learn from you!" she playfully slapped his hand. Waiter comes over to take their order "I'll have 4 rotis and palak paneer" Maan said "and I'll have 2 rotis..side of rice..daal..paneer...gobi.." Geet said as she looked through the menu "Geet don't you think that is a bit too much!" Maan asked Geet looked up and gave him the eyes "order order whatever you want eat eat!" Maan said and shut up. "and some yoghurt thank you!" Geet said and passed the menu. "I'll bring your food as soon as possible!" the waiter said and left. Not long after their food had arrived and they both digged in "Mmm what food!" Geet savoured every bite. "how is your palak paneer?" she asked Maan..he picked his spoon up "you tell me..try" and placed it in her mouth "it's good" she smiled. Once they were done the waiter returned to ask if the wanted any dessert. "I'm too full!" Maan said and looked to Geet.."I want something sweet!" Maan shocked at how much more she was going to eat! "No it's ok can we have the bill please!" Maan told the waiter and also saw Geet in a mood for not getting her dessert. Maan paid the bill and stood up reaching his hand out for Geet to hold..Geet looked up and ignored his offer and stood up without his help and walked towards the door Maan followed her thinking "I have some making up to do it seems!" Geet walked in the opposite direction to where the car was.."Geet where are you going? The car is here!" Maan said..Geet stopped and turned around.."I don't want to go with you! You don't listen to me so why should I listen to you! You go I'll back my own way back!" Maan put his hand on his forehead "This girl..she will never do anything the easy way!" Maan spotted a ice cream stall on the other side of the road and went over to it.."Can I have 2 kulfi's please'thank you!" He took the kulfi and started to run towards Geet.."Eh lo I said I'm going alone and he agreed he hasn't even stopped me!" Geet said to herself..before she felt someone nudge into her and watched an arm appear infront of her with a kulfi. She turned around to see Maan "For me?" She took it off of him and smiled'"You wanted something sweet no? I know if I didn't you would've made that face for the rest of the night!" Geet softly punched Maan on the chest.."Who's the other one for?" She pointed to the kulfi in Maan's hand.."Here..take this one too..you want more I'll just go and get few more..how many 5? 6?' He acted serious! "I was joking baba! You eat too!" She smiled as the walked hand in hand. Geet watched them walk past the car "Where are we going?" She asked.."The beach is just near by lets go for a walk! It's something else walking by the sea in the evening!" "Oh hoo this romantic?" Geet laughed "Shh you want to go or not?" "Let's go" She linked arms with Maan and rested her head on his shoulders as they walked along the sand. Maan found a perfect secluded spot on the beach where no-one was around and started a fire'he sat down and Geet sat down in between his legs.."It's so beautiful isn't it'the sunset..the calm sea" she said.."Hmmm it's even better with you here" Maan said and kissed her temple. "I wish everyday was like this" Geet said and Maan squeezed his arms tighter around her waist. "Marry me.." he whispered in her ear..shocked at what she heard she turned her head to look at him.."What?".. "Marry me'tomorrow here in Goa"..Maan looked at Geet waiting for her answer..


Edited by priya_uk89 - 14 years ago

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