My Maaneet FF Part 8 updated Pg14 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

Geet folds her arms and looks at Maan.."What were you saying? You don't want to go to Goa? And also what did you think that I didn't have the guts to tell dadima and I would agree with you? Don't forget Mr. Maan Singh Khurana..all this I have learnt from you" She said with a big cheeky smile on her face. "Fine you have learnt all this from me but I am still saying now that I am not going!" "You're not going?" She asked.."No" he replied "Final?" "Final final final understood!" He raised his voice. "For one minute pass your phone please I need to make a call.." "Why?" he looked confused.. "Maan you ask too many questions pass me your phone!" He slowly reached for his phone and Geet snatched it out of his hands..flicking through the phonebook.."Yes there it is!" she said as she found the number she was looking for and placed the phone on her ear...Maan wondering what she was playing at with his hands on his hips "Hello..? Romeo-ji" Geet spoke, Maan looked at Geet in shock as to why she was phoning Romeo.."Geet!" he said.."Shhh can you not see I am talking on the phone wait one minute!" Maan trying to take the phone off Geet , Geet places her finger on his lips "Ha so I was saying Romeo-ji that I am in a bit of a problem you see I'm going to Goa tonight but I have no one to go with.." She pulls a sad face whilst looking at Maan while his temperature rises "So I was wondering if…" She said as she bit her lip in a sexy way. Maan grabs the finger that was on his lips and twists Geet's arm to her back and grabs his phone with his other hand and cuts the call. "Ouch.." Geet yelled. "Don't you dare…to even imagine another guy in your company makes my blood boil! You're my fianc and if anyone is going to Goa with you then it's me and only me do you understand" "What's this? You just said now you don't want to go and now you want to go? Jealously is a very bad thing Maan..when did I ask Romeo to come? I could've been asking Romeo to ask Pinky since her number wasn't ringing!" Geet smirked knowing full on it was jealously that made Maan change his mind. "Jealous? And me?" Maan laughed.."You are forgetting that I am the owner of KC and I hire people to work for KC..have I ever to date hired anyone better looking than Maan Singh Khurana? No right? so why do I have to feel jealous?" Maan said with a serious face. "Ooh hoo, who are you Shahid Kapoor? That you are thinking you are sooo soo hot and soo soo sexy! KC have lots of good looking men!" Geet regretting the last bit she just said and bit her tongue. "Really?" Maan said as he brought himself ever so close to Geet.."like who?" "Err.." Geet hesistated.."Exactly..no-one because even you know that there is only me! No?" "There is no need to blow your own trumpet ok!" "So you agree?" He asked as he pushed her against his chest "Let me go.." she whispered as she turned her face to the side. "Dadima!" She shouted which made Maan let go of Geet. Geet laughed as dadima was nowhere to be seen and ran up the stairs. "Geeeet!" Maan said as he ran after her..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesomeee Updates! I'm loving this FanFic so far! So cute! I'm hoping I'm gonna get to read some romantic moments in Goa!
Update Soon!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh and please write longer updates! :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love ur ff
awesome updates
loved them all
con soon
plz add me to ur pm list
thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love it pls write longer next time pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved all the parts please post then next part soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4


"GEEET!" Maan shouted! "Where are you? come out now!" Maan said as he searched everywhere upstairs. "Enough with the hide and seek come out right now!" Maan went into the bathroom and wondered where she could be hiding and rested his hand on the shower tap, which accidently set it off. "AHHHHH!" He heard a scream "turn it off turn it off the water is cold!" Geet shouted as she pulled the shower curtain open. Maan stood and laughed, as Geet was completely soaked "See this is what happens when you take Maan Singh Khurana on! If you had answered my question you wouldn't have got wet! Also is this the only place you found to hide?" Geet looking not the slightest bit impressed grabbed hold of Maan's waistcoat and pulled him into the shower that was still running "Geet what are you doing!!!" "Why Mr.Sexy? Are you not fond of getting wet?" "Sexy huh? So you agree after all!" He says as he wraps his arm around Geet's waist.."And as far as getting wet it usually involves you!..Sea…Rain…Swimming Pool and now Shower can also be added to the list!" Geet has nothing to say in return and stares into Maan's big eyes…the cold water started to make Geet shiver and Maan was quick to notice and turned the tap off and wrapped a towel around Geet and took her into the bedroom.


Maan opened his wardrobe and gave Geet some of his clothes to get changed into.."What's this?" Geet asked..'Clothes! Whatelse! Get changed or you will fall ill then how will you go to Goa, dadima will think this was my fault and an excuse not to go!" "It was your fault! And I also think this is your idea of an excuse since you don't want to go!" "Geet stop arguing and get changed!" "Maan I can't wear these! I have to go back home and pack if Meera sees me in your clothes what will she think!" "Meera..you are worried about Meera..and what about your health? If you fall ill! What about that? I'm telling you last time Geet get changed or I will change you!' Maan stops realizing the last part wasn't suppose to come out! "There is no need for that thank you! I am not a small child!" "Sometimes it feels like you are" Maan whispered.."What did you say?" Geet said shocked! "Nothing..clothes..now!" Maan said as he grabbed some clothes for himself and went into the bathroom to get changed. Geet looked at the clothes Maan gave her "Eh lo look what kind of clothes he has given me! How do I go downstairs in this or even outside! Hay babaji!" Maan fully dressed calls Geet's name.."Geet..are you dressed?" "Yes its ok to come out!" she replied. Maan walked out and looked at Geet and covered his mouth to stop him from laughing as Geet was stood before him with her hands firmly on the trousers she was wearing to stop them from falling down as they were too big for her. "How can I go outside like this??' Look!" She said as she let go of her trousers and Maan watched them fall to the ground to watch Geet quickly pull them up again. "Next time you'll know not to hide in the shower!" Maan said as he slowly walked up to Geet and she walked backwards.."If you hadn't chased me this wouldn't of happened.." "But you wanted me to come after you didn't you" Maan asked as he got closer and Geet again let go of the trousers and tripped backwards onto the bed..Maan climbed on top.."tell me Geet ? you like it when I run around after you like a idiot" "No..it's not that..I…" Drops of water from Maan's hair fall onto Geet's cheek.."Let me go..someone will come!" Geet hesitates.."This is my bedroom and no-one comes in without my permission!" Maan tells Geet as he leans forward to a point where their noses are touching.. "I need to go and pack.." "There is plenty of time for that..for now it's just you and me..you said yourself didn't you that I should give you some of my time so here I am.." "I didn't mean it like that..i.." "What did you mean then huh?" Maan said as he kissed Geet's forehead..then her eyelids which remained closed as he kissed her cheek her breathing getting faster her lips trembling waiting for what was about to come..Maan's lips centimetres away from Geet's.


**Knock knock** "Maan beta??" Dadima called from the other side of the door.. Geet's eyes opened "Dadiima!" she pushed Maan off of her as he rolled onto the other side of the bed. "What shall I do now!" She stood up and pulled her trousers up again! "Why are you in tension for no reason it's only dadima!" Maan too got up off the bed. "Maan beta? Are you in here? What's taking you so long?" "I'm coming dadima!" Maan went and opened the door with a confused dadima infront of him.."Maan beta you only just had a shower before breakfast?! Again?" "No dadima Geet had a bit of an accident so we kind of got wet that's why!" Dadima walked in and saw Geet and what she was wearing and too started to laugh.."Maan what have you made Geet wear! Look at her! She looks like a child who is wearing her parents clothes!' Geet highly embarrassed doesn't know where to look or what to say! "Geet beta come with me I'm sure I have something that is slightly better than this! You too Maan are something else! Looks like Geet's clothes have to be shifted here asap..you know..incase of any more "accidents!"" Geet and Maan's face both bright red, Dadima takes Geet's hand and takes her to her room while her other hand is firmly tight on her trousers and gives Maan evil eyes as she walks out and whispers "Just wait!" Maan smiles at her in return. "Dadima stopped us Geet but who's gonna stop us in Goa"

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Update..loving the FF..
This was Beautiful...
Loved the maaneet moments..
Hehe i can imaging geet in maan's clothes..lol
So sweet.Loved the update..
Please continues soon and Thanks for the Pm!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh pls cont i love each part it so funny when Geet wear Maan cloth pls cont soonnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice FF. ....please update next part

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