My Maaneet FF Part 8 updated Pg14 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ff...please post the next part soon....
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awsome..love it..
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Geet arrives back at Meera's house and places her wet clothes and bag on the side. "Oh Geet your back come I was just making some lunch" Geet heard Meera from the kitchen..Meera walks out "Geet…why is your hair wet? It's such a lovely day outside and why are you wearing such an old fashioned suit?" "Actually Meera I had a bit of an accident it doesn't matter I need to pack.." "Pack?" Meera looked confused "Why pack? Where are you going?" "Actually dadima is sending us to Goa for a few days!" "Us?" "Yes me and DD!" Meera laughed, "After the wedding are you still going to call him DD?" Geet nodded "You being wet must definitely be his doing and that suit come to think of it has dadima written all over it!" "This was the better option!" Geet looked at what she was wearing.."You should've seen what DD was making me wear!" "No doubt what he wears all the time? all his clothes are same to same in different colours!" Meera laughed again. "Meera! Only I can joke about my DD!" She said with a stern look! "Oooohhh my DD huh? Has Dusht Dhanav finally become Dhak Dhak for you too?" "Meeeera!!" Geet yelled " Sorry baba no more joking OK?" "I best go and pack! If I am late then..you know his anger!" "Who doesn't know after all he is Maan Singh Khuranaaa!" Meera laughed as she walked into the living area.

"What to pack??? Which suits shall I take??" Geet asked herself…"Red suit definitely my favourite.." She then picked up her white suit and smiled to herself "White suit…unka favourite!" She thinks about all the good times they shared when she wore white..she snapped out of it and talked to herself.. "What are you doing Geet? Always thinking about him, whether it's suit or roses or coffee! Seriously you have gone mad!" Geet looked at the clock…"Look all this thinking is making me late!" Geet picked up a few more suits and threw it all in the suitcase. "Geeet! MK on the phone!" Geet heard Meera yell.."See I bet he has phoned to ask where I am..and if I ever do anything on time! Maybe if he stopped coming into my mind I would be able to!" "Geeet are you coming??" Meera yelled again.. "I'm coming I'm coming!" Geet yelled as she left her room "Has he got nothing else to do but phone all the time" she asked Meera whilst taking the phone off him..Maan hears what she says and puts the phone down.."Hello?...Hello?" Geet repeats "Fantastic..he's not even on the line now I'll have to phone him!" Maan's phone goes off and looks at it…"Geet..not bad..quick phoneback!" he tells himself. "Hello?" Maan says.. "You phoned?" Geet replied.."Phone? I didn't phone." "You just phoned now Meera said so!" "Why don't you just say Geet that you were thinking of me that's why you phoned!" Maan smiled. "Who said I was thinking of you?? I wasn't thinking of you I was busy packing" Geet knowing full on she was lying about not thinking of him.."and obviously you have packed the white suit.." Maan said romantically.."White? Why would I pack the white suit I don't like white I like red you know that!" "But I like white no?" "If you like white you wear white na why should i? I'm only going to wear the colours I like!" "Don't lie..." "Why would I lie? Anyway why did you phone?" "I'm coming in half hour be ready!" Maan said in haste and put the phone down.."Ok.." Geet said after he put the phone down "He too never listens completely before cutting off!" Geet puts the phone down in a huff.

Geet sat in the living room waiting for Maan looks at the clock.."He's half hour late..where is he?" She asks herself.."How is Mr.On Time late today..something is definitely up.." The door bell goes and Geet walks up and opens the door.."Ready?" Maan asks.."Ready? That's the first thing you say?" Geet asks angrily.."What else should I say..? Hello? Maan looks confused.."How about sorry?" "Huh? Sorry? What for? What have I done? Geet grabs his arm and points to his watch.."half hour late! Where were you? Do you know how worried I was!" "Ohhh sorry for that? Ok sorry..actually I bumped into a friend I hadn't seen her for years.." Maan started explaining.."Her? Friend?" Geet asked.."Who is this friend?" "Her name is Julie she was amazing I tell you and after all these years WOW! Same to same!" Maan smiled. "Julie? Then go to your Julie I don't want to go to Goa give my ticket to her!" Geet turns to shut the door but Maan stops it in time and brings his other hand forward which was hiding a rose.."Someone told me jealously is not a good thing.." he smiled.."I was late because I was trying to find the perfect single rose to give to you.."..Geet blushed "For me?" …"No for Julie!" Maan said as Geet hit him in the chest playfully. "Don't you dare take the name of another woman!" Maan pulled her towards him and hugged her. "I could never think to do such thing!" Meera walks past and sees them in a long embrace and pretends to cough.."aren't you both getting late for your flight?" Maan opens his eyes and lets his arms around Geet loose "Err yes we best go..Geet you go to the car I'll bring your suitcase.." "Have fun!" Meera smiled as she shut the door after waving them goodbye.

Geet sat in the car with Maan.."I'm so excited I've always wanted to go to Goa..the sea so blue the sand so white! And my first time on a plane too!" Maan smiled to see how excited Geet was "If you get any more excited you'll burst like a balloon!" "Yes yes I know you won't know the meaning of excitement..karoos!" Geet whispered "Geeet!" Maan said knowing what she said.."oh and another thing if I see you on the phone regarding work I'll be on the next plane back home and you can explain to dadima why! I'm telling you now then don't say afterwards that I didn't warn you!" Geet said and folded her arms…"Trust me you have nothing but my undivided attention..all day..all night!" Maan smirked.."All day is enough.." Geet blushed.."All night is also free..take it!" Maan said as he rubbed his cheek against hers.."Maan! Behave!" She said as she play slapped him.

Maan and Geet arrive at the airport and check themselves and their luggage through..time had nearly come to board the plane "Woooow all these planes!" Geet looked around. Maan and Geet both get on their plane and are showed their first class seats the plane ready to take off the excitement finally wears off and nerves kick in..Maan can see the nerves in Geet and holds her hand.."It's a short flight you'll be fine there's nothing to worry about..I'm here no?".."Why? do you know how to fly a plane if something goes wrong?" "No that's not what I mean.." "Then how does you being here going to help!" "Geeet deep breaths!" Geet closes her eyes and repeats babaji's name! The excitement and nerves of flying wears Geet out and she falls asleep with her head resting on Maan shoulders and he rests his head on hers and smiles.."What has she done to me.." He asks himself.. as he runs his fingers through her hair.."all of a sudden life would seem incomplete without her..Maan ki Geet..|"

Few hours passed by and Maan and Geet land in Goa.."Geet.." Maan slowly woke her up.."look we're here.." "already?" Geet asked whilst opening her heavy eyes. "Welcome to Goa.." Maan smiled..Geet looked out of the window and turned her head to smile back "Yaay!!"


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow what funny marvelous update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love the Update....aww so cute lol geet jealous...hehe
Maan soo sweet he brought rose for her..Wow goa trip..waiting for it
Thanks for the pm and continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks guys! It's my first time writing a fic so please bare with me lol. Your feedback is much appreciated!

It's 5am here in the UK so i am gonna go to sleep for now! maybe i'll dream about what happens in Goa because for now even i don't know what is gonna happen haha!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice updates yaar...do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just came across ur ff...........realy nice.
plz add me to ur pm list....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome updates
loved them both
geet jealous
aww maan brought roses for her
can't wait to see what happens in Goa
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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like it bit different . pm me too when update ....thanks

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