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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy Ashley
omgg those were 3 fab updates!!👏....and woahh, soo much happened in each!
this shuriya is married to NT?😡...hmmm i have a feeling riddhima had something to do with this since she seems to lovee NT wayy too much and anyone who lovess NT surely has to have some issues rite?😆
aww geet is soo stressed out...i really loved her notes idea...it was shoo cute just like her!😳...and made maan smile as well😉....i still feel a maaneet confrontation is pending cuz each one doesn't understand the depth of the other's lovee!😳....i want maan to learn how geet is confronting shuriya in her own wayy and i really want her to show all of them she can fight this and win too!!
pweez do continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh ash u said u ending this ff but y ???i dnt even find maaneet relation strong here ...smething is definet;y missing ..i mean maan expects her to thnk mature ..act mature ..par geet doesnt live up 2 it ....shauriya poisoning geets mind ..nd i guess hes suceeding in it ....i want maaneet relation 2 b more strong .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
make sure its a happy ending when you end it! lol
hate this shauriya! he's gonna create a MU b/w maaneet!
and sam..hmm she needs to get out of their life too lol
con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
please let her tell maan everything happense between her and kashab i hate the misunderstandings and the lost that cost after it, alrealy sam and kashab gone though it so please not geet and maan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the ending part..... maan and geet together ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry a bit late...... amazing update as usual... hadnt expected how Geet stood up to Kashab!! a verry pleasant surprise and very in character... it was exciting to imagine their fiery interaction😃

God!! I lovedd it... build on it if you can.. geet might be the one to bring him down a peg or two...
and Maan, too bad he thinks her love aint strong enuff..

would love to see Geet slowly stand up to the 'spoilt brat'😳.... he needs to learn a lot about her, where as she is quite perceptive and sharp, more so than him ... but its an amazing contrast...

you are damn good at building characters and plot lines.. keep at it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Disclaimer: I am not creator of the characters but everything pertaining the work is mine and mine alone.

Part 43


Maan looked at geet who was quietly eating her breakfast. Why isn't she saying anything?he had rarely seen her this quiet.


Maan,''geet.''


geet,''hmmm.''


maan,''what's wrong?.''


geet surprised looked up at him,''wrong,nothing is wrong.''


maan,''then why are you so quiet?''


geet,''i am just not in the mood to talk. You want more coffee?''


maan,'' no,any roblem at office?''


geet,''i am getting late for work, I will talk to you about it later. bye'' she got up and went out of dining room,leaving a very surprised maan behind. She was acting so distant, what had happened?

Yesterday,he had been so happy,since they got back,it was the first time, he had cheered up and then this. He threw his napkin on table and got up. She sais, she will tell me tonight. Another thought popped up in his mind, what if something else had happened and geet was not telling him again.

He called one of his trusted employee at hotel who had informed dad about take over and asked him

to come to his flat.


...Geet at office...


geet sat in her office, not doing anything, shuriya's words were like a chant in her head. Who was right and who was wrong in this whole mess. Sam was still cozy with maan, she had seen them hugging countless time, but ignored it because she believed maan.


But they were a couple before and maan had admitted to it. How was it possible to be simply friends after it was over. Who had ended that part of their relation in truth? Sam or maan. She hated herself for thinking about maan like this but she could n't stop.


Finally, she gave herself a mental shake and got the project file out and started to memorize the names of people who will be working with her. She will need to set up a meeting with them...


...Maan flat...


after he was gone, Maan went out to balconey, he was not hurt thhis time, he was getting used to geet not telling him anything. But that was not important, what was important, that geet had signed up to head the project, if anything went wrong, she would be the one responsible. He will not be able to help her but no..he made a resolution to himself, I will not let anything to go wrong, this time he will not shout, this time he will only think about her, she will do this project properly because the alternative was worse than geet could ever imagine.


...shuriya...


he finalized the details for everything. Then, told his most trusted aide, ''I don't want any foul play, let her do this in harmony.''


his aide was surprised for a moment,''what if she pulled this off?''


shuriya,''then, that will be the proof that she really can do this job, keep an eye on important details and inform me of any changes.''


after he was gone,shauriya silently asked himself that why he was playing fair? The answer was she was innocent in all this and she had courage which he admired in a human being, he will give her a chance but will he let her win? He thought about it,yes she can win but maan , no he will lose, yes he will lose.


...Sameera...


she looked at the contract of new movie, she was going to do this year and closed the file. Her agent and producer both looked at her surprised, sam was supposed to sign but suddenly didn't want to do it. She was getting tired of the glamorous world. She tpld the producer that she need one more week. Since, she came back from london, she had changed, she wanted to go back and live with her own people. If not for shuriya's take over, she wouldn't have come back but may be when this problem was solved, she will goo back permanently.


...

A/N I am writing


Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey me first...........this was good.....but the story does not seem to move much further
liked it that shuriya is playing fair.........as his character is of a strong willed person....I really admired him for that
hope maan will help geet
update soon
Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
what actually happened btw suriya and sam?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: myedward12

what actually happened btw suriya and sam?

after 44, i will write it 😊

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