'We always have a choice!'-Maaneet Ch16, Pg28 - Page 23

Ok so I finished reading the FF today..... It is great.... it's amazing.... the first three chapters... I was like no that can't happen to her.... but the way u penned it down it was beautiful.... initially when she gave in n choose that as her profession I was like is she out of her mind... how can she just do that but as the story moved ahead the flow was beautiful... ok.... when they went to shimla I was like isn't it too early to take the relationship to a next level but then my doubt was cleared in the next part itself it was required for the story to move ahead.... u really have a way with words.... it was really very nice..... Looking forward to how the story goes.... 😊

nyc ff.................can u plz pm m????????

hey paloma
it took two hrs two read 16 chapters
lovely yaar
kind of diff
i liked ur ff
plse do update nex tpart
add me to ur pm list
thanx

hi

Hey,

please get them together... they do not deserve to be separated... and please knock some sense into Maan (she needs time to come out of the trauma that ate up about 6 months of her life making her think that men lust over feminine bodies) and get Geet realise she loves him and he loves her not like the other men she met...

Originally posted by: shining_moon

wen will u update??

Hopefully soon- been waiting for inspiration to strike! If anybody has any specific way that they would like the story to go, (other than getting them together) let me know;)
Paloma x

u could make it seem like tat maan found someone in landon and get tat person to come to make geet jealous. he promised himself tat he will not give relationship another chance so make him o with another women.

Originally posted by: wifey

u could make it seem like tat maan found someone in landon and get tat person to come to make geet jealous. he promised himself tat he will not give relationship another chance so make him o with another women.

Okay idea noted! X

how about maan takes over kc as geet's boss..............pledging to make her life hell..........geet taking up the challenge and giving him back.................😉