HELLLOOOO my lovely!!!!!!!! I had to paste this here too - ya know, to inspire the other naughty silent readers! 😉😆
I literally couldn't help it, so I'm here to say two things.
1. Sorry
and
2. Omg, you're an incredibly amazing writer.
Ok, this might be a lil baffling so be ready to here me out please 😳 😆
I began reading ur ff quite a long while ago, and although recently I haven't actually read the updates (I shall explain why later 😉), I JUST clicked on the FF section and saw "Paloma_D" as one of the latest commenters on an ff and was like.. omg! that's Paloma! as in Paloma who wrote (/is writing) that brilliant story! You know what, I'll probably annoy you now cos I have a lot to say but haven't got a clue what exactly to say or even how to really...
Shall we begin with the apology? Ok, So, I am SO SO
SO SORRY for not commenting earlier. I've been a silent reader of your freakin' outstandingly unique, insanely well written and immensely engrossing story and not once have I commented to give you your due. It's not fair on you that I've silently enjoyed your story without letting you know how much your work is appreciated and loved. HONESTLY, Very Very VERY so honestly, I was totally taken aback with the initial concept, but that's exactly what kept me reading in the beginning, because it was So very different. The emotions you depicted of both Maan and Geet, I HAVE to have you know were So very powerful. You've got sucha wonderful writing style that the impact of the sensitive issues in this, really hit right home. As well as the entire story, just a treat to read!
This is Such a beautiful and fantastic story I wouldn't know where to begin with what I love about it. Geet's horrid situation, the injustice that she suffered was just heartwrenching and made me feel awful and so angry at the whole situation! I hated Dev a million times more than I did in the show! And then how effortlessly you brought Maan to the scene... 😍 Paloma.............. 👏 you're a little creative genius aint ya! 😃 As soon as Maan came, you haven't a clue bout the rush of hope I was filled with 😆 and all the happy thoughts his presence made me feel. Not only that, but of course all the expected and hopeful Maaneet attraction that us Maaneetians look forward to was so amazingly brought into this as well. From when Maan first laid eyes on Geet - which btw, was sucha DIFFERENT scenario - once again hats off to you for sucha different concept in a Maneet FF 😃
where was I...? 😳 😆 er.. yeah..! well Everything you weaved together in this tale has been a deeeelight!! I remember reading some comments aaaages ago, I think something along the lines of Maaneet's first time happening sooner than expected.. Ok, I just have to say, I thought that was SUCH a "wow" part. I think it was a great choice so that you could move the story in the direction you were hoping to as well, and the depth of the bond they shared was already portrayed before, so I felt it was totally justified by previous moments in the story. Of course there was tonnnnssss of physical attraction in the part for it to occur, but then again it was a sign from Maan's side of wanting to make something of their relationship which I simply adored! and the depiction of the entire moment... omg ☺️ loved it!
As I said my lovely, I haven't managed to keep up with what you've written recently so all I know is that Geet wants to make something of herself now, and I totally look forward to getting back to this amazing story you've put out here!!!
Man.....!! aaaa its just so super awesome! Alsooo Alssooo, I gotta say, I used to read it on my phone, and that's why I never commented earlier, and I continuously read updates on my phone and then I suppose just got lazy to come find ya ff on my comp and give you a comment, which was evil right? so I'm sorrreeeee *kaan pakar ke maafi maang rahi hoon*! I haven't been reading much on my phone lately as I just pop onto IF on my comp more now.. and now that I've got hold of u, I can easily stroll by ur ff when I wanna 😉 😆
Your story is simply fabu-tastic!!! Keep it UP my lovely! Will be back with comments now that I've showed my face out here 😛 😆
Lotsa love, and so many gasps at the amazing work!!
Saz
xxxx
🤗
Edited by Chotii - 14 years ago
Celebrity Fan Clubs
Anupamaa
13