SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi.. love d concept...
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Chapter 1

Geet: looking news paper for job

Pari: what are you searching for ?

Geet: job

Pari: why?

Geet: i want to stand on feet

Pari; you can stand on your feet.. smiled

Geet: gave her an anger look

Pari: please help me Geet

Geet: where are you going ?

Pari: where you dont like to go

Geet: Pari be care full

Pari: dear you once join me you will enjoy

Geet: please let me stay away from such parties

Pari: uff kya larka hota ha..

Geet: i am not interested in guys

Pari: tell me how i am looking?

Geet: perfect..

Pari: will he look at me?

Geet: who?

Pari : i will tell you after i come back ..as she heard horn...

Geet: come before 12 as i hate to tell lies

Pari: please my sweet cover up ...kissed her cheek.

Geet: you will never...

Pari: bye bye see you later...

Geet: yeh larki ..walk to window saw her going with few girls .. she walk back open news paper...

a job "an old lady want's a full time attended "

Geet: lets try my luck here.. she cut the ad .. placed it with her Cv.

( NT, Dev, JAY & Pari are Maan friends none of them is married )

Maan at club sitting with nt . dev

Pari: oh sorry sorry i am late

Dev: why you are late?

Pari: oh my car..

Jai: smiled "your car"

Pari hit him with her elbow...

nt: what is today party for

Maan: i was feeling bore that why called you all.. took a sip from his glass

Jai: nice atmosphere looked around

nt: lets go on dance floor everyone

Maan: you all go i am sitting here...

Dev: buddy you always call us but u never dance

Maan: i like seeing my friends enjoying..

nt: pata nai iss ko kis ka intazaar ha

Maan: had a laughter .... i have two beautiful Girlfriend why i wait for some one.. hug both nt & Pari.

Jai: get up ladies ...he pull nt& pari..

Dev music on

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6IA3vqoiKNI[/YOUTUBE]

Tir kit dha na tir kit dhana
ti ti dha na Lets dance Pari & nt sing move around Maan seat..


Hai Muscular Hai Popular jay singSpectacular,He is a bachelor....
Papu ki gadi tez hai ....Dev pull him but he didn'tPapu kudiyon mein craze hai..Pari & nt force him to dance


Papu ki aankein light blue..
Papu dikhta hai angrezzz hai
Rado ki ghadi haathon mein Dev saw his watch..
Perfume Gucci wala... jay wink at Maan
Per Pappu cant dance sala
Haan Pappu naach nahi sakta.


Paida papu hua to kismatien chamaki .... rotated Maan between them self ..
Aur uske muh mein the Chandi Ki Chamchi... the pull him
Pappu ke paas hai paisa.. nt sing
Haathon ke mail ke jaisa... Pari
Pappu yaaro ka yaar hai.. they all made a circle
around Maan..

Maan: smiled ...

Dev: chalo na dance papu..

Maan: "you guys enjoy i am sitting here".he walk to the corner...

Jay: Pari & nt you both are of no use...

Pari: he is a special specie.

Nt: what ever we do he is never impressed saw Maan sitting at corner drinking.

Maan: walk to them ok buddies i have to leave ..

Dev: so early

Maan: Dadi will be worried..

Pari: it is only 12 abhi to party start huwai ha..

Maan: you guys enjoy it... walked out

At home

Maan: reached home he try to pass Dadi room quietly

Dadi: is paralyzed she is all the time on bed..."Maan"

Maan: oh SXXX..Yes dadi , why are you still awake ?

Dadi: where were you ?

Maan: in office meeting thi

Dadi: it is 12: 30 kon is meeting

Maan: sit next to her bed thi dadi

Dadi: phir jhoot ...

Maan: dadi

Dadi: hmmm ladies perfume .. meeting

Maan: hug her .. Dadi aap se Jhoot bolna impossible ha

Dadi: run fingers in his hairs..." i have given ad for an attendant please take interview "

Maan: For what?looked at her

Dadi: you are always busy i want someone to talk to me ..

Maan: oh..

Dadi: i asked you to get married but you always run from marriage

Maan: dadi let me enjoy life ... no shadi

Dadi: aap bhi na...

Maan: dadi sleep

Dadi: kissed his for head .. he hug her more tightly.. lay next to her ... slept..." mera beta "


To be cont .. sorry for late update i was having bad fever ... i hope you like the track.. do comment to tell me... i am surprised to see 100 readers for my new FF..

Eid mubarak..

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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
i love it magnificent part pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
excellent update naddiya
story line is awesome
and interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Nice update can't wait for them to meet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Hi,
Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!
Great going,
all the introduction.
Love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
awesome............ i loved it..
ohh so the add that Geet saw ws given by Maan's dadi....
it proves hw destiny brings two souls near..
pls update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
nads im loving this track... woooo.....so Geet going to work for dadi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
loved it yaar..hope ur flu had gone far away ..

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