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Posted: 14 years ago
When are you updating di??
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls pls pls update soon😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
why no updates today ?? wat happened ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read both part dear🤗, i just enjoyed they were as always excellent👏, aapne toh Maan ki band bajaadi😆, bechara Maan😳, but totally love it😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for no replies
Here goes replies on those which i didnt
Part 31
Geet was being despo
That was hell funny
Baapre Bachan ne 1st time Geet ko itna drool karwaya
Maan was feeling it difficult to control
Loved the way he used his brains in tht situation
Part 32
Geet will eat Maan alive wens eh will wake up paka
Liked Geet n Armaan talk
Geet shuldnt hav gone out on sunshine after she knew that weather isnt that well
Maan was hell nervous
He did that to save her par Geet
Lets c wat will her reaction be
Part 33
Geet is so fab
Her line hum nage pange kya kar rahe hai was the best
She was tempting Maan
The way she was doubting on him than herself was fab
Geet is mind blowing
Her reason was sho simple yet sweet
Maan is really becuming pagal staying wit her
Part 34
Prem toh gadh badh kardi yaar
Geet always takes thgs wrong
She paka pagal
Loved Maan's acre n they way he made her clam was fab
He is so caring jus love him
Part 35
Prem to phas gaya
Prem ke chakar mein Maaneet bhi phas gaye
Prem was really in mess but liked that Geet solved all thgs
Both Maan n Geet knws each other very well
Her sms was sho cute
Love them to the core
Part 36
Geet ki dream toh haaye
N watevr she dreamt the words were said by Maan
Geet ne apne hi dad ka nuksan karwa diya
He always books the whole thsg for her not jus mere one thg
Loved the intensity of words whch Maan said
Hop Geet is sure of wat she is doing
Part 37
Im laughinh lik manics
She kept pet dogs name Maan because she hates MSK but indirectly loves him
Maan ke toh hosh wosh saab kuch udgaya wo saab sunkar
Loved Maan's possessiveness
Geet really cant c him in pain
Loved their bond
It was fab Muski
Love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
wht hapnd yar... y no updates today..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi di... No update today???? Please update soon na... Please... Im waiting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi di...as i promised...i am replying to every ud of yours...!!here u go!!😊😳
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Part 31

geet hand drop off the rim seeing him topless. all his curves were perfectly tonned
and the cuvers were prominent. geet looked away feeling odd at her thoughts wandering
wrong directions. geet mumers what is wrong with u, yeh bachan hain
maan took a long ride around the field & came close to her & offered his hand
geet looked at him with her jaw droped open. the sunlight was making his sweaty skin glow in a muscline flavour,

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glad to see geet fall for maan….loved it…so much especially geet drooling over him seeing him shirtless…!!

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Part 32

he shied in relief and burried his head in her neck, her whole body jolt in reaction as he
he deepened his touch. he was so happy to feel the life back in her, a tear roll down his eyes feeling her cold & but now warmer body.

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Well what to say about this part…I am speechless…I especially quoted the last lines coz…I really really liked how much maan cared for her…and how he sighed in relief hugging her…aww…dreamy!!

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Part 33

Well there r two fav scenes of mine in this part:

1)geet tensed scared in low voice - did u rape me
maan smiled at her innocence - nahi
geet - phir hum dono nage - pange KYA KAR RAHE HAIN...
screaming mummy daddy ka game khel rahen hain,

That was hilarious…!!i was rofling!!

2) geet - kuch deehka
maan smiled wickedly
geet mumers phir bhi kuch nahi kiya...she looks at herself..teehk hi tu lagthi hoon

Geet…only you can think this way!!

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Part 34

Well..i always liked prem.but in this update..i kinda didn't like him…!

And loved geet's reaction!!

That was unexpected…but maan handled her well..!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 35

My fav scenes…!!

1)maan was shocked - geet woh mera jhota hain
geet - tum nage-pange mera saat so sakte ho aur main tumhara joda bhi nahi pee sakti
2) maan mumered aab ise kaise samjhavoo ki I was lost in her touch thats why had to leave
to control myself

3) prem - and u believed him?
maan looked at her folding the paper slightly
geet - I believe his believe
and she looked at him
maan covered his face behind the paper & smiled pagali hain
geet smsed maan - I love that smile of urs

Part 36

Iss ud mein tho…ab mein kya bolu..i really loved it…!! Really really loved it to the core…it was really natural…!!

1) it was a different world whole togather
she wanted to fall in love with that unknown some one made for her
she hugged the pillow tight close to her feeling around her
whole of sudden she could feel the warmth embracing her, it felt heavenly magical
she shied with her thought of being with him. their closeness, how it would be
will be understand me..actually toda muskil hain, lekin he better
will I be able to undersatnd him, I am sure I will be able to I am good at understanding
guys, but he should be different, ek daam alag, khaas, sirf mera aur main sirf uski
jiski har subha mujhese hoti ho aur har shaam mujhe pe khatam, uska har pal
har lamha sirf mera naam ho, thoda muskil hain, aise to woh koi job pe nahi ja sakta
she giggled to herself, na jayee bus mera saat rahen, kanha ho tum
kab milloge mujhe, how will I know it is you. I love u so much... she felt
so shy saying those words

and the second scene tho awesome!! Especially maan's words…!!

2) maan held her hand firmly - I believe in holding hands for ever
mujhe haat pakadke phir chodna aacha nahi lagta
she losens her grip seeing the intensity in his eyes
maan - himaat hain to hamesha ke liya pakado
geet hardens her grip & covers their grip with the other hand - lo pakad liya
and smiled

part 37

1)geet - will u be able to dance?
maan - lets see that with a sarcastic smile

ha ha maan…lets show…serious types wale bhi bahut acha dance kar sakthey hain!!😆

2)geet - ek min, love u maan ummanh & locks her door
maan dead...falls on his bed..thud
geet - haan bolo
maan trying to get out of those words
geet - HELLOW!!
maan softly - umm
geet - BACHAN
that came like a tight slap
maan snaps out - woh maan sab kya tha????
geet - raji ka pet doggy

maan - and u named him MAAN

geet…u r awesome…!! Future mein jab tumhari shadi hogi…n u call maan…who will respond first?😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
as i promised,i've replied to your uds now its ur turn to come with a nice..(ahem ahem mein kya bol rahi hun...u'll always come up with nice updates na😆),long updates...!! jaldi!!
am missing ur updates so much!!

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