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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats Muskaan....third thread....Gr8 goin...keep writing!!!!Plz give us another update!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrates 4 nw thread! Plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey muski ......pls update..we r waiting eagerly for next part and pls make it a long one.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats :) when is the update????Waiting!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the new thread.

update soon yaar

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Posted: 14 years ago
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🥳🥳🥳🥳
Congrats Muskiii.........
🥳🥳🥳🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratessssssssss whn r u updating di
plzzzzzzzzz update fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats Muskaan ji👏, all ur ff's bcom soo popular🥳, so happy for you🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

-truly magical-
part 31

geet was lost looking at the horses, maan came & stood close to her.
the trainer was trying to tame one of the wild white horse
maan introduced her to the horses from a distance pointing at them
that brown wala he is toofan..kaun sa woh dark browm ..umm
that black one is really cool bhut aacha hain, german bread hain
geet - uska naam kya hain
maan - badsha she smiled
maan - this white one she is my fav...
geet - trainer jise pakad ko try kar raha hain
maan - umm...
geet - what is her name
maan - sunshine
geet - kitni wild hain
maan - wild hain, lekin use sirf main kaboo kar sakta hoon
waise bhi jungli mezaz mujhe bhut pasand hain
geet smiled
maan rested his left hand on the rim & jumped into the field
he took the saddle & walked close to her..pats her face & kisses her
she snaps making a neigh. geet giggled
trainer - sahaab aaj iska mode kharab hain
maan - its ok.. u leave let me
he tries to put the saddle she refuses to abide. maan tries again
she pushes him off. maan gets up in anger & pulls the belt & manages to set the
saddle on her back. geet keeps watching resting her hand on the rim supporting her chin
he tries to get on & he falls on the ground & his shirt gets muddy
he removes his shirt & climbs on her in one quick jump..

geet hand drop off the rim seeing him topless. all his curves were perfectly tonned
and the cuvers were prominent. geet looked away feeling odd at her thoughts wandering
wrong directions. geet mumers what is wrong with u, yeh bachan hain
maan took a long ride around the field & came close to her & offered his hand
geet looked at him with her jaw droped open. the sunlight was making his sweaty skin glow in a muscline flavour,
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YdjM2AXgE8w[/YOUTUBE]
she couldnot resist the offer. she rested her leg on the
saddle & joined him in front. maans sweaty arms slide beside her waist
to hold the belt. maan - try holding it he offers
geet could think straight with his bare chest rubbing her back and his
musculine scent envolping her, she was seeing stars with the cradle like motion
maan - pakdo tho
geet snapped out - kise
maan - hold this
geet - umm her finger were shivering to touch his , electrifying it was
maan explains - if u pull this one, she will turn left, & this one she will turn right
stop karne ke liya softly pull this
...now his hand embraces her tight into him
she takes a deep breath & turns to see his face, his neck line & his straight jaw line
at her eyes level, sweat mixed in mud flows from his temple to her shoulder...she could feel all her senses rushing to that one droplet
maan - aage deehko
geet mumers yeh bachan ko bhi kapde uttar ne ka itna shock hain uff!!!
mera chritra par hi sawal utt raha hain...she looks in front & closes her eyes
did'nt really seem to help, she was getting drawn into his thoughts
his legs caresses hers...maan - u could lightly pat her with the leg
he increases the speed & says hold on tight & as sunshine jumps over the huddle one after the other, geet falls on him & almost losing herself and regains her senses when they lean foward
his weight pressing her back, his cheeks rubbing hers & his chin resting on her shoulder
geet shouts - mera horse ridding hogaya mujhe neeche uttaro
maan pulled the belt & the horse stopped she tried getting off but was finding
it difficult. maan - ek min, he gets off & helps her get down
maan calls the trainer to take sunshine inside
geet did'nt wait for him, she kept walking restlessly
maan - what happened
geet snapped - nothing kept walking faster
maan ran behind her - abhi tak to sab teehk tha aab kya huwa
geet - kuch nahi leave me alone
maan puts his hand in front of her, she pushes it off
maan - kya baat hain, kyun naraz ho rahi ho, maine kuch galat kiya ka
geet looks away - woh main
maan comes infront of her really close lifts her chin
she looks up..her gaze passing over ever ripple from his waist to his adams apple
she closes her eyes babaji - aap pehle shirt peheniyan, phir mujhse baat kijiyen
maan smiled realizing her discomfart. he walked into his room
wore his t-shirt & came out. she sat in the couch in the hall trying to reach prem
prem - on my way dear
geet - when will u reach
prem - not sure lagta hain shaam hojayega
geet - arrey yaar tum log ne sachi main pura mera plan karab kar diya
prem - nahi sweety we are on our way back
geet - we
prem - mukti is with me
geet - she is also joining us
prem - nahi nahi..NO WAYS
geet - shut up...use bura lagega
prem - as if I care
geet - very bad
prem - woh to main hoon
geet - bye

maan comes down the steps, geet looks at him, her eyes fall on his v-shaped neck exposing
his chest & she looks away, geet jhali yeh bachan hain..tu use pe kyun drool kar rahi hain
meri galati nahi hain, unhone aise shirtless mera samne ghoome ge to, bichari kanwari
ladaki kya karegi. geet aab tu chup kar...u r behaving like a despo
she takes a long deep breat & smiles at him
maan - when is prem reaching
geet - he is runnung late, he going to drop mukti
maan - uski Gf hain kya
geet - no ways, bikul uske type ki nahi hain, seedhi sadhi types, aapki types
maan rolled his eyes
geet - seriously sati savitari types hain
maan - mujhe to lagta hain, they are perfect togather, like us
geet - LIKE US right.. u have'nt even met either of them..phir bhi
you have to give ur vishshast tipani
caretaker - saab lunch ready hain
maan - umm
they have lunch & settle to watch TV on the sofa
she gets lost in the movie, he kept checking his mails
after an hour or so geet lies on the couch. he moves away to make more space for her
she pulls him back & rests her head on his lap side ways, laughing & rolling over the movie
he finds it impossible to control himself. he tried to look into the mail...
he was reading the same subject line at least 20 times still it did'nt make sence to him
he puts the laptop aside & moves his hand close to her forehead lost in her
leaning forward, geet suddenly looks at him narrowing her eyebrows looking at his
hand & him approaching her face - yeh kya kar rahe ho?
maan cleares his throat & rests his hand on her forehead - u still seem to have fever
medicin kha loo
, & gets up straighting himself to get her medicin & gets a spread to cover her
geet waits for him to sit back & gets back to her old position
she finishes the movie and dosses off. he slowly rests her head on the couch &
goes to his room & starts working lieing on his bed.

precap
geet missing😲

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
will read first
Loved it... Geet..Bechari... Seems to be getting naughty..😉😆😆😆😉😳
Geet... dont worry ya... Meri bhi halat aise hi hoti hai Maan ko dekh k😳😳
Loved that part... 😆😆
& Prem I guess will be busy wid Mukti... So farm house pahunchne ka sawal hi nahi hai..
yani ki Maaneet.... "Hum tum ek kamre main ho sequence"""...😳😳😳
Par nahi... kahani main twist... 😕😕😕
Hamari pyari Geet gayab...😲😲😲
OH MY... Where did she go now😡
Please update soon dear...😊😊
Congrats on ur third thread...👏👏
Edited by Tressa - 14 years ago

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