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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum!! as alwayss
woow so finally at the farmhouse and maan is tryin to ride sunshineee awww soo cutee
andddd geet drroolin at maan shirtless hehe awww all the girls wud feel like geet if maan was near us hehehe it wasss awesumm scenee and prem n mukti togetherr so cuteee
oooo geets missin bless maan will get tensedd
cnt wait continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was awsome loved it I was getting goose biumps the precap is intresting update soon thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Congrats Muski dear...!!!!

Wonderful update...😳😳😳😃😃😃😃
kiya describtion tha...!!!😆😆😆😆
Maan bhi unconfrontable hai Geet bhi...!!😃😃😃😃
Bachri appne app ko sahamal nahi parahi..>!!!😆😆😆 kis kerti Maan Singh Khurana jo hai...!!!😉😉😉
Opps ...where is Geet gone...!!!😕
cont soon...!!!😳
Luv u...!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet becoming restless hah???wat to do????how can even think of controlling herself seeing maan topless???😉😈 well,i loved d update....i always hv a fascination about horses,n u included them...m glad...
i think prem will not b able to reach at time,so,its some private moments b/w maneet...i hope....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.....geet's lusting on maan's looks....:P:P


superb....continue ASAP!!!


n congratz for new thread!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 32

geet wakes up at around 6pm & streches herself
calls prem there was no respond...it was getting cloudy outside...
she tried calling prem again getting worried..she then called armaan & checked with him
armaan - sorry yaar kuch emergency hain
geet - i understand dear
armaan - how is it there
geet - it is a huge place bahut maza aaraha hain, maine horse ridding bhi ki, lekin prem nahi aaya abhi tak
armaan - weather forecast kuch teehk nahi hain
geet - kyun kya huwa
armaan - expecting heavy rain & storm
geet walking out to the field - umm..sky is looking dense hear
armaan - how is ur fever now
geet - teehk hain, bachan ne medicin khila khila ke pura moo ka taste kharan kar diya
armaan - moo ka taste change ho gaya?
geet - its all bitter bitter
armaan - be careful, looks like u are still not feeing well, aur aapna temparature check kar.
geet - mujhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hain, mera full time dr haina, he just
does'nt leave me
armaan - aacha hain, koi to hain tera pass
geet - nahi yaar he so particular bikul papa ki tarah, strict
armaan smiles - aacha need to rush, bye
geet - bye...aacha sun..prem ka kuch news mila to batana

geet looks at the trainer trying to get sunshine inside the stable
she slips her blackberry in her jeans pocket & jumps over the rim inside the field
she holds sunshine & pats her jaws, she responds noding her head
trainer - maam she is unpredictable
geet - umm
geet takes her for a walk, tu itni jungli lagti nahi hain
actually u look sexy, wild & sexy wow
...she hops on sunhines back
she lifts her front legs & neigh loud..geet lands on sunshines neck holding tight
she pats her softly, yeh sexy itna kyun gussa ho rahi hain...
aapna attitude bachan ko dikhana mujhe nahi
geet pulls her belt & kicks her moving into the field further & further
geet - ur not that bad u know...increasing the speed enjoying the ride
trainer rushes to maans room - sir mam sunshine main 30mins se ride kar rahi hain
maan - sunshine pe, alone, WHY DID U LET HER
trainer stood scared
maan knew there was no point shouting at him & ran to the field
they looked around ...rain had just started & the wind was blowing wild
maan perfect!!!! he soar under his throat - where did she go
trainer pointig at right side - this direction
maan - get me badsha
trainer - umm
he puts the saddle on badsha & gets to him
mean while maan tries calling her, she did'nt pick the phone
maan - u go on toofan ...this way , I will check this side
it was more than couple of hours maan is been searching for her madly around the
farmhouse, he kept caling her & the rain had become intense
he pushed his hair back & looked around...noticed geets blackberry on the ground
he panicked & tried to trace sunshines foot prints, which was washed away with the
heavy down pour. he ran around to & noticed sunshine lieing hurt
he got scared & saw around geet was lieing in on the wet slushy ground next to sunshine
her shirt was torn & drenched. maan lifted her to near by broken and baren hut

completly dark with night music of crickets and frogs in the background.
looked around to get some help, he tried calling the farmhouse for help but there
was no reception. she was cold, num & she was shivering
maan got worried checked her forehead. he looked at her..she was dripping wet
he tried opening her shirt, then turned to look away, wondered how can he change her
he went out & removed his shirt squeezed the water out of it & sprang it in the air
he glanced at her, she looked pale and shivering
he turned her around & opened her shirt & slipped her into his shirt
put his hand around her waist, he gasped & closed his eyes tight & undressed her jeans
he moved away immediately from her & avoided looking at her, he drained
out the water from her cloths & spread to let it dry
he stood near the door trying to reach some one for help
it was past midnight... the weather had worsened with temperature was droping
with the wind blowing throw the worn doors & windows.
maan was just trying to calm himself there was wild wind & heavy rain outside
almost depicting his plight inside. otherwise it was dark & silent the sound
of the frogs in the background made the darkness all the more intense. suddenly
he heard her shiver. cold temperatures and strong winds were causeing her body to
lose heat quickly. he rubbed her legs & hands. but she was really cold
she was still shivering, & all of a sudden she stopped shivering & curled up in the foetal
position to conserve heat. maan got tensed & checked her pulse it was slow, intermittent,
weak pulse. the least he expected was she slipping into hypothermia, they were no where in
high altitude niether the temperature was that low, what could have lead to her condition
probaly her exsisting fever. he slipped in next to her getting off his wet pair of jeans
and the wet shirt on her. he rubbed her legs with his & her arms. he could barely sleep.
she was still not responding it was 4am more than 3hrs, finaly geet turned into his embrace
hugging him, breathing normally, he checked her pulse on her neck it was better now
he shied in relief and burried his head in her neck, her whole body jolt in reaction as he
he deepened his touch. he was so happy to feel the life back in her, a tear roll down his eyes
feeling her cold & but now warmer body.

precap
bechari geet!!!! or should I say bechara Maan...wonder how will
she react when she wakes up!!!

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update but i hope she doesnt misunderstood him pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
ha ha ha ha
Nice update. keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍muskan awesome update yaar but PRECAP is more INTRESTING😉BECHARA MAAN i think🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god ... geet dont slap maaan yaar.... already saw a slap and i cant sleep for a night ..

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