~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

484

Views

182.1k

Users

83

Likes

2.6k

Frequent Posters

rsroopali thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update waiting for d paris updateeeee
krati5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
maan is everyone's prince charming😳😳...... love d wy he cares 4 geet....... so so proud of his decisions regarding geet's further studies
esha143 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
That was a very nice part.....so Geet is joining college...That's great....well done Maan for thinking about it.....yes we want some Paris moments too...try to think of it...I'm sure it will come to u.....you are such a good writer.....and I'm dying to see Sasha's reaction when she comes to know about maan n Geet..... ohh...I'm looking forward to it 😆😆.......please try to update soon........
Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

hi devika...grt as usual...😊😊😊

u kno whlie reading it i was like "why geet handa??? she is mrs. maan khurrana dammit!!"
i was gonna leave u a comment about it....but then i read on n u worked that out beautifully😆😆
glad to see geet finally accepted maan fully....
plz do write about paris...some cute maaneet romantic scenes...
geet n college....is good....our gal needs to be independent...
waiting for next update...
eagerly😊😊
Bublish thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear... great as usual
waana see some intense moments..😳
And thx for the pm
waiting for the next one
shivangi783 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Devika🤗

I loved this update.
Loving the way you're developing Maan-Geet's relationship gradually.
Like the understanding they share now.

Sasha-Tasha-Adi-Maan call scene was too good😆
I can imagine Sasha and tasha's faces. And Adi enjoying😉 I think Adi doesn't know about Geet being married to Maan, right? I think he was taking the opportunity of teasing Sasha-Tasha.

College part was quite unexpected. But then its MSk, who is totally unpredictable. Loved the part where Geet remembers that her own family didn't let her study and forced into marriage and here, her Maan, understands that she's facing problems at IP, knows that she wants to solve her problems herself. For this she needs to study regular courses. He understands this and has already started working on this. He cares so much.
I really appreciate the fact that you bought up this issue of completing the education. It indeed is very important!

And I also read your reply to my previous comments.
See this story is in Fan Fictions section. This section contains all the fictions of India Forums-for all the serials. Now Geet alone has so many FF's, imagine how many would be of all the shows. So it becomes really difficult to locate the FF link as you mentioned.
Earlier FF's related to Maaneet used to be on Geet discussion board in Geet forum. Here one could easily locate. But now the Moderators have made a rule that FF's from Geet discussion boeard would be shifted to Fan Fiction section after the thread reaches 20-25 pages. Some are lucky, since sometimes the thread doesn't move even after 50pages. It just depends how frequently the moderators review the Discussion Board for Geet.

And I really love reading your updates. And I am sure the other readers too enjoy.
Hug for you
Shivangi
maankigeet4ever thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
another great part..loved it...maan is so supportive...i would love to read abt them in Paris so hopefully you are thinking about Paris when you sit down to write...but as always i know it will be great...no matter wat u write :)
avi4rubi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

@Mrk-1 thank you, paris moments.. coming up soon..

@Afsha: thank you.. hope you will like the next part too.. Maan cooking something naughty..depending on comments.. ha ha, or I may take you to college.. ha ha

@Wajiha; I am trying to bring the paris moments. Hope you will like it. Will continue depending on the response..

@Nan-10:thank you. Hope you will like next part too

@Rsroopali: so you are waiting for paris moments.. trying to bring it on..

2Karti-5; thank you.. I really wished to see that piece, so brought it up.. I am so glad to hear that you loved it too… yes, he do care about her than herself.

@Esha: thank you.. I couldn't come quick as I was feeling sick.. still recovering.. but yes Sasha will face Geet.. but not soon.. I am trying for more maneet moments for now.. sasha NT all will come to know Geet's existence later… but then she will be ready to face anything.. so only after few college episodes ( I think, if I get support…).. ha ha

@Aashluvsmaan:thank you so much dear. Yes she is Mrs. MSK.. I want Maan to hear it from her.. he he… I am trying for few Paris moments.. but more with response.. let see. I hope you will like next part too.

@Bublish: oh dear, if I write intense moment, the moderators may close this FF yaar. So only I am preferring lighter moments.. ha h.. otherwise you may faint reading my FF and will never come back..

@Swatichowdheri: 🤗thank you..….

@Shivangi: thank you so much for such a long note .. really appreciate your time. Thanks for letting me know how the FF works here. I never knew that. Its not only this post yaar, none of mine is showing up on the forum. So I stopped opening any new topic. Anyway leave that.. I am so happy that you likes this FF. I don't have many readers, but few of you guys are keep me going. I may go slow , but will continue till I find a satisfying end. I love writing it down yaar, but that doesn't mean you will like too. So only always depends on comments to continue with next parts… college parts are coming, atleast three for sure..hope you will enjoy that too..🤗

@Madhvipatil:thank you dear.. hope you will like updated part too..

@Kelzz; yes they are awesome together.. I love them too.. and it is nice to imagine about them too..

@Maneetgeet4eve:yes, I am trying on paris scene, I hope you will like it.. waiting to ehar after update … let me know..

@Shinseen: thank you shinseen. Hope you will like updated parts too..

Thank you so much for clicking that like button and leaving me a comment. Updates depend on your views and comments.. so most of you wanted that paris scene, I tried on this.. will continue depending on your view, or else I will start with the college part.. but everything depends on your response. next one coming up soon...

Thanks a lot

devika😛

avi4rubi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
Part- 12
Geet held her hands tight on Maan's biceps as the plane took off. Maan looked at her with a chirpy smile on his corner lips. Her eyes were closely tighten as the force took her up from the land. She felt a kind of floated feeling.. Her nervousness was clearly felt by Maan by her tightening and loosing grip.. Minutes ticked by.. Finally he felt the relief as she loosened her grip..

Mann: geet , open your eyes now..

Geet slowly opened her eyes and looked around.. It was all white and blue chunks floating in front of her eyes… she looked down through the oval window, but could see only the white spread beneath. She looked back at him with an amazing expression…

"how was it?".. maan asked..

Geet tried to smile.." nice'.

Maan: "I never thought it can be that scared?"..

Geet: No I was not, not at all.. tried to straighten herself..

Mann: so you were not scared..

Geet with confidence: nope.. not at all.

Maan: then what is this? Pointing to his upper arm..

Geet: what? And looked at where he pointed.. her eyes gone wild as she saw the nail marks on his upper arm..

Geet in embarrassment: why don't you wear long sleeves, at least during our trip.. Why you need to wear office dress every time..

Maan in his lowest voice: Ms. Hoshirpur, so problem is with sleeves now.. Ok, I will correct it once we get there. Ok.. now you can take that belt off if you want..

Geet looked at him as he was taking it off…but then: no, no I am fine.. I feel more comfortable with this on…

Maan tried to control his smile again: ok, so you are not scared..

Geet: no, I am not..

"sir, juice, water, or any other drink".. a sweet voice grabbed their attention.. maan smiled and ordered for them.. and then looked at Geet and tried to control his smile…

As they were sipping onto their drinks..

Geet: Why dadi selected paris..?

Maan: "why Paris.. because.." but she interrupted him

Geet: because Paris has the oldest and famous gardens and the river Seine adds beauty to those gardens..

Maan got surprised listening to geet's talk on Paris.. Everyone first relate Paris with the famous Eiffel Tower .. but here she is , he looked at her face.. she was continuing in trance.. " I have to walk on those crowded streets holding onto your arms.. I have to see those flowers which may be dancing with the wind, how they can be happy being in the middle of that loud noises of people around along with the funky sounds of horns".. "you tell me.. will they be happy where they are, how many colors may be there na.. , Tell me, what you think?'

Maan in trance too: what can I say Geet, I just want to be a listener for now. You tell me about Paris.. I want to know more about it.. He sat in a relaxed posture as she rested her head on his shoulder keeping her eyes open to that oval window, watching the clouds flying away near to her eyes…. but her eyes were seeing the flowers in that imaginary garden…. And her lips were moving with each scenery….

"Is Geet is special because of this nature…" Maan also tried to look thru that oval window to see her descriptions outside….

It was already dark as they stepped into their hotel room.

"Geet, let's take rest today and we will explore the gardens tomorrow".. Maan said as he was taking his west coat off. He didn't hear any reply back , so he looked and found her standing near the window. He went and joined her and looked out.. The illuminated figure of Paris just took her breath away…. and he joined seeing the lighted beauty..

Geet as she felt his presence near : as if we are standing in heaven and the stars are blinking around us…

Maan circled his arms around her at waist level and held her closer and said: whenever you are closer to me like this, I feel like I am in heaven and the stars up high around me are looking at me jealously seeing the brightest one near me…

She turned her face to look at him, and felt shy .. she circled her arms around him: don't say silly..

Maan: No I am not.. Ok, let's get fresh up and have some dinner.. I am really feeling hungry.. This airplanes are going cheaper with budget cut..

Geet loosened her arms and looked at him: what! We had everything served before landing too. And You are feeling hungry…!

Maan: No geet, if we were sitting in that economy class, we might be starving by now..

Geet: what?

Maan: I was just testing to check whether you are with me or not? or digged yourself into the beuty of Paris..…

Geet: what!

Maan: jUst joking... ok then, Go get fresh up..

Geet: ok.. she went near the suitcase which was already opened by Maan.. Glanced through her dress. And kept her finger over her lips..

Maan: what happened?

Geet: I forgot to take my night dress..

Maan: so what?

Geet: what will I wear..

Maan: wear anything..

Geet was checking for simple suit..

Maan came near: do you really need something? In his husky voice..

Geet: aap bhi na.. and she went on checking.. Finally she found one of his long kurtha.. and took it out and wiggled her brows and : this will be fine..

Maan: no, that's mine..

Geet held that tight to her grip: but now it is mine.. Buy me something new tomorrow, I will return this ..ok.

Maan: why you need to win all the time..

Geet: because wife is special. Saying that she went into washroom..

Maan was changing his dress.. he took his shirt off… he heard Geet's voice again.. Maan went near; what is it Geet?

Geet: I don't know how to turn this knob?

Maan : ok let me check.. he tried to open the door, but it was locked..

Maan: Geet open the lock, let me check..

Geet:one minute..

Maan opened it as he heard the click and asked Geet in casual: so what's it?

Geet: I don't know how to turn the knob..

Maan: which one..

Geet: this.. he went near.. and turned it on, and the water just showered onto her head and rolled down her body..

"its too cold'.. geet in a shivery voice… "uyi ma…'..

Maan: one second Geet, let me turn it off and he tried hard saying that and then looked at the knob clearly and turned it in neutral position..

"is it Ok Now?".. he looked at Geet as he said that..

His expression changed as he saw her wet face… she was holding onto the towel knot tight… geet unaware of his look was trying to feel the warmth of the water to felt hat coldness away… the showering water just wet her hair, her face and rolled down her neck.. he felt the shiver as he saw those waterdropes rolling down her naked skin over her neck.. as his eyes trieled down his eyes caught her wetting legs ....

"this is fine" Geet replied as she was getting comfy in that shower…

She looked at him, as she didn't hear any voice.. found him standing next to her, looking at her passionately..

A lightening passed through her spine.. suddenly she looked down.. her heart started beating faster… she saw his feet getting near to her.. her breathing started going heavy… she felt the shiver as she felt his hand under her chin… she looked into his eyes shyfully..

"we came here for our honeymoon, right? Then why we need to be separate? We need to be together all the time.. This time is meant for us, only us, no one else is going to interfere our togetherness'.. saying that he joined her under the shower.. he looked at her curly wet hair.. he strolled his fingers through them.. "do you know how much I love your wet hair…" he placed a kiss over her forehead "and how much I love your wet rosy cheeks..' slowly it brushed down to her lips…'and the wet lips".. is lips took over hers and she tighten her grip over her towel knot… but soon she realized she can't control her emotions… her hands wandered over his back.. the time was passing by… her body crushed against his and the towel just fallen onto the bath tub along with his rest of the cloth… his hands were moving in a circular motion on her bare back… and his lips were trailing down her front body.. she raised herself to take him in…. time was passing by.. finally he rested his head over her bare chest to breath calm.. she just held him closer to her body, closing all the possible space between them….

"geet, are you ok".. Maan asked in whispering voice..

"hum'.. she nodded in agreement..

'You were feeling hungry na".. she questioned in a teasing tone..

"hum, to be with you'……..his husky voice replied

"so…'. Geet loosening her arms around him..

"so what?...as he saying that he took a dry towel from the nearracka dn started drying their body together... and then continued .." We will go tomorrow to see the garden..and will see the colors and will ask the flowers all that you asked me throughout.. ' … then wrapped the towel around her and lifted her up in his arms and walked towards the bed saying 'who said you need night dress… ha, we will buy new ones, but my choice…, ok..' Geet was smiling as his voice was trailing low….

The view was getting far from their bedroom… the focus changed from their roof to the stars up in the sky… and they were feeling jealous to see the beauty sleeping comfortably under the warmth of her love……

*********************************************** I tried on your request.. will continue with response. Thank you for clicking that like button, leaving that valuble comments.. and also for those who still reading it silently... Thank you signing off for now
shadow off Geet
wajiha-1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
amazing update
continue pairs moments dear
do continue soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

4 months ago

Shadow and Stars : #PyaarkaTropeFest #1 - Vihaan & Sehmat OS. Shadow and Stars : #PyaarkaTropeFest #1 - Vihaan & Sehmat OS.

RUNNER UP entry ( individual) for PyarkaTropeFest (entry #1) Trope: Friends to lovers Setting: Road-trip Pairing: Major Vihaan Shergill from Uri...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

4 months ago

Brewing Confessions ~ Arnav+Geet OS #PyarkaTropefest

Graphic Credits: itsShonali This is one of my entries for the Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest Trope: Set A: Best Friend’s Sibling Set B:...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".