~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow taht was well written and what u want it to end..thats not fair..
but not gonna force u..thanks for the wonderful FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG that was amazing..i was in my maaneet world imagining those beautiful moment..damn,why did you stop???LOL...btw great update..pls continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...grt update.....lovely....but kinda short:( hehe.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
No no, please don't wrap up soon.
Aren't you enjoying writing this?😲 Since in every update you ask if you're boring us(readers) or not and this time you're talking about wrapping up the story? Kyun???


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Posted: 14 years ago

Romantic part

Liked the way u wrote
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you friends gagsy, angel_sub, wifey, bhakbhartifan, kajol.kasu, asmi123, aashluvsmaan, madhavipatil, komlika, esha143, jazzerette, ambbiha, wajiha-1, krati5, taanni, rsroopali, 123pritha, smiliey, mrk_1, Mariam...x, shah10, shivangi783, sharmake11, iqbals4ever, mchopra, -afsha-, swatichowdhury, for liking last part.……

@Shah:thank you, I am happy to know that you liked it. Hope you will enjoy upcoming part too..

@Esha143: thanks dear.. I appreciate it…

@Maankigeet4evr:thank you..i value your comment…

@Ramen1921:thanks dear. Next part coming up soon… hope you will like it.

@Kellz:thank you and I will PM with next update…

@Rsroopali: thank you so much.. also I like your signature quote…

@Amreen:thank you dear.. next part coming soon

@Ambbiha:thanks for sharing that blush… will come back for a small blush soon..i hope

@Wajiha:thank you.. next part coming soon… hope you will like that too..

@Mchopra: I really appreciate it. I like story telling, but then when I read other Os and SS and FF here, its more of maneet scenes.. I don't think I can handle that very well. If I continue, it will be more of their life progress, so may eventually will bore you guys… so taking precaution… ha ha.. nothing else.. I really appreciate your support… thanks you..

@Kajol.kasu: thank you so much..it was short?.. hum.. I think Maan turned the bedlight off for privacy.. then how can I stay back there dear.. they need privacy.. so I stepped out.. But I am going to peek in to see the morning with them… ha ha.. hope youwill enjoy the start part..

@Madhavipatil: sure , yes it is coming soon/… hope you will enjoy….thank you so much..

@Aashluvsmaan:yes, short, because maan ne eshara kiya na.. for their privacy.. what can I do.. After all that is our MSK.. how can I stand in front of him.. na re baba, I am afraid.. but I am going to peek in.. so get ready for it..

@Shinangi: oh dear,. I absolutely enjoy writing it down.. because it is my imagination and I love to imagine everything in a lighter way.. Yes , I asked about whether I am boring you guys or not? It is my state of mind to know whether I am able to keep you on track, because I know I don't have much maneet scenes the way I can see in other FF's. So only from the feedback I can get that piece. Also tell you frankly, your words really work on me.. that is why I am still here. Because I can't see my post on the forum. Don't know the reason. I can't send anybody a buddy request.. so these all frustrate me. So I check on this by clicking onto my posted link list. Each time when you do that, I am in confusion, whether you are seeing my post on the forum, or are you clicking on direct link that I am sending.. so only I am planning to wrap up.. so I am totally depending on the response for motivation to continue.. But let see how long it will go like this. Sorry to send a long note hear,.. but that's the actual reason.

@Afsha: thank dear.. I hope you will like the morning part too.. thank you..

@Swathichowdhari: a great big hug for you too dear.. thank you.. sometimes I need that.. ha ha

@Babygurl: thank you…. Hope you will like next part too…

Thank you friends.. I am glad to know that you are enjoying my FF so far. Few more parts to go.. next one coming up soon.. I hope you all will like it..

Devika

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-12

Thank you friends for all the support. Please read the thank you note above if you have left a commnet for me (pt-11)... thanks
PART-12
The candles melt away leaving its trail behind.. The moon faded as the sun took over…

Geet was sleeping sound listening to her husband's heart beat. She cued further and tightened her arms over his shoulder to back , while Maan moved slightly and tighten his arms around her in a comforting position. They didn't hear the cell ringing.. a smile of satisfaction was playing around their lips…

The cell started ringing again.. tried to pierce their ears this time.. Maan nodded his head in his sleep… the ring tone started annoying geet..

Geet: Pick the phone na.. in her sleepy voice

Maan: muhum…. Let me sleep some more..

She didn't say anything further as she felt his warm body pulled her more closer and his hands pulled the camel color comfy further up to their shoulder. The seconds were passing by.. both started waking up slowly.. Maan felt the loosening arms around him.. Geet slowly opened her eyes listening to his heartbeat.... her ear was near to his heart.. she felt her skin against his..

'.. Oh God.. what do I do now? How will I get up? Her eyeballs circled within its frame. All she could feel was the smoothness of that comfy around them.. but then.. she slowly pulled her hands to his chest level, and shake little bit to move away from his embrace.

He slowly opened his eyes as he felt her moving.. a happy smile was playing on his lips.. this was his dream for long.. to wake up to see her face next to his heartbeat, feeling her breath near to his neck.. He loosened his grip too, and then slowly tried to touch her chin to make her to look at his face.. Geet was feeling too shy that she forced herself down.. Maan realized her hesitance.. a teasing smile appear on his lips.... and then with a force he just moved to the side and brought geet on her back..

Her eyes gone wild and she looked at his face fearfully.. Maan lifted his upper body towards her and went closer to her face.. she saw the passionate teasing look in his eyes.. she felt shy.. she closed her eyes as she saw his face neared hers and her lips shivered as his lips touched her forehead..

In his maanly husky voice he said " I love you Geet, now you look more beautiful than ever".. and then waited for her to open her eyes.. she slowly opened her eyes and looked at him lovingly with a shy smile on her lips..

" now you are mine , completely mine, we are one with both soul and body…. Then with a pause he added.. "ab thum parineetha ben gayi ho".. I complete in you Geet.."..

She took that moment into hers… she completely merged into his talk.. she extened her arm out and circled around his neck level and held him tight, to feel that moment… time just passed by… geet was feeling his lips on her neck and was tightening her grip on his neck…. The phone rang again…

Geet paused for a second..but continued to feel him on her..

Geet: phone..

Maan didn't say anything back..

Geet: your cell phone..

Maan;: hum..

Geet tried to move: may be some important call…

Maan: hum..

Geet: check on it.. please..

He lifted his face upto look into her eyes with a note... Chup

Geet's eyes pleaded him to check on it..

With little hesitation, he extended his arm to take the phone and said " hello"

He was listening but his eyes were on her.. Geet tried to move, but he held her back tight… she showed her face to excuse her.. he kept his teasing smile as he listened the other end…

' no problem, I will be there".. he kept the phone down..

'now you need to go, right?, so let me go too.".. geet

"No Geet.. I don't have to go anywhere..".. Maan

"I heard you saying it".. geet

"but I have time".. maan

" But I don't.. I need to be there.".. geet

Maan " no geet , I will take care of that too"..

Geet tried to sit and said " No you don't.. I need to go..

Maan pulled her back onto his body.." How will you go.."

Then only she got aware of her situation.. suddenly her eyes fallen on her body… she looked around, found her saree on the floor.. she looked at him helplessly…

" You close your eyes".. geet ordered..

" no, I am not".. maan replied with the same teasing smile..

"yes, you are"… geet

" No geet, I am not"..

" chodiyena, please"… geet pleaded..

Maan melt there.. he can argue with fighting Geet but not the pleading Geet..

He loosened his grip..

" Ok , I will leave you, but how will you go..?".. he asked in doubt..

Geet took advantage of the situation, she rolled out from the bed along with the blanky around her. And with a winning voice said : this way… and she disappeared into the bathroom…

Maan just looked at her and smiled…

*************

Maan saw Geet standing in front of the mirror, getting ready to go to office..

He was buttoning his shirts.. he went near and picked the sinddor bottle from her hand said " this is my right, let me help you".. with that he took a pinch of sindoor in his fingers and applied on her hair partition.. she looked at her husband's face in gratitude for giving her such importance….. he kept the bottle down. and then looked at her. Geet was standing in that position looking inot the mirror.. he noticed the blush on her cheek..

He held her from behind and stroked on her slender arms... and whispered into her ears: look so beutiful... and saw her bushing hard. she lowered her eyes in shy..
Maan: now also you are feeling shy?..
Geet was unable to hold her feelings, she turned quick and hugged him tight..
"Now what happened?"… maan asked brushing her hair down..

"nothing, I want to be near you like this all the time"… geet said

" Ok then, I have no problem, let's stay like this".. maan with a teasing tone

Geet " i know you always you are always like this".. and then with Geet style, she moved out and put her foot wear on and said" let's go"…

Maan just smiled and followed her..

Daadi was noticing all these changes in MSK and the blush on Geet's cheeks.. and she smield to herself..

*****************************

Everyone at the office was in tension.. Meeting is going to be in one hour. MSK is not there yet. Client will be here soon….

The employees got alert as they hear MSK's footsteps.. he walked to his cabin keeping his head straight, but as usual his eyes were cornering on everyone's action. Sasha was on her heels, trying to find excuses and Tasha just behind her brushing over her tail. Adi followed MSk to his cabin, to listen to the expected tantrums…. so did Sasha

MSK went and sat on his chair. Checked on his daily schedule.. and still looking into that program chart..

" Sasha make sure the copies are ready for the clients.." and then looking at her face " also the conference room is ready, right?"

He looked at her for an answer. Sasha still in confusion how to answer..

"What happened? Is everything Ok,?.". MSK

" hu.. ha… vo… MK.. the file is not ready yet… and I can't find it on my table.." she tried to finish her sentence in tremble voice.. imagining the response..

"oh..that.. file is ready… " in a cool tone. He stood from his seat and went near to the file cabinet. Sasha Tasha dropped their mouth as they saw the well arranged cabinet. MSK easily picked the file from it and about to handle it to Sasha but then as if remembering something.. " one minute".. he went and took his cell and dialed one number..

Unknowingly a lovely smile appered on his lips and that gave a glow to his face. Adi, Tasha , Sahsa all looked at his calm face and was standing in shock..

" um… you were remembering me na… ,".. they heard MSK"s voice and was about to faint..

"ok, I am sorry, … ye.. don't hang up, it's really important.. I won't take much time.. I need your help… what did you tell me yesterday.. I didn't listen to you properly……….. no no.. not that… listen, after arranging the file cabinet.. what do I need to do with this…… ha… ha.. you said something… . oh, ok.. ok…. I got it.. will call you soon…… ok ok… later".. he kept the phone down.. and the turned to sasha..

" Sasha, there is a book to log in, do that before taking it out, and replace it on the same place after work, and you need to enter the log out too".. now onwards all the files will be arranged here and Tasha you will check it at the end of the day… did you get that?" MSK asked in his magical tone..

"yes, yes… yes sir".. she tried to reply back..

Sasha did as MSK ordered and walked out still with drooping jaw…

Adi and MSk went on discussing on the project..

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Sasha: Tasha whom he was talking to? And what he was telling that person.. who is this, who arranged all the files..?

Tasha just imitated her action and said: I am also thinking the same, who is this new person?.. but whatever, now I end up with one more work?'.. stupid person who ever it is..

They saw Adi coming out.. Sasha went near him: Adi, who is that?
adi in confused tone: wh wh who is who?
Sasha: Whom MSK was talking to? who arranged the file cabinet?
Adi with a confident smiel: Oh that...
Sasha: ha, that.. Tasha joined Sasha with same tone..
Adi looking at their curious face: I don't know. It is MSK.. may be he hired somebody, or...or.. I don't knpw.. with that he just walked away... Sasha and tasha stood with a froggy face...

Everything was going on fine… for Maan that day. He was so relaxed.. .. he went back home with a happy mood..

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At dinner time..

Daadi: so how you two are doing..?

Maan: why daadi? We are doing fine.."

Daadi: no no… it's been months after your marriage.. you didn't even gone for any vacation yet?

Geet: Vacation..!!! no way Daadi, I am already screwed up.. and I am going to admit today that I don't know abcd of business.

Maan tried to smile looking at Daadi, thinking of her challenge.
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Daadi: Geet, that is not fair.. I am here and you are saying you already accepting your failure.

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Geet: No daadi, it is not you.. but me.. I am totally depending on both of you.. I can do some but not all.. I feel terrible.. she continued her frustration.. each time something come in front of me, I try heard to figure it out... but then I don't know whether it is right or wrong? she continued... Maan and Daadi listemed and they understood her words..

Daadi: maan what you think?

Maan looking at Geet's face: I can help her..

Geet: that is not a solution..

Maan: I mean, I can help you to learn the skill.. are you ready to take that challenge..

Geet: what?

Maan: are you ready to take a challenge so that you can be your own..

Geet with a confident voice: yes , I can.

Maan in a very cool voice: Ok then, join back in college..

The fork just fell on the floor. The time froze for Geet… this is what she pleaded to her family when they fixed her marriage.. this is what she always dreamed of.. and now she is hearing that from her husband's mouth as his wish… and as a challenge..
Maan: what? Geet Handa rejecting the suggetion..?

Geet looked at him with tear filled eyes: no, I am accepting it, if you are there with me, I can face any challenge… but how can I..

Maan: don't worry about your admission and all. I can get your certificates easily.. just need your signature... and rest of the process.. In face I checked on it already and you were a very good student with the high grade in your class.. you have the potential.. so why don't you continue it... and you don't have to get your face in anything for the admission process.. I just want to hear yes or no .. from you..

Geet: so you planned this earilier?…

Maan: I was seeing your frustration.. and I know Ms. Geet Handa doesn't like to depend on others for decision making... so I was kind of expecting ... but that is not the question.. are you ready for it? say Yes or NO...

geet with a teary smile: yes.

Maan: Ok then get ready with your backpack soon…

Geet was still in a dreamy world..

Daadi: ok ok.. that is very good.. but when you get all those process done… here is my gift for you guys…

Maan took the paper piece from her..: tickets to paris!!!!!

Daadi: ha Maan, you can delegate your three weeks work to trusted people and enjoy your time with your wife.. and if everything goes as planned… Geet beta, this is your free time, once you join school, I don't think you will be able to go anywhere, even if Maan wish..

Geet looked at daadi thankfully…

Geet helped Nakul to arrange everything back in kitchen… she ran to her room with the happiest heart ever..

Maan was talking on his cell to someone at the balcony.. she went and just wrapped her arms around him.. Maan held her close with his right arm and continued to talk… after few minutes.he turned off the cell..

Maan: happy..

Geet nodded her head in agreement..

Maan: me too…

Geet moved back to look at his face said: but one thing..

Maan: what?.. while tucking her hair behind her ears..

Geet: I am not Geet Handa

Mann: then who are you?
geet in a proud voice: I am Mrs. Maan Khurana

Hearing that he felt happy: hum… but when I feel like challenging you, the old Handa's face comes in front of me.. what can I do..?

Geet: no.. not anymore..

Maan: ok… with a pause.. Geet can I ask you something?

Geet looked at him ?

Maan: Do you want everyone to know about our marriage?

Geet's response was quick: Not now.. anyway IP people knows it.. and I have seen their happiness on the day you gave them the party. They are simple people with good heart... but no, I like this privacy.. For now I just want to f,eel that you are mine… Just mine.. I don't want anybody to look at me and mock at me.. I am fine in your arms.. I have Daadi with me.. May be later.. but not now… I don't want to face the media.. Then they will be back of us like earlier and ask all those nonsense…

Maan: Ok baba.. its all your wish. I just asked.. so Mrs. Khurana need to enjoy this private time.. Ok.. I am ready for it..

Geet: ye, don't we have to get the things ready..

Maan: yes, but not now.. will do that tomorrow.

Geet: but..

Maan: no, no but.. I just need you by my side Geet… then with all that dress packing. Just pick whatever you wish.. But don't take much.. we can shop in Paris.. and I want to see you in all those dress that I will select for you over there.. so beware before packing..

Geet: so..

Maan looked at her with a corner smile: so… within fraction of second he grabbed her in his arms and carried her to the bed….

The moon hide behind the dark cloud with shyness………

****************************************** Thank you friends.. I hope you will like this part.. I don't know whether i can write about their paris trip..it all comes while I sit down to write. So may be it will come out, otherwise it will be Geet in college... Thanks for all the valuable comments... Devika
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update loved it ...we wanna see some paris moments ..so pls update the next part soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Liked Maaneet's sweet romance
The way Maan supported her n suggested her to join college was fab
Their gng to honeymoon
Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Looks lik Maan's mind is cooking sumthg naughty
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update loved it ..
their should be some pairs moments dear
excellent work
do continue soon

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