~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update devika

loved the way maan sang for geet..

lovely..

cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oooooooooooo so cute, i loved it... BTW wanna know wat NT is upto..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update continueeeeeeeeee
maan &geet should announce their marriage nw i thinkkkkkk
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all a big sorry for updating late. Got busy with few unexpected things. You guys are awsome, and thank you so much for the comments.. and that is the reason i am continuing... let me know if I am boring you guys... thanks.. here ou go with next part...
Part-10

Maan raised both his arms up in the air and stretched his back in big relief and closed his eyes.... he felt the relief.. all the tension melt away within few hours.. he took some deep breath, and slowly opened his eyes.. he looked at Geet, she almost finished arranging the file on the cabinet with easy findings… he walked near to her.. Geet was completely into finishing up her work. So that he doesn't have to depend on others..

Looking at the cabinet, she said; Ok, now from tomorrow if anybody take any file from here, you need to ask them to replace back here after completing.. OK.. Then everything will be in order.. she smiled in satisfaction as she mentioned that..

The silence brought her back into time.. and forced her to turn , she bumped onto him… she looked at him and met his passionate eyes…a current passed through her... she felt shy.. her eyes dropped down unknowingly… she turned quickly

Her heart started beating faster. She was feeling an unknown pleasure within. She felt his presence right behind her. She wanted to look at his face, into his eyes.. but she is feeling shy… what is happening to me… she started doubting herself.. but then she felt like her heart skipped few beats as she felt his breath falling near her neck side. Her breathing started getting heavy.. her right hand unknowingly clenched over her dress for support…a current passed through her as she imagines her eyes on her.... she closed her eyes as she felt his lips on her skin.. she brought her hands up to her heart level to control its faster poundings.. , to hold that moment there, to feel its true.. the goose bumps over her skin gave him the reaction… she tightened her grip on her duppatta again trying to sooth her heart, trying to hold her breath. She doesn't want him to know about it.. she wanted to hide now,…. But then her weightless body turned to the direction he forced, by holding onto her shoulder. She turned to face him in trance.. but her eyes were closed , with her raised head….

Maan looked at her passionately..her blushed cheeks told him everything... his arms slide down to her waist level, bringing her more closer.. he tried to read her feelings… he looked at her forehead with sindoor, he was unable to resist his feelings that his lips moved towards her forehead…she felt his breath falling onto her skin... she felt the burning as his lips touched her skin… he saw her closed eyes with the eyeballs moving side to side.. he kissed them to give comfort, to reassure them that he is near her… he saw her reddish cheeks.. his fingers just brushed over them once and then he stamped his lips over her burning skin…her cheeks turned crisome red... her hands unknowingly left her duppatta and cling over to his shirt.. she tightened her grip as his finger brushed over her shivering lips… the peck she felt on the corner lips made her to cling to him more with her both hands and within second she lost control over her emotions…

his arms held her more closer, made her heart to beat near his... and her arms just circled his neck … as he advanced himself and took over her lucious lips into his, she tilt her head slightly back and threaded her fingers over his hair. He paused for a second as he felt her fingers over his hair and the passion he felt through her touch. With a passionate smile, he moved further in and took complete charge.. she tightened her grip on him and loosened them as his lips made those movements over hers… time just ticked by…

Their heart started beating slow now… he slowed down and she loosened her grip too.. but then with a surprise shock she opened her eyes .. Maan felt her shivering.. he loosened his grip on her back too.. and then slowly tried to look at her face, to read her eyes again… but then he found her turning quickly and suddenly she closed her eyes holding onto her dress at chest level..

Maan held her shoulder again and turned her to face him. Geet stood there with downcasted eyes. He placed his finger under her chin and lifted her face to look at him..

" please look at me"… his husky voice demanded..

She with little shyness and shiver tried to collect the courage to look into his eyes… as she raised her eyes, she found his curious eyes to see hers… their eyes conveyed the words of love… the mahi was playing at the background.. he heard what she tried to tell him and she heard his unspoken words too… he took her into his tight embrace… she rested her head near his chest with little shyness playing around her lips…

Geet got the courage to speak out: its getting late, I think we need to go now. Otherwise Daadima may get worried..

Maan.. "hum.. but my mind tells me to stay here, just like this, holding you like this".. Geet smiled and loosened her grip.

Geet: Its already late..

Maan tried to grab her tight again: this is my office and you need to obey.. Geet tried to loosen his grip …
Maan: what!.. you only told me that , i need to give orderes and you will obey… and now you forgot that already???
Geet: nice try.. But this is not your secretary.. This is Mrs. Maan.. then in ordering tone she said: ok, let's go.. come on.. she started to walk away..

MSK held her wrist tight, Geet stopped with a smile on her lips..

MSK neared her from the back side still holding onto her hands: Remember what doctor said the other day..

Geet pretended: no, I don't remember anything.. what did she said?

Maan got impatient but then tried to control himself and said again in a calm voice: Geet, when we went for that follow up check up, she mentioned that now you are alright..

Geet again tried to show her innocence : ha, she said that, so what?

Maan with an irritating tone: Geet…

Geet sweetly with innocent tone: ha , bolo na..

Maan loosened his grip and said: nothing.. let's go, otherwise daadi may get tensed.. and started walking..

Geet took fatser steps near to him and then with a confused tone said: didn't I say that first..

Maan in serious tone: Geet we are getting late.. let's go..

Geet: Oh really!.. hum, so you got late because of me.. are you trying to say that?

Maan: I don't want to argue with you now, let's go..

Geet: this is unfair.. how can you say that.. continued with her hoshiyarpur express talk as she followed Maan. He tried to hide his smile listening to her … and tried to mask it with his angry face…

He listened to her buck buck as they drove back to the Manshion…

They found out that Daadi already went to bed.. Maan gave an irritated look to Geet and as they entered the bedroom, he said : geet you go to bed, I need to do my exercise. Saying that he picked up his dress and didn't give any chance for Geet to speak out..

Geet just watched her husband walking away… she stood near the mirror to take off her earrings.. she looked at herself in the mirror as she took off her earrings.. she saw her swollen lips.. she thought of that passionate moment.. her fingers brushed over her cheeks.. she blushed… the thought started raising her heartbeats again.. she looked at her face again.. she saw the sindoor .. she held the shiny beads in her hand…. she started remembering his words… that he wanted to just hold her in his arms… and reminding her of doctor's words..

She felt the warmth.... she felt shy..... a current passed through her as she thought of that moment.. ..she went to the cupboard.. and looked for her night suit.. but then her eyes lingered over his shirts … she felt shy as she smelled his cologne … her eyes wandered all over inside it..and finally she picked a saree… white saree with complete red thread /red beads/ red border jerry work.. she went to fresh up… she stood in front of the mirror..

Shyful smile was playing throughput as she wore the necklace around her neck, as she put her earrings.. her heart was beating faster… she placed a bindi in between her brows... … and left her hair open… she stood in front of the mirror.. the red low cut heavy work blouse gave added glowing to her fair skin… she looked around.. she went and closed the door slightly tight and then picked few candles and she placed them around … she started decorating it as her mind was jumping with joy imagining his response….
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Thank you friends for the likes and comments. I hope you will like this updated part. next part will try for 🤪.. let me think...
love
Devika😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwww nice update
i hope maan likes d arrangment of geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
MMM devika...wow that was so..ahem ahem..and more of it..ahh..
i will be waiting..thanks..and take ur time no probs..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update😊
Maan can be so flirty at times, I just love when he wispers in his husky voice.
Glad that Geet is taking a step to move their relationship forward.

And don't worry for the update being late.
It happens.
Take your time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww............. a big big wooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..........................
loved d part really loved it............ plz update nxt part soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...nice update......finally some Maaneet moments😳....and by the looks of it there are more to come 😉....well in that case I can't wait for long now....pls try to update sooooooonnnnn........and yeah.....don't ever bother to ask again that u r boring us....don't even think about that....and it should be evident from the comments and likes,right?so stop worrying and start updating......waitingggggggggggg😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
loveddddddddddd the update devika.....u were grt as usual..😊😊
plz do continue....
seems like happy days are here again..😊😊

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