~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey devika

awesome update dear..

cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful... BTW i think its MSK...
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Hope you all are doing fine. continuing after reading the valuable comments you left for me. Thank you so much.... I really appreciate it..
Part-9

Time was passing faster. Geet was facing one or the other business issues and feeling down the hill.. she mostly depend on Daadi for decision making, or under the coldness of starry night Mann made her to verb it out and suggested solutions. Instead of become independent, she became more depend on others. Daadi and Maan always gave her support' Maan was noticing her inner turmoil.. lately she was trying hard to smile..

Maan realized she got healed from her trauma, but her daily work is giving her more tension, and she is struggling day by day. He didn't mean to give her that mental pressure, Daadi and him tried to help her to overcome her silence, her withdrawl.. but now it started affecting her negatively.. he doesn't want to take her power away and ask her to sit at home, that is not going to help her.. he cannot ask her to join back in KC as she might feel down in front of own image, even if she won't show that, her inner mind may tell her that she failed in her attempt.. he can't even imagine about it..

Along with all these KC has taken more contracts and the projects were going at different places at different pace. He is too tensed working back at KC. If he ask for any file, he may get a pile to choose from. He missed his best secretary.. he also realized how efficient she was.. he doesn't want her to feel let down, she has the potential'and she can make it..

" MK, here is the London project file"' Mk'MK..

Maan came out from his thoughts.. He looked at Sasha with his firing eyes.. She stood there in a cool way..Sasha waited out at the corner door side, keeping her ears active and getting ready to run..

His look conveyed the frustration'

He took the file and opened it with hope' his eyes gone wild.. he throw the file over the table in full force.. that it just slipped and fell on to the other side' sasha stood with a question on her face..

MSK stood on his feet.. he cannot take it anymore' only person he can depend is Adi, but he is busy too. With multiple projects at a time and nobody to keep all the files in place'. He was about to leave from his cabin..

"But MK, this is London"'.

MSK turned and gave another firing look to shut her mouth.. she felt burned as the beam from his eyes fell on her face.... Unknowingly she took her eyes away' she heard her raising heart beat..

She shook her head as she heard the loud noise from the closing door..

Sasha in confusion walked to the file on the floor and kneel down to pick it up.. she thought' 'what happened. Why Msk was showing all that attitude..".. she turned the page and saw it was an old project file which completed a year ago.. her eyes gone wild.. and a loud voice came out from her throat..TASHA'

Tasha brushed on her tail and moved away quickly from the site''.

MSK was driving crazily' this is it, I can't take it anymore.. he needed some relief.. he pulled on his tie, try to relax' he tried to take some deep breath' nothing was calming him down'.. the face of Geet appeared in front of him' he changed the direction towards IP'..

IP was undergoing a makeover these days.The look of IP reminded geet of a store room. ..She wanted to see everything neat and tidy. This was her idea and she suggested and Daadi agreed' she did the redesign.. she selected the colors' she wanted to impress the clients as they step inside IP building.. she wanted to show them the beauty of colors' she used her imagination and it was coming out well..

She was wearing the white T and blue apron as she is also taking part in remodeling. She was also trying to get some relief from her business mind.. She remembered him as she buttoned the shoulder piece..

" ye Babaji.. look at me, I only wanted this to happen, and now realize that I only dig my pit.. what do I do?.. anyway, let me finish this and I am going to tell him, this is the face of new IP and you need to come back to your seat.. I can't do it any more.. but atleast I should show him, that I can do something,,.. and when he comes back, he can see my work'. She made a childish face as she imagines his response' and again looking up at the ceiling' Babaji.. help me na'with a pleading tone'"

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Nayan Tara was enjoying her day out at the swimming pool.. a crocked smile was playing on her lips.. she was thinking deep as she was sipping on the wine glass..

Geet, the name became a mere memory now.. How she manipulated everyone against me, she thought she can win me over esily.. I was following her from that pavement.. she was walking as if she is in a dream' NT laughed loud with her next thought' and then twitched her eyebrows and slightly smirked.... I was happy to see that red stain.. but then .... from nowhere that police jeep came, and my people had to hide behind.. but I followed them. To the hospital.. My face was covered with the shall .. so nobody noticed me.. I got the happiest news ever when the doctor came out talking with the nurse about the miscaariage.. they were worried about contacting your nearones, and how to convey the message.. I saw your closed eyes as you passed near me in that cart back into a room'

But still I didn't feel the satisfaction, I wanted to see your reaction and imagined myself facing you as you cry loud with a winning smile on my face' to reaffirm you what I can do and more over not to go against Nayantara even in your thoughts, you won't be able to tolerate the consequences..

But then you gave me the biggest surprise.. as the nurse walked out, I thought of sneeking in to hear you and remind you , it is me.... because I can't take your silence, I wanted to hear your cry.. in your loudest possible voice.. but then surprisingly I saw your room door opening, I saw your lifeless body walking out in trance.. I got shocked, but as I followed you I realized, you are not in sense.. I thought of giving you a shake..but then you walked on that street aimlessly.. I guided you to your destiny' you don't know when you got fainted' I only asked them to take you to Hoshiarpur, to warn them too.. not to play with Nayantara.. but when your conscious came back, you just sat there.. I didn't want that to happen.. I was ready to face you, but then your village people started coming and starring at you.....; I heard what they were saying.. I saw the villagers coming rushing to your place with shining swords' I didn't expect that, but that was your destiny.. I did feel little sad, I didn't get a chance to tell you that it is me;' but then I didn't want to get into trouble either as I saw the crowd.. who knows who will turn against me.. so only I left you right there, and imagined myself what happened next'

She kept her empty glass on side table , got upto get wet ' as she walked she said.. Now it is your turn Meera.. Let me see how you are going to escape from me' with that thought she dipped her body int that chlorine smell blue water'

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Geet was in her imagination world.. now she got a different idea.. she ran to the workplace to tell the new change.. as she entered the main room , she felt something different.. she got silent for a second.. but then.. she looked for Romeo and Manish' she saw them at the wall side, doing the long strokes ' she ran near to them to share the change.. suddenly her eyes gone in suspicion as she saw a familiar figure in front of her. He was doing the long strokes with red paints..but he looked different'

She called out slowly in doubt.." hello".. no response.. she called again.." hei'" no response.. she saw Romeo and Manish trying to control their giggles'. She lost her patient.. and she with her power called" Hei, Mr"..
Her eyes gone wild in surprise as she saw the person in IP uniform, except he was wearing a white T under' she met her husband's naughty smile.." as if she caught him while playing peek-a-boo..

"What are you doing here?"

He gave the paint bucket in Romeo's hand walked towards her.. Romeo gave Manish a smile..

Maan: actually Geet, I was free today, so thought of spending my time with you.. after coming here only I came to know about your plan of changing the face of IP.. so I thought let me help you too..

She looked at him: so that is why you are wearing this uniform?

Maan just nodded his head in agrement..

Maan: Please Geet,let me finish this.. Ok.. I love it.. I never knew that I can paint beautifully.. see .. , look at my work..

Geet made a serious face..

Maan looked at Manish and Romeo for help.. but then saw Geet walking away with an angry face..

The music started playing in the background' the whole employees in their uniform looked at each other.. they joined MSK as he moved his lips with the lyrics and his feet started moving as if in a dream..'.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3bmFZOggozA

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Tumko Bulaoon

Ye Palkhein Bichhaoon

Kadam Tum Jahan Jahan Rakho

Zameen Ko Aasmaan Banaoon

Sitaron Se Sajaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Main Titliyon Ke Peechhe Bhagoon

Main Jugnuon Ke Peechhe Jaoon

Ye Rang Hai Vo Roshni Hai

Tumhare Paas Dono Laoon

Jitni Khushbuain Baag Mein Milein

Haan Jitni Khushbuain Baag Mein Milein

Main Laoon Vahan Pe Ki Tum Ho Jahan

Jahan Pe Ek Pal Bhi Thehro Main Gulsitaan Banaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Agar Kaho To Main Sunaoon

Tumhein Haseen Kahaniyaan

Sunogi Kya Meri Zabani

Tum Ek Pari Ka Daastaan

Ya Main Karoon Tumse Bayaan

O Ya Main Karoon Tumse Bayaan

Ki Raja Ko Rani Mili Thi Kahan

Kahaniyon Ke Nagar Mein Tumhein Leke Jaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Tumko Bulaoon

Ye Palkhein Bichhaoon

Kadam Tum Jahan Jahan Rakho

Zameen Ko Aasmaan Banaoon

Sitaron Se Sajaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon

Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon

Agar Tum Kaho

Agar Tum Kaho

( Can you imagine MSk doing all these to make his wife happy, I can easily, so you can too).. Geet don't know when she joined him.. he just got her into his mood.. they forgot everything, all the tension.. the employees had fun taking steps with MSK and Geet'.

The clap sound from the group brought everyone back onto reality..

MSK: Ok guys.. we are done for today.. all the employees are getting half day off' go and have fun..

Before Geet could open her mouth.. she saw everyone happily dispersed and .. within few seconds the main room was empty and left only maan and Geet alone..

MSK: come , now let's go too..

Geet: What are you doing here?

MSk: nothing, I just came to see you..

Geet: no, You didn't come for that.. I never seen you like this, I never seen you mingling with employees and giving them half day leave' what's happening..

MSK: nothing Geet, please don't ask much.. please, come with me.. Let's go out..

She understood his tone.., to light the moment she said: mum.. let me go and change quick..

MSk: geet, I also Need to change, can I come with you too..

Geet gave a look and walked away' MSK brushed on his back side of head with a naughty smile'

They changed quick and back in car.. They simply roamed around.. geet was trying to read his mind..they had their dinner and it was totally dark outside..

Geet: Let's go to KC

Maan's feet forced on the break, and looked at her in shock'

Geet in normal face and in same normal tone said: Yes, I want to go KC..

Maan: But Geet, now everyone might have gone'

Geet: I am not interested to see any employees.. I just want to see my cabin and see how you changed it'

Maan: are you sure..

Geet: hum'

With a smile on his face, he slowly started driving towards KC..

They entered the lift' He held her hand tight as the scenes of him dragging her through the hallway pinched his heart with pain.. he looked at her and noticed no change on her expression..

He just followed as she took the initial steps to get out from the lift and walked towards his cabin.. she turned back and saw Maan standing in silence.. she held his hand and made him to sit on his chair'

He looked at her in wonderment..

Geet took a notepad and a pen in her hand ans said: Ok, tell me what you want'

Maan looked at her in confusion..

Geet: Maan sir, aap ko kaunsi file chahiye vo mujhe betha deejiye.. and ha.. this is office, and you are my boss, tell me what you want..

Maan still in silence..

Geet: Maan sir , please tell me fast, otherwise your wife may get angry, I am not responsible if you get late..

He realized the teasing tone underneath line' he got back into action.. he started giving the orders' within few hours, everything got straightened and he did finish his work magically.. By then Geet arranged all files in order inside MSK's cabin'

Maan raised both his arms up in the air and stretched his back in big relief and closed his eyes.... he felt the relief.. all the tension melt away within few hours.. he took some deep breath, and slowly opened his eyes.. he looked at Geet, she almost finished arranging the file on the cabinet with easy findings' he walked near to her.. Geet was completely into finishing up her work. So that he doesn't have to depend on others..

Looking at the cabinet, she said; Ok, now from tomorrow if anybody take any file from here, you need to ask them to replace back here after completing.. OK.. Then everything will be in order.. she smiled in satisfaction as she mentioned that..

The silence brought her back into time.. and forced her to turn , she bumped onto him' she looked at him and met his passionate eyes'a current passed through her... she felt shy.. her eyes dropped down unknowingly' she turned quickly...
Part-10 (please click the like button if you are moving towards next part, thank you..)
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Thank you so much friends. You all are awesome.. I don't know how to express my thanks for giving me such valuable comments.. I know it takes your time..and I really appreciate your time '.. and thank you for clicking that like button.. that is an added fuel for me to continue my story..

Precap: "here I am your boss, so you need to obey what I say...". in a husky voice he continued...." you only told that earlier.." she felt the shivering as she felt his breath near her neck and his arms slide over her back...

Devika....
Edited by avi4rubi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was a grt update...loved the maaneet scenes :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg!! pls contiune!! cant wait 2 c wat appens nxt!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
jaldi jaldi update karo plsss..cant see any action in the show atleast let me enjoy here..
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the way Geet understood Maan's tension and the ease with which she handled it all😊 Very well written...updt soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part Devika....all the Maaneet Scenes were great...Maan singing for Geet...surely its a new on eand a good one too....and he's unable to manage his office without her......and its good to see Geet finally coming out of her shell....But u really stopped where u shouldn't stop....now please don't keep us waiting for long and update soon....please........
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it yaar..geet is so understanding ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.. omg cant believe maan singing for her... luved maneet scenes... do continue soon

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