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mamon.moon thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
nice update. why did u stop dear. plz continue soon. waiting 4 rajveer's reaction..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
hi
the up is really good
huda ab naina aur pooja ke room mein haai aur before he could see what it there in rajveer's dairy naina and pooja came into the room
but huda ko bhi kya idea aaya
he sent both of them to office by saying that capt rajveer wants to meet them
ab kya hoga jaldi se likhna and pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Nice update
Huda ab naina aur pooja ko kaise rokega Rajveer ko milne se
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
that was so good
plz continue soon

p.s. yaar ye confusion to mujhe bhi hai ki raj ki dairy naina ke paas kaise
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Raj ki DIARY..Naina ke room mein kese?-ye suspense jaldi hi reveal ho jayega!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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He reaches Capt. Rajveer's office. But he gets even more frightened to know that Pooja and Naina had already entered the office.

He sighs helplessly. All his running went in vain. He is caught in the situation. He starts thinking about what should he do now. Should he enter the room? Enter the room, and say what? He wasn't able to come up with any idea. But suddenly he sees Naina and Pooja coming out of the room. He thinks of running out from there as soon as he watches them coming, but…

Pooja: are rukk..Huda..kahan bhaag raha hai?

Huda: (turns) nahi..vo mujhe ummm…toilet jaana hai…emergency hai..main baad mein baat karta hoon.

Naina: theek hai..ja…par ye to bata ke Capt. Rajveer kahan milenge. Tune ye to bol diya ke unhone humme office mein bulaya hai..aur vo khud hi office mein nahi hai…hain kahan vo?

Huda: (thinks over what she just said and smiles to himself) haa vo..Rajveer sir ne mana kar diya tha..ke unhe tum logo se nahi milna hai..

Pooja: to phir pehle nahi bata sakhte the kya?

Huda: main vo..bhul gaya tha…dimag se hi nikal gaya..

Pooja: chal theek hai…ab toilet jaana bhi bhul gaya kya? Jaa na..

Huda: (confused) hmmm? (remembers his excuse) o..haan…jaa raha hoon. Tum log jaao na pehle..ladies first! Tum log chalo..

"Irritated" Pooja and "Not been able to meet Rajveer" Naina leave for their room. Huda thinks that it must have been the luckiest day for him. He thanks god and does a little victory dance and then leaves for his room.

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Next morning.

Huda-Alekh's room.

Huda wakes up from his bed and is surprised to find Alekh reading a book on his bed. From the first day of their training session, he hasn't seen Alekh reading..not even a hoarding or a pamphlet. He was very surprised to discover his this side. Although he doesn't like him and they were very good fighters, he couldn't control his eagerness and goes to his bed.

Huda: (leaning on the bed post) O ho…aaj to kamaal hi ho gaya…humhare apne Kaidi ji…I mean Alekh ji padh rahe hain…wow…kuchh to khaas hoga na…

Alekh: haan..hain na khaas…shayad tumhe pata nahi hai..par kal hamara Coding-Decoding test hai…ussi ke liye kuchh examples padh raha hoon…khud Capt. Rajveer ne kaha tha ke is diary mein unhone kuchh best examples likh rakhe hain..to unhone humme sirf aaj raat ke liye read karne ko diye hain..

Huda snatches the diary from his hand and looks at the front page of it. He is taken aback at the moment as he saw the same notebook in Naina's room. At that time, he thought that it must be Rajveer's PERSONAL DIARY..but he was wrong. It was just HIS DIARY containing Coding-Decoding examples.

But he was still confused. As he saw the diary in Naina's room last night.

Alekh: kya hua ab de na diary..

Huda gives the diary back to him and asks:

Huda: lekin ye maine Naina ke paas dekhi thi..

Alekh: haan…diary to ek hi hai na..aur cadets itne saare..to sab ko paas karni hai diary. Naina ne mujhe abhi subah-subah hi di..

Huda is now cleared with all his doubts. He swears not to heed in Naina's matters. He now thought that there was nothing like "that" between Naina and Rajveer. He signs and goes to the washroom to get ready for the day.

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Hope you liked the part. Do comment.

mamon.moon thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
nice part, really funny. all huda's thought turns like this. 😆 continue soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
hi
the up is good
toh humara din aaj lucky haai he got saved
aacha haai
aur hume diary ka bhi pata laaga
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Nice part
It was indeed Huda's lucky day as Raj was not in his office when naina and pooja went there.
Aur uska confusion bhi clear ho gaya ke naina ke paas Raj ki personal diary nahi thi...sirf notes ki copy thi.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
that was so good
plz continue soon

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