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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
kya socha aur kya nikla.raj ki mom wo uski shaadi karwane aye hai.kash asli lrl mein aisa hota toh kitna maja ata so funny.waise ekdum sahi jagah ayi hai mummyji.kyunki unki bahu bhi toh yehi hai.par unke bhole bete ko toh wo dikhti hi nahin.ab toh huda ki mummyji aur raj ki mom mein solid competetion hoga.kahin jo boxing match raj ur huda ke bich mein hua tha o do moms ke bich mein na ho yaha.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Wow what a twist
yudi and ali cannot believe that Rajveer's mom could be this jolly.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Hehe....that was Raj's mom....nice to knw dat....and the scene for a fact....turned out to be really interesting!! However....I hav read all the parts....(perhaps when they were being updated)....but guess didnt comment till now....sorry for that.....

Anyways....its a nice fic...and its gud to find an LRL fic.....pls continue soon....n whenever u UD, pls PM me if possible...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
sorry for late reply...

but d updts were too good and dis one is toh very funny and amazing....

gr8..
...👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Ali has written the letter and has got leave permission for one week. He has packed his bags and is now leaving the academy. Everybody is there to bid him goodbye at the exit point. It is a big open hall bounded by thick wired boundaries. The main gate is of iron with a number of guards on either side.

The cadets and group are standing near the gate and conversing about how much they would miss each other.

Ali: chalo yaar…ab hume chalna chahiye…alvida..

Huda: bye..aur apna khayal rakhna..aur apni behan ka bhi…

Ali: jee..Huda bhai..aur kuchh??

Naina: meri taraf se sabko badhai dena..

Pooja: meri taraf se bhi….

Ali: jee..

Yudi: meri taraf se bhi bro.. and please take care of yourself..and we'll miss you a lot. Do call..okay??

Ali nods obeying his banter.

Alekh: ab tu nikal…ye tujhe pakka denge…time ho raha hai..tu jaa..

Ali: hmm….khuda aafiz..

Everybody smiles and wish him goodbyes again. Huda and Yudi give Ali tight rib-crashing hugs while others just bound him in a small side hug.

After all the departure drama, he picks up his bags and leaves the academy. Everybody with an idea of how much they are going to miss Ali, watch him peacefully leaving the academy. Naina turns around and is surprised to find tears in Yudi's eyes. Yudi and Ali have really close in this period of time.

Naina: Yudi? Look at you..you are crying? Huh? Seriously? (bewildered to see a guy like Yudi crying)

Yudi: kuchh nahi..bas vo aise hi..

Naina: are yaar…ab ye mat bolna ke aankh mein kachra aa gaya tha…seriously..bohat purana bahana hai..(Yudi snickers amidst his tears)

Till now Huda and Alekh had already left for their room. And Pooja was there with the guards, asking them about they pass their time in this boring KMA……(Pooja will be Pooja..hehehe)

Yudi: bechara Ali!!

Naina: bechara kyun? He is so damn lucky that he is meeting his family. And also he has got a friend like you..why is he a "bechara"?

Yudi: nahi…Bechara isiliye kyunki vo yahan ka saara drama miss kar dega na..

Naina: yahan ka drama? What do you mean? (confused)

Yudi: haan..yahan Rajveer sir ki so called mummy ji ka drama..Sir ki shaadi ka drama..(laughs at the predictable drama)

Naina: WHAT???? (highly shocked and horrified)

Yudi: haan..tumhe nahi pata?(Naina shakes her head) Rajveer sir ke mom idhar KMA mein aayi hui hain…for his marriage. Can you believe that? Idhar kya unhe apni bahu milengi?

Naina: (speaking to herself) shayad mil bhi jaaye..

Yudi: Did you say something?

Naina: umm..nahi..kuchh nahi..let's go.

Yudi: ya..chal..(turns towards Pooja, who was showing her cell phone to an old beared moustached guard) Chalein Pooja?

Pooja: haan..tum log chalo..I am just coming..(to guard) aap apna Bluetooth on karo na..

Yudi shakes his head at Pooja and turns back to find Naina.

But as he turns, he finds Naina running away from to the stairs.

Yudi: (to himself) ab ise kiya hua? (sighs) Chalo main to chala…J

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to be cont.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Thats a nice part.....I was wondering....Rajveer ko shayad Naina pehle se janti hai....I mean its quite obvious she has a romantic feeling for him....well watever it is.....I am loving this....its sumthing really new and I havnt cum across such angle...hehe. Am looking forward to the next part eagerly....thnx for the PM dear.....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
nice update. why naina is shocked on hearing rajveer's marriage. continue soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
that was so sweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
hi
the up is nice
so ali aapne ghar ke nikal gaya aur sab log usse seeoff karne ke liye haai that's nice
but yaar naina ka mann udhas ho gaye yeh sunte hee ke rajveer ke mom uske shaadi akrwane ke liye aaye haai
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: mamon.moon

nice update. why naina is shocked on hearing rajveer's marriage. continue soon.........

are yaar..she likes him..to ye news sunke bura to lagega na..

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