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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

8:00 a.m.

Ali-Yudi's room

Ali is a totally into some thinking. Since night he has been behaving as if he was a statue. He didn't even have dinner last night. Only because of some phone call which he received last night. Yudi has asked him several times about what has happened to him? Why was he so silent? Who called him the last night? But he refused to tell him. But Yudi couldn't control it any more and finally he decides to bring it out from him.

Yudi: (to Ali,who is still lost in dreams) yaar..please tell me..hua kya hai??

Ali: kuchh nahi…Yudi bhai..maine bola na..kuchh nahi..

Yudi: Dude, you gotta tell me right away…NOW!!

Ali stays quiet. But Yudi didn't. He kept asking him all the way he was getting ready for the day. Finally, he said:

"Okk…don't tell me..FINE…I am going to yell out to the whole KMA ke tumne mera murder karne ki koshish ki..cuz I came to know about your dirty secrets. "

Ali at once stood up from his bed and shook his head and said:

"nahi…aap aisa mat karna..please…bohat bada bakheda ho jayega"

Yudi: then, tell me..hua kiya hai??? There must be something seriously wrong na..??(raising his eyebrows)

Ali: haan…vo actually..ab hum aap ko kaise batayein…

Yudi: let me help..apne gale se try karo..nahi to apne mouth se..varna Himesh Reshamiya ke jaise nose se bolo…as your wish..

Ali: aapko yeh sab mazaak lag raha hai…aapko pata hai ke baahar kya ho raha hai…mujhe ye academy chodkar..aap sab ko chodkar…jaana hoga…kyunki mujhe koi apna chhod kar jaa raha hai…

And with that he starts crying…tears tickling down from his small brown eyes. Yudi at once becomes serious and melts at the statement that Ali would be leaving them.

Yudi(worried) : But why? Hua kia hai? Kaun chhod kar jaa raha hai?

Ali: (wiping off his tears) kuchh nahi…

Yudi: bata na yaar..please..I am your friend na…puri baat to bata..kaun tujhe chhod kar jaa raha hai? Aur tu hume kyun chhod kar jayega? Tell me no??(patting his back to calm him)

Ali: vo..vo..(sobbing) Barkha ki shaadi ho rahi hai…

Yudi: who Barkha? Your girlfriend?

Ali: (at once) nahi..nahi…meri BEHAN…kya aap bhi Yudi bhai..

Yudi: achha theek hai..she's getting married…to tum ro kyun rahe the?

Ali: ab uski shaadi ho jayegi…vo mujhe chhor kar chali jayegi…aur mujhe bhi uski shaadi mein jaana hai…to mujhe bhi KMA se jaana hoga..aap sab se door..

Yudi: (hiding his laughter) tum bhi na..yaar..it's ok..aisa chalta hai..just chill! Aur vaise bhi tum hume hamesha ke liye thoda na chhodkar jaa rahe ho..

Ali: vo baat to hai..

Yudi: And you told me that you are missing your sisters..and family members. So go and meet them yaar..tumhe ek achha sa reason mil gaya hai KMA se baahar jaana ka..you should be happy.

Ali: really?

Yudi: yes ofcouse..

Ali: lekin mujhe chhuti kaise milegi?

Yudi: Let's go to Rajveer Sir and ask him..

Ali: theek hai..chaliye..

They moved out of their room to reach Rajveer's office to ask him about the leave process. As they reached his office, they heard some voices coming from inside. There were two voices- one of a male and another of a female. They could recognize Rajveer's voice but who was the lady present in the room? Frightened, they knocked the door of his office.

Just after a single knock, the voices coming from the office faded. Ali and Yudi shared confused looks. But suddenly, Capt. Rajveer opened the door. As the door opened, Yudi and Ali saw Rajveer and a lady wearing a blue saari standing there. They couldn't see her face as she had her back towards them.

-----------------------------------------------------------------to be cont.

Love

Riddhi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
nice part. thnx 4 the pm. who is the lady? Dr. Ritu? continue soon...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Nice part
Bechare Yudi ko kitni mehnat karni padi yeh janane ke liye ki Ali kis baat se pareshan hai.
Who is this lady with Rajveer?
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
hi 😊
the up is nice😊
ali and yudi scene is good😊😊😊😊😊😊
but no raj naina feeling bad
aur yeh lady kon haai 😕😕😕😕😕😕😕
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
hey nice part....
do continue soon....
n do pm me pls......:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
hey maine ek ghanta pehle hi ye read karna start kya and i found it great again lrl with new story line.great great.aj mujhe apne reader list mein add karlo.story is very good.it has a nice flow.parke mujhe boht maza aya dil se.bt now who is entering?it must be dr.ritu?cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Keep guessing..and for sure its not Dr. Ritu..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Just after a single knock, the voices coming from the office faded. Ali and Yudi shared confused looks. But suddenly, Capt. Rajveer opened the door. As the door opened, Yudi and Ali saw Rajveer and a lady wearing a blue saari standing there. They couldn't see her face as she had her back towards them.

Rajveer: Yes cadets? (surprised to find them at this time)

Yudi: umm..vo Sir hume aap se kuchh baat karni thi..

Rajveer: kis bare mein?

Yudi: umm..vo leave procedure ke liye…(bending a little to see who's the lady in the office)

Rajveer: firstly, stand straight. (Yudi and Ali both become erect) Good! Now tell me who needs to have a break?

Ali: jee..hume..

Rajveer: Okay..write an application with a STRONG reason. Put on your signatures on that and you have to submit your ID card with that too.

Ali: jee Sir..

Rajveer: And if your reason for leave is not strong enough, then you aren't given leaves..clear.

Yudi: jee sir..use leave isiliye chahiye kyunki.

Rajveer: (interpreting him) I am not interested in hearing your damm reasons..

As he speaks the line, the lady from inside screams out…

Lady: haan…haan..tu to kisi ki bhi baat sun ne mein interested nahi hai,,,(in a Punjabi accent)

The lady looked around 55 years of age. She has wrinkles under her dark brown eyes. She was not too fat but far away from being called a "size zero". Ali and Yudi could figure out that she had the same eyes as Rajveer's. She wore several gold rings and golden bangles. Her dangles were so long that it seemed like she has joined two dangles to make one.

Rajveer: mom aap andar jaiye..please..

Yudi: Sir ye aapki mom hain? (raising his eyebrows to its peak)

Rajveer: haan…to isme itna hairaan hone ki kya baat hai? Sabki maa hoti hai..

Lady aka Rajveer's mum: haan..sab ki maa hoti hai..par unke bachhe unko aise treat nahi karte jaise tum apni maa ko karte ho…vo bhi sagi…main tumhari sagi maa hoon…koi sauteli nahi..

Rajveer: shut up mom..vo mere cadets hain..unke same to mat shuru ho jaao..

Mummy: chup kar…cadets hain to hain…unhe koi problem nahi hai isse..haina?

Yudi and Ali just nodded sincerely. But as Rajveer looks at them, they shake their heads. Again his mother gives them a "what" kind of look and they nod again. And again Rajveer gives them a grim look and they start the shaking procedure. This continues for some time but to stop this nonsense, Yudi speaks up..

Yudi: umm…auntie aap yahan kaise? I mean kuchh kaam tha Rajveer Sir se?

Mummy: haan..putar..ab ye tumhaara sir..hai to mera beta hi na..uski shaadi ki chinta to hogi hi na mujhe..

Yudi and Ali: (at once) SHAADI??????

Mummy: haan..shaadi..ab uski umar ho gayi hai..ab nahi to kya meri umar mein shaadi karega?

Rajveer: mom…please..stop it.

Mummy: tu chup kar(slightly hitting him on his arm) are bachhon tumhari nazar mein koi achhi sushil ladki ho na..to mujhe zaroor batana…

Yudi and Ali: jee auntie..

Rajveer: kya jee auntie..go back to your rooms..training ke liye late ho jayoge..and Ali write that application too. You would have to submit to Brigadier. Now dismiss..

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I know it's a short part. But sorry...and again no RN scenes...so sorry again...but next time promise to come witha bang...Bye...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
hi 😊
the up is really sweet😃
ali aur yudi kitne curious haai humare tara us lady ko dekhne ke liye😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
aur finally hume pata chala that that lady was non other then mummmy jee of rajveer wow 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
aur kitna funny haai oppsoite of kharus rajveer😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
ab woh yahaan aapne bahu dhundhne aaye haai 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
are bahu dhundhne ka pata hum baata deta haai aapko mummy jee😉 "naina "naam hai uska toh plz jaldi se jaake mil lijiye aap aur baat kijiye usse aapne bete rajveer ke 😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛warna yeh rajveer ke uper chora toh pata nahin aapke umar mein bhi shaddi ho apyega iske ya nahin mujhe pata nahin 😕😕😕😕😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow funny part. the lady is raj's mom. now who will be the potential bride for raj according to his mom. continue soon...........

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