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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

the up is really good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
pooja aur naina rajveer ke gaana sunke ho jaate haai ek dam spellbound😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍lekin rajveer is rajveer he asks them why they are here
toh pooja says that she came here to take her charger toh rajveer pucchta haai ke uska charger itne kilo ka haai jo usse kisi aur ke zarurat ho gaye usse leene ke liye
pooja toh angry ho gaye😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 yeh sunte he aur usse itne zor se door lock kar ke chale gaye ke door locked ho gaye😲😲 😲😲😲😲
oh this pooja bhi naa itna gussa baap re 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
par yaar mujhe toh pooja ke is gusse par bhi bohot pyaar aa raha haai 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉aaj uske ke baaja ke naina aur rajveer dono akele kamre mein rahe jaate haai
wah bhai wah 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
ab rajveer aur naina drum bajate haai aur naina ko rajveer mein ek fun loving insan nazar aata haai jo ke aam rajveer se bilkul aalag haai
plz cont soon and pm me

sach mein...Pooja ka gussa hume hasa raha tha..n i loved writing RN part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Nice part
Naina is surprised to see the fun loving and relaxed side of Rajveer. Raj explains that he is strict with them because he wants to make them better soldiers.
Huda is shocked to see Raj and naina locked together in the activity room.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
wow nice part. thnx 4 the pm. continue soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Next day.

In Caf.

Huda is standing near a pole in the Cafeteria. He has ordered a Coke and is thinking of Naina and Raj's incident last day.

Huda: (to himself) kuchh to chakar zaroor hai…pata lagana padega..

Servant: Aapnki coke sir! (showing him the tray)

Huda: (picking up the bottle) thanks.

Servant: yehi to humari kaam hai sir…(winks at him)

Huda: (raising his eyebrows) oye hoye….

Servant smiles. Huda comes to know that the servant is very flattering and is like "har cheez ki khabar rakhne wala" type.

Huda: achha sun..(putting a 50 rupees note in his pocket) ye…ummm…achha pehle ye bata ke tera naam kya hai?

Servant: naam ka kya karoge sir..kaam ki baat karo na…vaise mera naam Krantikaar Satish Bishnoi Kumar Mathur hai…

Huda: achha…Krant……umm…

Servant: kaha than a name ki chhodo kaam ki baat karo…vaise aap mujhe chhotu bula sakte hain..

Huda: achha sun chhotu…ye tujhe pata hai ke Naina, jo idhar cadet hai…uska kya chakar chal raha hai…Capt. Rajveer ke saath..

Servant: vo Naina singh.??

Huda: haan..haan…wahi(getting a little excited)

Chhotu: vo jo room no. 230 mein hai…jiski room mate ka naam Pooja hai??

Huda: are haan haan wahi..

Chhotu: uske bare mein to kuchh aur pata nahi ji…

Huda: dhat tere ki…to phir khaali peeli dimaag kyun kha raha tha chal nikal..(taking out the 50 rupees note)

Huda: (to himself) kuchh soch yaar…kuchh soch kya karoon…

Just then he sees Yudi passing by. He is holding some books in his hand and walking weirdly.

Huda: (yelling at Yudi) hey Yudi!

As Yudi turns to look who the hell has stopped him in his way, all his books fall on the floor. Huda comes and helps him pick up the books. It was the right time for Huda to get everything out of Yudi.

Huda: (putting a book over another one in Yudi's arms) yaar…umm…ye itni saari kitaabon ka kya kar raha hai?

Yudi: nahi vo library mein return karne jar aha tha. Kuchh meri books hain..kuchh Pooja ki..kuchh Ali ki..kuchh Naina k…

Huda: (speaks as he hears her name) are haan…vo fulandevi..i mean..Naina kahan hai..??

Yudi: Apne room mein hi hogi..Pooja bhi aur Naina bhi..pata nahi kya secrets chhupe hain unke room mein…saara din wahin bethi rehti hai..

Huda thinks of what Yudi has said-" pata nahi kya secrets chhupe hain unke room mein…saara din wahin bethi rehti hai.." and smiles as he has got the way to find out about Naina's secret, while Yudi counts the number of the books. Then they both get up and leave.

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Night time.

Outside girls' hostel.

As Huda comes to know that Pooja and Naina have left for their dinner, he makes a plan to enter their room. He arranges a key for their room from the service office. Chhotu helped him in this work. Now he's waiting for the corridors to get deserted so that he can get to their room.

Huda: (to himself) yaar ye ladkiyaan kitna matak-matak ke chalti hain…jaldi se bhaag nahi sakti kya…

His this wish come true at the same time as he notices that there wasn't a single girl left there in the corridor. He sighed as he entered the hostel.

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Huda enters room no.230 which was Pooja-Naina' room. He locks the door behind him. This was the first time he entered a girl's room. He found same as his room..but somewhat different from his too.

It felt as if there was a different kind of air in their room. As if the oxygen there has added some compounds to it. As if the air has turned "pink". The whole was filled with lavender fragrances. Although the room was clean and neat, he thought he wouldn't be able to survive in the "pinkish" room for long. Then he starts searching for something of his importance.

After a long search, he couldn't find anything in the room but flowers, ornaments, clothes, clothes and clothes. He sighed due to his failure.

Suddenly he notices something on the table. It was a notebook which read" MY DIARY". He spontaneously hurried over to it.

He expected it to be Naina's diary but he was shocked out of his wits to know that it was the diary of Capt. Rajveer.

-----------------to be cont.--------------------

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
hi 😊 the up is good 😊😊😊
huda toh abhie bhi us rajveer aur naina ke baare mein soch raha haai😊 aur usne toh servent ko bribe bhi kiya taki he can gt something😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 but nothing he gets😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 so ab woh chala gaya girls hotel mein pooja aur naina ko room mein 😲😲😲
are baapre ab uske haath laaga haai rajveer ke dairy 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
plz jaldi se cont karna and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
nice update. thnx 4 the pm. why rajveer's diary is in naina's room? continue soon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
that was so good
Raj ki diary Naina ke room mein
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mamon.moon

nice update. thnx 4 the pm. why rajveer's diary is in naina's room? continue soon..........

That would be revealed soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Nice part
Huda aapni jasusi karne mein busy hai. He wants to know ki Raj aur Naina ke beech mein kya hai,
Raj ki dairy naina ke paas kaise aayi? Does Raj know that his diary his missing?
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Suddenly he notices something on the table. It was a notebook which read" MY DIARY". He spontaneously hurried over to it.

He expected it to be Naina's diary but he was shocked out of his wits to know that it was the diary of Capt. Rajveer.

He started thinking about how RAJVEER's diary came in Naina's room.

Huda: (to himself) yeh kya chakar hai yaar…main to soch raha tha daal mein kuchh kala hai…lekin yahan to hai hi kaali dal…

He opens the diary to read it but suddenly he hears some voices outside the room. They were the voices of Naina and Pooja. He places the diary back at its place and hide himself behind a curtain.

Then Pooja and Naina enter the room, laughing.

Pooja: yaar..aaj to maza hi aa gaya…aisa lag raha tha ke koi comedy session chal raha hai…(laughs)

Naina: hmmm…pata hai..my cheeks were paining with laughter.

Pooja: hehehehe…yaar ye room ki lights kyun on hain? Maine jaate waqt band kar di thi.

Naina: are you sure ke tune band ki thi?

Huda, who is standing behind a curtain, is listens to all this bits his lower lip. He has to do something…he has to go out of the room..out of the girls' hostel before he is encountered.

Pooja: haan yaar..I am sure. Pakka band ki thi.

Naina: achha chal chhod na…koi baat nahi..ab so jaa kar so jaate hain.. mujhe bohat neend aa rahi hai..

Pooja: okay...(starts preparing her bed) mera cell diyo Naina…tere bed ke paas pada hai..

As Naina picks up the cell and gives it to Pooja, Huda gets an idea to move out of the room. He takes out his cell from his pocket and Pooja's number. Pooja gets the call, sees Huda calling her and picks up the phone.

Online Conversation:

Pooja: Hello Huda…bol..itni raat ko kyun phone kiya?

Huda: (slowly in a low voice) vo..ummm…tujhe aur Naina ko room se bahaar jaana padega.

Pooja: baahar jaana padega? Matlab?(raising her eyebrows)

Naina sits up straight on her bed listening to this.

Huda: Mera matlab hai ke tum dono ko office mein bulaya hai..(rolls his tongue)

Pooja: office mein? Kisne?

Huda: ummm…Capt. Rajveer ne.(hits his forehead for his stupidity)

Pooja: Capt. Rajveer ne? Kyun?

On hearing Capt. Rajveer's name, Naina sets herself more erect.

Huda: pata nahi…tum dono jaaona apne room se…mera matlab hai jaldi se office mein jao.

Pooja: achha theek hai…

Huda: chal rakh..bye

Pooja: bye!

On putting off the phone, Pooja tells Naina about their conversation on phone. Naina doesn't know why but she becomes excited to meet Rajveer.

Pooja: chal chalein..

Naina: aise?

Pooja: aise matlab?

Naina: Mera matlab hai ke..kapade to change kar lein na..

Pooja: chhod na..hum kaunsa kisi ki shaadi mein jaa rahe hai..hehe..chal.

Naina: achha mujhe karne de..tujhe nahi karne to mat kar…

Pooja: lekin kyun yaar?

Naina: nahi yaar…aise achha nahi lagta…udhar Capt. Rajveer honge aur..(bits her lower lip)

Pooja: haan honge to?

Naina: mera matlab hai ke…..I mean hum night dress mein udhar jayenge…to hame thand to lagegi na..udhar agar hum kaapenge to…Capt. Rajveer hume daateinge na ke tum dress up hokar kyun nahi aaye..you know…

Pooja: vaise teri baat bhi theek hai..unhe to vaise bhi daatne ke liye koi bahaana chahiye bas..

Naina: (at once) shut up Pooja!! Aise nahi bolte. Ab taiyaar ho ja..

Pooja: ok.

While they are dressing up, Huda closes his eyes, although they are changing in the washroom. When they dress up and leave, Huda comes out of the curtains, takes a huge breath and leaves. Now he is stuck in the problem. What should he do to prevent Pooja and Naina's going in the office. He runs as fast as he could to stop them.

He reaches Capt. Rajveer's office. But he gets even more frightened to know that Pooja and Naina had already entered the office.

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Hope you liked the part. I had great fun writing it. Do comment.

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