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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nice part dear. Rajveer-Naina as a couple.....hmm....there is sum ray of hope I guess!! Gud that the trio will now help RN to sort out their feelings. All the best for the xams dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update was too good.
Raj does not like it when naina leaves with her brother and bhabhi. And this does not go unnoticed by shravan. Naina also feels the same but both of them just brush off their feelings thinking that it cannot be love.
Shravan tells Raj the reason behind him taking rat poison and promises Raj that he would never do such a thing again.
Shravan is the perfect cupid...he not only makes Raj realise that he loves naina but also calls up Arman and Riddhima to take their help for uniting RN.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

"All the best bhai! Jaisa maine bola hai vaisa hi karma", Shravan said as Rajveer is about to enter Naina's room. He, Shravan, Armaan and Riddhima are standing just at the door of Naina's room in AR's home. They have made a plan where firstly, Rajveer would convince Naina to come along with him to the beach party. And ofcourse, she would say yes for three reasons. 1. Naina loves parties; plus, she has never attended a beach party. 2. Everybody else is going to the party, so she would also carry along; and for that, she needed a partner. 3. The most important reason, she loves "Rajveer"..how could she say a "no" to him??? Then, Rajveer would have to convince Naina for shopping…in order to spend some alone time with her and make "his" importance being felt to "her. And, then at the party, finally, he would to confess his love for her…and then the story would continue as –'Happily lived ever after'..!!!

"Kuchh gadbad to nahi hogi na?" Rajveer questioned "the plan makers".

Armaan: Nahi nahi!! Don't lose your confidence man. Just do as we said. I know it's a bit uneasy; but pyaar kiya to paana to padega na?

Rajveer: No..no.. I think you mixed them. It's "pyaar kiya to darna kya" and "dosti ki hai to nibhani to padegi na". Nahi? (looking at bizarre faces of Shravan and Riddhima)

Armaan: Yeah! Whatever. The point is "tumhe Naina chahiye ya nahi?"

Rajveer: (without even registering the question) Haan! Haan! Chahiye!

Armaan: Bas to phir? Take it easy dude! Karna padta hai. Maine bhi Riddhima ko impress karne ke liye bohat papad bele hain.

Riddhima: (blushingly elbows him) Armaannnn!!!

Armaan: (smiling wide) aur nahi to kya? Pyaar mein ye sab karma padta hai yaar! (taps Rajveer's shoulder)

Just then, something unexpected happens. Naina comes out of her room, hearing some hustle-bustle. Clad in a girly pink top and plaited white shorts, Naina looked just ready to go and hit the waves at the beach, but ofcourse not for "the beach party". In her casuals and a ping ponytail,she looked so untailored, sporty and unfussy that Rajveer couldn't get his eyes off her. He got totally mesmerized by her looks. With almost no make-up too, she looked pretty, Rajveer thought.

Naina: Aap sab yahan? (perplexed)

Shravan: aa..aa..aahaan..vo..actually na..vo..umm..tum..i mean aapko..to pata hi hai na ke kal beach party hai! (Naina nods) To umm…vo hum..(looking at Rajveer) Bhai aapse kuchh kehna chahte hai.(without a break)

Rajveer: (shocked at the sudden shift of responsibility onto him) main? Umm..haan vo..umm..

Riddhima: (realizing the need for a private conversation) Vo mujhe kapde uttarne the..to..

Armaan: (impulsively and stupidly) Riddhima sab ke saamne? (confused and possessive)

Riddhima: (disgusted at his statement) ARMAANNN!!!! (hits him hard) Main terrace pe se kapde utarne ki baat kar rahi thi!!

Armaan: Oh!! (cheekily) mujhe laga ke..

Riddhima: mujhe nahi sunna ke tumhe kya laga..mujhe pata hai tumhaari soch kitni gandi hai..

Armaan: lekin Riddhima tumne kaha hi aise tha to..

Riddhima: shut up Armaan!

Armaan: tum baat to suno..

Riddhima: Armaan! Please shut up! Aur ab chalo mere saath terrace pe..meri help karne ke liye..

Armaan: kapde uttarne mein? (smiling wide)

Riddhima: (showing a fake smile) tum chalo..batati hoon..kis liye..(eyeing him hard) aur Shravan tum bhi chalo..

Shravan: lekin main kyun?

Riddhima: tum abhi abhi discharge hue ho na..tumhaare liye khuli hawa achhi hai…(signaling him to leave Rajveer and Naina alone) hai na??(winking at him)

Shravan: Oh! Yeah! You are right. Mujhe "KHULI HAWA" mein jaana chahiye..umm.. (walks towards Rajveer and murmurs in his ears) All the best bhai! Jaise sikhaya tha vaise hi karma..(winks at him)

Armaan: Sh..Shravan..ab chalo! Ab chalna chahiye..(taps Rajveer's shoulder and winks at him)

As they leave, they take away the feeling of comfort from the oxygen present there. Now, the need was to use the comfort in the carbon dioxide present there, by making it as "inhalable" as oxygen. In short, using the "loneliness" for producing "comfort". And Rajveer surely wasn't a pro at that. This solitude was totally unexpected. He neither wanted them to stay and interrupt their privacy nor wanted them to go and make the situation more uneasy.

Naina, on the other hand, felt something strange in their behavior. But there was something more important that was running in her mind- What did Rajveer want to talk about? To her? This suspense was killing her from inside. Due to excitement, she felt frogs croaking in her belly. God!! What was the issue? What did he want to talk about?

Rajveer: umm..vo..

Naina: aap mujhse kya baat karna chahte the?

Rajveer: actually mein kuchh puchhna chahta tha..

Naina: achha! Actually mujhe bhi aapse kuchh puchhna tha..(timidly)

Rajveer: to puchho na..aur ab ye mat kehna ke pehle aap puchhiye. Pehle tum puchho.

Naina: (smiling) theek hai main hi puchhti hoon. (Rajveer smiles and nods) vo..kal beach party hai na..to kya aap mere saath challenge? (shyly)

Rajveer felt his heart pumping at an abnormal rate. He couldn't believe that what he wanted to ask her, was actually asked him by her! He was left dumbstuck. He stood there gaping.

Naina: umm..kya hua? Aap nahi jaana chahte?

Rajveer: (at once) nahi..nahi..

Naina: ok! It's fine. (cheerlessly)

Rajveer: are..nahi..nahi..matlab mera matlab ye nahi tha..main..i mean..main chalunga..(smiling) chalunga!!

Naina: (grinning wide) wow!! Thankyou..

Naina comes close to Rajveer and kisses his cheek. Wow!! Rajveer couldn't take in the fact the soft touch which he just felt were actually Naina's lips…NAINA's!!! wow!! It was so unbelievable…just like a dream. Naina also felt a strange spark down her body. She got so happy that she couldn't help but kiss him; to express her joy..herself!!

Naina: aa..aap bhi kuchh puchhna chahte the na? (trying to change the topic)

Rajveer: (smiling foolishly) actually..main bhi yehi puchhna chahta tha..(looking down)

Naina: What? Really!! What a coincidence!!

Rajveer: Yeah!! Sach mein!! Shayad hamara dil to dil ka koi connection hai. (more to himself than Naina)

Naina: Kya?

Rajveer: nahi kuchh nahi..(smiles to himself) main chalta hoon..kal milte hain..

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Yeah!! I'm back!! Finally..exams khatam ho gaya..and they went really well. Thanks to alll those who wished me good luck! Thanks..I love you all..
prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow great part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi 😊
so riddhi finally u got time to up ur fic 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i must say the up is good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
so as shravan armaan and rid is helping rajveer to invite naina for the beach party and then confess his love😳😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
so as planned they left rjaveer and naina alone so that they can talk 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
but before rajveer could say anything naina bol utth te haai 😳😳😳😳😳😳
rajveer ke haan sunke naina bhi uske gaal pe aapne pyar ka print de dete haai 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
haiiiiiiiiiii gaal pe kiss aagle baar lips pe hona chaheye
plz cotn soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear
Nice part..😊
Raj was so nervous to ask Naina to go with him to the beach party..but Armaan and Shravan were encouraging him to do so..😃
Raj was so lost to see Naina in her sipmle attire...
Ridhima and Armaan's nok khonk was too cute and funny..there can b a double meaning in such a simple sentence too.😆😆😆😉
Raj's wish was granted when Naina asked him to accompany her for the beach party and then she kissed him too..he was surely on the seventh heaven😆😉😃
Pls continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

so riddhi finally u got time to up ur fic 👏
i must say the up is good😊
so as shravan armaan and rid is helping rajveer to invite naina for the beach party and then confess his love😉
so as planned they left rjaveer and naina alone so that they can talk 😉
but before rajveer could say anything naina bol utth te haai 😳
rajveer ke haan sunke naina bhi uske gaal pe aapne pyar ka print de dete haai 😳
haiiiiiiiiiii gaal pe kiss aagle baar lips pe hona chaheye
plz cotn soon and pm me



wait..wait!! sabr ka fal meetha hota hai..lips pe bhi hogi!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Dear

Nice part..😊
Raj was so nervous to ask Naina to go with him to the beach party..but Armaan and Shravan were encouraging him to do so..😃
Raj was so lost to see Naina in her sipmle attire...(hmm..)
Ridhima and Armaan's nok khonk was too cute and funny..there can b a double meaning in such a simple sentence too.😉(yeah right)
Raj's wish was granted when Naina asked him to accompany her for the beach party and then she kissed him too..he was surely on the seventh heaven😆😉😃(undoubtedly)
Pls continue soon
Bye

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Arman and Shravan have come up with a plan to bring RN together, and so they want Raj to invite Naina for the beach party. But he is too nervous to speak evena single word.
Ridhima and Armaan little argument was very funny.
In the end Raj did not have to do anything as naina asked him out. Raj was overjoyed.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy!!!!!!
back after exams...........how are your exams???????????
and now the update it was very nice as they are planning to make naina and raj confess their feelings...........
continue soon.......

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