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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update.
raj was really a sweet heart.
like arman tooo.
nice update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Nice part

Arman and Shravan have come up with a plan to bring RN together, and so they want Raj to invite Naina for the beach party. But he is too nervous to speak evena single word.
Ridhima and Armaan little argument was very funny.
In the end Raj did not have to do anything as naina asked him out. Raj was overjoyed.
continue soon



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Posted: 14 years ago

I'll try to..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

heyyy!!!!!!

back after exams...........how are your exams???????????
and now the update it was very nice as they are planning to make naina and raj confess their feelings...........
continue soon.......


Yeah..back!! And cuz of god's grace..they went really well..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

beautiful update.

raj was really a sweet heart.
like arman tooo.
nice update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.


thanx..n armaan's more than a sweetheart actually!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
again a very very nice part.....

pinka28 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
i will definely read it
LRL pe fic oye hoye
thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

"Kya bhai! Maine aapko bola tha na ke shopping ke liye bhi puchhke aana", Shravan said in an irritating voice as Rajveer told him everything about his and Naina's talk the next morning.

Rajveer: are maine bola na..ke mere dimaag se hi nikal gaya..i am sorry.

Shravan: time pe khaana; time pe sona; time pe padhna; har chiz time to time karte ho..ek proposal time pe nahi maar paaye! (Rajveer looks down)

Rajveer: I'm sorry! (makes a cute puppy like face..shoo sweet)

Shravan: Achha it's okay…ab koi aur plan banao bhabhi ke saath time spend karne kaa.

Rajveer blushes at the word bhabhi and this doesn't go unnoticed by Shravan. And taking advantage of this, Shravan starts teasing him. (as he always does)

Shravan: oye hoye!! Mere sha-sha bhai!!

Rajveer: Now what's "sha-sha"?

Shravan: oh! Actually humare college mein ek ladka bahut sharmata tha..uska nick name "sha-sha" tha..tab se humne "shy" word ko change karke "sha-sha" hi bana diya..hehe..

Rajveer: Very funny!! Ab koi plan to soch. Mere aur apni bhabhi ke liye..(Rajveer went in with the flow)

Shravan: Kya? Kya? Kya kaha aapne? (hitting his shoulder with his)

Rajveer: (blushing) nahi..vo um..i mean..

Shravan: ya..i know what you mean! (smiling)

Rajveer: achha ab kuchh soch bhi sahi..is dimmag ko use bhi kar. (drumming his head)

Shravan: ab sab kaam main hi karun kya? Aap bhi kuchh socho..

Rajveer: ek idea hai!!

Shravan: (excitedly) kya? Kya?

Rajveer: jo plan kal plan kiya tha use hum use kar sakte hain..

Shravan: (nonplussed) main kuchh samjha nahi!

Rajveer: I mean shopping ke liye main abhi bhi to puchh sakta hoon na?? Kya bolta hai?

Shravan: are mere bhole bhai! Aap in ladkiyon ko nahi jante. Aapko kya lagta hai, aaj raat ko party hai..aur bhabhi ne abhi tak shopping bhi nahi ki hogi? I'm sure ke kal aapke Armaan bhaiya ke ghar se jaane ke baad hi unhone Riddhima bhabhi ke saath shopping shuru kar di hogi..kapdo ki..shoes ki..accessories ki..blah blah blah!!

Rajveer: umm..to phir?

Shravan: ek idea hai…!!

Rajveer: kya?

Shravan: idhar aao..(explains his plans to Rajveer)

Rajveer: (after listening his plan) What an idea sirji!! It's great! (tapping his shoulder)

Shravan: I know! I know! I told you na..never fear when shravan is here! (boasting himself)

Rajveer smiles.

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"This place is called THE DESTINATION" Rajveer said, swaying his hands in the air.

Naina: wow! It's so beautiful.

Rajveer: (looking at Naina) I know.

Naina: what?

Rajveer: umm..nothing.

As per Shravan's plans, Rajveer invited Naina to have lunch with him. Naina agreed at once. They met at the restaurant called "the destination", one of the most reputed restaurants of Mumbai. Shravan had already booked a table for both of them and made all the arrangements as well. As they entered the place, the manager came up to receive them and led them to their table.

Rajveer: so..umm..what will you have?

Naina: you! (to herself)

Rajveer: what? Did you say something?

Naina: no! nothing! (picks up the menu) I'll have Chinese.

Rajveer: okay..great! I also love Chinese. (looks around to find a waiter and then orders the food)

Naina: achhanak se ye lunch ka plan? Kaise?

Rajveer: bas aise hi..!! (smiling) tumhare saath thoda time spend karne ka mann kiya.

Naina blushed; same did Rajveer.

Then the waiter arrived and the food. They had their lunch and Rajveer dropped Naina at Armaan's house. Naina hugged Rajveer as she entered the house and Rajveer smiled and waved at her before leaving. It was 4 p.m. now. The beach party was to beginat 8:00. Just 4 hours for the party to begin! For the enjoyment to start off! For Rajveer to open his heart to Naina!

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is good but too short yaar
anyways so rajveer took naina for lauch as suggested by shravan
and there they the launch and then rajveer dropped naina at armaan house now looking for the much awaited beech party so plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
update is very good........
now the awaited plan of rajveer to propose naina at the party.......
continue soon ..........
but where is my p.m?????????????

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