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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
lets wait for the party and Raj's proposal
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi dear

Nice part..👏

Raj is always blushing but I kind of like him as he is..😳😊 Shravan loves to tease his bhai a lot..

Finally Raj took Naina for lunch where they spend a gud time..I hope he is able to express his feelings infront of her in beach party..
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Agar Shravan aur uske idea nahi hote toh Raj ka ka kya hota. Raj ki toh love story shuru hone se pehle hi ruk jati.
Shravan enjoys teasing Raj. He knows that his brother lover naina very much
Raj and naina have a good dinner...and even naina enjoys spending time with him.
Hope that Raj is able to tell his feeling to naina in the party
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
can't wait anymore ,,,,,
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was a nice update
bt too short yaar.
raj n shravan scene was the best scene of this update.
shravan was too naughty........he alwz teased raj ............cho chweet
raj n nahina scene was also gud.
waiitng for a big update next time.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey I just read this FF!
whole of it in one go!
And I LOVED it ,
Please cont soon and add me to your pm list!

--Adya
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Posted: 14 years ago

And finally, the most awaited night arrived- The night of the beach party. The night of presenting all the feelings to "his" love. The night of unburdening "his" heart. The night which would initiate a new beginning in Rajveer and Naina's lives.

It wasn't a normal beach party. The word "beach" wasn't taken seriously. It wasn't a casual party. It was to be at the beachside; but it had nothing to do with the free and thrilling atmosphere around it. It was a kinda romantic environment there. The dress code was "The Royal Blue and the Biting Black". Men were supposed to be in black while women in blue.

Rajveer reached the venue at 7:30, while the scheduled time was 8 o'clock. Actually, he got ready was 6 in the evening only and wanted to go the beach, in his desperation to tell his love about his "love" for her. But Shravan stopped him from doing so and Rajveer reluctantly agreed. It was a big big day for him. Although he was nervous, he couldn't control his excitement. He wanted to be with her; tell her about how much he loves her. He waited and waited and waited. "I think my watch his working a bit slow", Rajveer thought. By the time it was 7:10, his patience had completely exhausted and he forced Shravan to move to the confession point,i.e., the beach.

Shravan: (watching Rajveer who's busy checking the location) kya hua bhaiya? Kya dekh rahe ho?

Rajveer: are vo Naina nahi aayi abhi tak? (desperately)

Shravan: Ya ofcourse; party to khatam honi waali hai na..bhabhi abhi tak kyun nahi aayi? (irritatingly) Unhe pata hona chahiye na ke aap unke liye kab se wait kar rahe hai!!

Rajveer: (glaring Shravan) I am serious.

Shravan: (taking a deep breath) bhai! I know you want her to be with you. But don't get over-excited. Abhi 7:40 hue hain..party ka time 8 baje ka hai..8 baje ka..

Rajveer: to sirf 20 minutes hi to hain

Shravan: o wow! So you think she would be here at 8, "sharp", as you say in army. (raising his brows) Come on bhai..nobody is this punctual. Koi 9 baje se pehle nahi aane wala.

Rajveer: But I know her..however she is, she's very punctual. She would be here exactly at 8. And I thought I should be here before her, to welcome her.

Shravan: So you mean..bhabhi would be here exactly at 8!

Rajveer: you bet! (grinning broad)

Shravan: we'll see. Well, today I'm not gonna help you. Aapko jo kehna hai, jaise kehna hai, kahiye (winks). But be confident! Okay? (smiles)

Rajveer: ya..i know (smiles back) ab tu jaa apni lines practice kar..you are the host Shravan!

Shravan: ya..ya..I am going…waise aap apni socho...kahin bhabhi ke saamne aapki bolti na band ho jaye.

Rajveer was about to hit him but he doesn't give him any chance and runs away. Rajveer sees his retreating figure and says to himself, "paagal"!!

7:59:58 p.m.

Rajveer turns around just to encounter the most beautiful girl in this whole world. You must have guessed it. Do I need to put in the picture? Rajveer was completely enthralled by the sight in front of him. His mouth dropped open as he saw Naina standing near the entrance wearing metallic blue knee-length dress. It was a simple dress yet so carefully designed dress. It had nothing but the spark of the girl who was wearing it. 'Only Naina could make something like this outta a simple piece of dress', Rajveer thought, still with open mouth.

Rajveer started to move towards Naina naively, unknown to the presence of the world around him. During his journey from the point he stood to where Naina was standing, he didn't look anywhere but Naina. He noticed that she had a small pendant around her neck which made her neck look even more beautiful. She also had a blue crystal bracelet in her hand. She wore high heels which made her stand just 1 inch less than Rajveer. Rajveer wondered how correct that position would be for kissing, with just the desired amount of bending required.

He was taken aback when he felt a thump on his shoulder. He turned around to find Shravan standing there with raised eyebrows and a sweet grin plastered on his face. But Rajveer took no notice of that and in a reflex turned to look at her beautiful face. But that beautiful face had suddenly disappeared in the crowd present there. Rajveer frowned not to find Naina there.

Shravan: (clicks his fingers) bhai? Kaha khoye hue ho? Aur udhar kyun jaa rahe ho. Party idhar hai..

Rajveer: Vo Naina..(his eyes still trying to spot her)

Shravan: Oho bhabhi! (Rajveer blushes) Vo corner wale stall pe gayi hain..Dr. riddhima ke saath. Vaise aap sahi the bhai. She is on time.

Rajveer: (giggles a little) Yeah! I told you. Achha ab chal.

Shravan: chalte hain. Chalte hain. Itni der nahi reh reh sakte unke bina? Huh?

In return for this, Shravan gets a smack, right onto his face. "OOo", the words escaped his mouth. Rajveer smiled at his little brother and then his smile gets even broader when he sees Naina talking to some person far away. Leaving Shravan behind, he heads forward to meet his Naina.

Naina's state could be very well compared to Rajveer's. But the only difference was that Rajveer had already seen the person for whom he had come here, while Naina's eyes were still trying to spot the man she had come for. She was craving to be face to face with him. She wanted to know how he was looking. But more, she wanted him to know how she was looking, as she wasn't aware that Rajveer had already seen this beauty present out there. Actually, there wasn't a single person who hadn't noticed Naina at the place. All the guys had their eyes on her, while those guys' partners envying Naina. But she didn't want this. Her ears were dying to hear a piece of laud from "him". She searched for him, here-there and everywhere.

And her wish came true as she heard his voice. He stood a few metres away from her, talking to someone, actually, hearing to someone..as his eyes were fixed on Naina. She noticed him wearing a perfect black gentleman suit, looking extremely handsome. She swore she hadn't seen a more handsome man than him.He stood there just passing the words away, that the person was speaking to him. He paid no attention to the person. And the person whom he was taking into consideration(Naina), was also reciprocating with same concentration. Their eyes met. Rajveer looked at Naina with the love of the whole world in his eyes, deeper than the ocean. Naina looked at him with the same intensity of passion in her eyes. Neither of them could break the lock. They kept staring at each other and feeling the passion in each others eyes, even while standing metres apart.

Rajveer moved forward to candidly towards Naina. Naina smiled as he closed the distance between between them. Her smile ended up him smiling too. And as he came reached her, he opened his mouth to speak how gorgeous she was looking, to let her blush at his remarks.

Rajveer: You...

Voice: Ladies and gentleman!!

Rajveer and Naina turned around at the familiar voice they just heard. It was of course, Shravan. Rajveer cursed him for his wrong timing but Naina's ears popped up in excitement.

Shravan: Welcome to the party! Aaj main, shravan, aapka host and dost, aaj ki ye raat, aap ke liye itni memorable banaunga..itni khaas banaunga (looking at Rajveer)..ke aap saari zindagi mujhe yaad rakhoge…(everybody claps) So let's start this party dancing!!

Afterall, as a man is incomplete without a woman, a party is incomplete without dancing!! So guys..let's danch!! But..but..but..i know you all are ready to rock the dance floor..but..no loud music here..we have so many couples here. So, girls and guys, let this be the most romantic night of your life. Here goes the music…..

The words took off…the song was "unbelievable" by Craig David..!!

Naina: Ooo…I love this song.

Rajveer: Really? It's one of my favorites too. (smiling) Shall we? (bringing his hand forward, and Naina immediately puts hers on his..)

Rajveer held her to the dance floor and placed his hands on her waist from behind. Naina felt shivers down her spine as he touched her. And Rajveer was….haha..on cloud nine. And he went even higher as Naina placed her hand around his neck and started moving.

Always said I would know where to find love,
Always thought I'd be ready and strong enough,
But some times I just felt I could give up.
But you came and you changed my whole world now,
I'm somewhere I've never been before.
Now I see, what love means…

It's so unbelievable,
And I don't want to let it go,
Something so beautiful,
Flowing down like a waterfall.
I feel like you've always been,
Forever a part of me.
And it's so unbelievable to finally be in love,
Somewhere I'd never thought I'd be.

In my heart, in my head, it's so clear now,
Hold my hand you've got nothing to fear now,
I was lost and you've rescued me some how-.
I'm alive, I'm in love you complete me,
And I've never been here before.
Now I see, what love means….

When I think of what I have, and this chance I nearly lost,
I cant help but break down, and cry.
Oh yeah, break down and cry.

Now I see, what love means….

The song ended and so did the distance between them. Rajveer came closer and placed his hands on her cheeks. Naina shuddered at the intimacy but she didn't back out and started to feel the moment. She closed her eyes inviting him to do something more. Rajveer couldn't resist any more and sticked his lips onto hers. Naina moaned at this but reciprocated the kiss with equal passion. They went into their own world and forgot about the world staring at them. They didn't give a damn to what was happening around them. They kept on deepening the kiss..more and more and more.

After the passionate kiss, they came up for air. But there wasn't just the air, waiting for them. As they moved back, they heard loud applauds and hootings from their surroundings. Firstly, they were confused at what the hell was happening? But then the situation struck them. 'Crap! We just kissed', Rajveer thought. 'In front of everyone!', Naina almost had a heart attack. She felt deeply embarrassed. She just hung her head low, not facing anyone, especially Rajveer. Rajveer's embarrassment was no less than Naina's. But he didn't look down, hiding his face from the crowd. Instead, he tried to know what Naina was thinking at the moment. He just wanted Naina to be alright with what happened between them a few seconds ago. He tried searching for the answer in her eyes. But it was of no use. She didn't look up.

God! What the f*ck! Why did I kiss her? No..not only kiss her..but kiss her in front of this f*cking crowd? Crap! How could you Rajveer? How could you? What if Naina misunderstood it? What if she never forgive me for this? NO!! This can't be possible. I wasn't forcing her for anything. She didn't refuse..she kissed me back. Yes! Rajveer..she also loves you. For how long would she be able to control her emotions?

Rajveer was busy thinking about his possible-impossible stuff when Naina tried to look up and meet his eyes. Looking into his eyes, just for 1 second, made her more embarrassed. She again looked down and ran away from the place.

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
plz continue soon with their confession
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is good
raj reahces the party before the time
and was waiting for his love naina
and sharvan he is as usuall teasing and also helps him
right at time naina reach there
raj naina ko dekh ke kho sa jaata haai
dono he dono dhudhn rahe haai aur finally they met aur sharvan bhi unhe dance pe bulata haai
the song was good and the dance wow the best it turned sooo romantic raj and naina kissed wowww
but they both r now embarassed
ab kya hoga aage plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear
Nice part..
Raj was eagerly waiting for Naina nad Shravan was not leaving a single chance to tease him back😉😆😆
Raj and Naina both were so lost after seeing each other..that song and dance was just so romantic😊
They both were so engrossed in each other that they didn't realize that they r kissing in a public place.😉😆😆 they both were so lost in their love.
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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