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Fatima Ahmed

@Barbie3143

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#651

wow.... lovly... passion going on .. luv its.. keep up the good work

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#652

WOW...Jassii....!!!🤗

👏👏👏awesum n wonderful updates...!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

after long tym😆...bt wroth of w8😉....hehehe...!!😃

part 1 was amzaing...huh....!!!😃

they way he lied😆😆...being over protective...!!😉

heheh ma Wify is walking in sleep...lolz.....!!😆😆

very gud....!!👏👏👏

loved it.... !!!❤️

uff their fight😃 ...yet ..he understand her much more....!!!😉

he hurt her inside now😳😳😳😳....ahem ***ahem....!Kiss"☺️.....hehehe.....!!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

lolz....tying dori...fab scene👏...new feeling...!!! 😍

Luv Maan smiling evry now n then...!!!🤪

Geet Hate him core as his father being humiliated...!!!!😛

so Maan 😳 first step of revenge has been successfull...effectively....!!!👍🏼

Im sure Maan wont stop here NOW....!!!😎

He will take ful Revenge from Handa🤢 for the destruction of Khuana....!!!😃

cnt soon if possible...!!!🤔😆😆😆

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nan_10

@nan_10

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#653

Awesome update

both being comfortable to the other upto some extent

maan controlling geet in his own way🤣

n geet preparing mentally note not to make maan angry which obvisly not gonna happen

loved the police n dori scene

do continue soon

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#654

Jassiiiiiiiiiii.. WOW! That was TOTALLY worth the wait! OMG... I LOVED all the Maaneet moments in this... like ALL of them! Awwww from the hiding scene to Geet tryina run off again... the kiss - omg, he shut her right up! lol amazingly depicted missy!
And my favourite part... the dori scene of course... awww Jas... that was just something else... LOVED it!!!
The end was brilliant! You know, this story is really awesome to picture and all, esp with the way you've written it... BEAUTIFULLY minddddblowing work once againnn my lovely!!

HAS GOTTTT to be, my most FAVOURITE part yet! It was just toooooooooooo fabulous!

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#655

Hey jassi!!
OMG WOW
What an Update!!
Awesome
Loved it
OMG the maaneet scenes were fabulous
Loved the wall scene hayeee😳
and tehn the amnesia..hahaa poor geet.lol
OMG kiss?🤢
Hot...lol
Loved it
And omg the dori scene took my breath away
Fabulous..and omg ending?
cant wait to see wht happens nect
Update soon
Thanks

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#656

heyy..im so glad u updated..wonder what happened to maan and his family

cant wait for them to fall in love :P

continue soon plz

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she_ratchet

@she_ratchet

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#657

EDITED😃

Jassi I thought I shouldnt edit my other comment cuz I thought you might get confused.😉

Hello Girl! How you doing?🤗

"Tere mast mast updates mere dil ka lege chain .. Tere mast mast updates lege mere dil k chain!"

Is that enough to describe how much I loved your amazingly besttttestttily greatillly awesome update?❤️ How many times? How many times do you want me to say "Girl YOU ROCK!"😆 You rockk!Seriously! What an update hun!

Do you ever fail to make me laugh?

No.

Do you ever fail to make me fall of my chair and say"WOO HOO! Jassi Updated!"?

No.

Do you ever fail to make me say "This girl is awesomee!"

No.

Do you ever fail to make me say "Hayee .. Mere MaanEet are just magical!"

No.

Do you ever fail to MAKE ME HAPPY with your updates?

HeLlllllllll NOooooooo!!😆

What else can I say? If I praise you I might just happen to be outta words! Your update was greaaaaat! Hehe .. Maan was awesome! Hayee he never leaves a chance for Geet to think "He is a damnninn perv!"😆 Jassi you are truly amazing because you really put yourself in the character's shoes and narrate their role! I really hope you decide to become an author because girl I aint lyin!You GOT SKILLZ!! Woo! Jasssi rockkkkkks ... One more thing before I sign off. Continie with the romance scenes and everything!!I am soo eager to see what ahem .. Maan 's plan is!!😆 Hayee .. Mein marjawa!!!

Byee Jas! Update soon! Please! For me.😳 Muahzzzz. *Shilpa pulls Jas into bigg hug* Stay warm! Bye! Love you❤️🤗 And you can call me Shilpee!!

Shilpee😉