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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

whoa Jassi that was an awsome update

really cool

really becoming curious of the track

update soon

love

Noor

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#672

OMG..This was fabulous!!!

loved it to bits

It was just..sigh,I'm speechless!

Loved the update

love you too

thanks for updating

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#673

for days you are

GAYAB

then make a stunning

come back

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m-g19

@m-g19

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

ha as usual a late 1 but a good 1,bechari geet etny mahnat k baad b bahg na saki,ooh handa iz start burng hs malls, lts c wht hapnd nxt, i lk da kiss part😉 . story iz movng on very wl, plz do cont soon, dont mk us wait dat much, n tans of tnhx 4 da pm, lv meena

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#675

reserved......will comment after reading

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hey jassi.......really jassi jaisi koi nai......i can bet no one can write this much good......it was beautiful update.....just awesome.......i just loved that part when maan gave his jacket to geet.....nice one...geet and amnesia patient.....it was hillarious....i actually felt pity for geet......she tries so hard...but nothing works.....and that dori part...maan again kissed geet.....poor geet...or should i say poor maan....control hi nahi hota.....and that dori part...oh my my...totaly maneet type....
precap sounds interesting

do continue soon
love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#676

Amazin n very intrestin update. Plz cont asap

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--Magnificent--

@--Magnificent--

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#677

Wow ...was waiting for ur update ....good one and quite interesting too ...what with the kiss and the dori part 😃...plz yaar jaldi update karo ....😊

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#678

superb....

geet is an amnesia patient... lol...

loved d update...

thnx 4 d pm..

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#679

Wonderful update---->>>love how this story is developing 👏 Xx...

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Manpreet

@Manpreetmann

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Posted: 14 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: MaanKiGeet...

Maan got hold of her dupatta. Geet stood very still, nervously. She didn't look back. Instead, she looked downwards, her eyelashes shadowing her face. Maan stepped forward until he was standing directly behind her. He let go of her dupatta, and moved her hair on to one shoulder. He took another step forward. Geet's heart started to beat faster. She felt his chest against her back, and felt his breath on her nape. The next thing she felt was, his hands near her shoulders getting hold of something. She realized it was her dori. Geet inwardly kicked herself for forgetting about it in the first place. Maan slowly started to tie it. Currents went through her and Maan each time his fingers brushed against Geet's back. It wasn't as if he had never touched her before, but still it was a different feeling. Maybe, it was because this time neither of them protested. He finished tying it and stood for two or three seconds. Geet was in dazed state and didn't notice he was done, until Maan bent down a bit and pecked her shoulder. Geet shuddered and gasped. She looked back at Maan moving away. A tint of red appeared on her cheeks as she saw Maan smile at her. She quickly walked into the kitchen stumbling

THE BEST PART OF THIS CHAPTER...OMG I GOT GOOSEBUMPS....pheewwww

VERY WELL WRITTEN....I ENJOYED READING IT

LUV U... & THANKS FOR UPDATING

PLZ UPDATE SOON NEXT TIME

LOVE
MANPREET😛