MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

love it..

do continue plz

thx for the update.

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Tuli

@Tuli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

awesome!!! superb!! 👏.....thoda wait karna para but chalta hai...akhir sab jante hai...sabr ka fal meetha hota hai...😉

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anupam

@shining_moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

great update

geet's dad is a murderer...😲.....poor maan

loved the way maan made her say thanks😆.....awesome👏👏

n the hubby dialogue part was so ☺️........how can geet even resist😉😆

oops!!geet escaped she definitely has some guts👏👏👏............but not for long........

the precap looks damn interesting

plzzzz update the next part soon

keep writing

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#554

u update after so long but it takes two lines to snap back into ur story..the story is going great..

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#555

you come back after 22 day👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

then you take our breath away😲

realy nice

adventurous😲

thrillilly😲

full of suspense😲

OMG you just rocked in this update

it was worth waiting for

👏👏👏👏👏

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untamedtigress

@untamedtigress

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#556

superb plz plz plz continue soon

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she_ratchet

@she_ratchet

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Jassi!🤗

Thank you so much for updating!😃 You made my day! Girl you got writing skillz! You are awesome at this! Your FF is my favorite right now!! I just loved this chapter!! Awwhh...You dedicated this chapter to me?😃😳 Love you for that lil sis!🤗 You are extremely passionate and extraordinary when it comes to writing FFs. You are truly doina splendid job, girl. You got mad skillz when it comes to this. Like every chapter is freakin awesome! Romance😳, action, feelings/emotions, comedy- its got it all!😃 Maan is just too cute and funny in this. "Don'tmiss me too much JAAN." That is shoo cute! And Geet! Hehe..Being tortured my him every second!😆 Maan has so many nicknames for Geet. Jaan. Sweetheart. Geet.Handa.😳 Soo cute! Loved the part where he is like "Mera saath sona chathi ho?" Geet must have felt like "Damn...He is a perv and despo!" 🤣 The last part was just great! Geet running for dear life in her nighty! Nighty se yaad aya..Maan pulled her strap up.😳 How ahem..CUTE.😳😆 I am guessing that in the next update Geet and Maan will be running from bad guys! Looking forward to that.😛 And hoping for alot of romance. Loving the nook jhok between these two as well! I mean where Maan teases her and stuff.😳 Hoping for more of that romance too. So just awesome superb speechless and I dont have wrods to say anyomore for this girl update!!😃 You are awesomme Jassi Madam! And you met Akshay?! Dude I am going to go see Tees Maar Khan as well..I was so anxious to watch it! And if I were you I would faint right there and then!😃 So keep the great work up Jaz! Love ya! And please update soon! Pretty please!😳 With a cherry on top!😃 I am too curiuos!😆 Bye! Love ya!

Shilpa🤗