MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151 - Page 58

atlast apne update to kiya
loved it

are u goona update regularly????? i thought u forgot abt this........thnx for updating........

wwoow nice cute part,i lk it, plz ds tm update soon cnt wt 4 da nxt 1.😳 lv meena

that was awesome update.....loved it to core

Heyy YOU"RE BACK!!! :-D

Oye Hoye Jassssssssiiiiiiiiii!!

WHAT an update! That. Was. BRILL-FAN-FAB-MINDBLOW-ingly... AWESOME!

JAS! So much happened and with such pace, it's written so wonderfully! Girl, I love the way you write ;D your just sucha great writer!!

All events were depicted in STYLE and were fun to read! I'm enjoying the growing attraction between Maneet I have to add! Loved the moment where Geet couldnt sleep and so Maan allowed her to stay in his room - oh which reminds me! Jas I've always loved the dialogues you give to the characters - their banter is just outstanding. You were a master at it in your previous Maaneet ff and this one too - Maaneet verbal battling is just always SO MUCH freakin' fun in your parts!!

Oh, and need I tell you that Maan is super sexy??? Hayye, ma marjaavan. Loving the way he teased her before leaving the room hahahaha AND OMG Geet really saw an opportunity and flew to it didnt she?! FAB idea! Loved the whole chase scene at the end - you really portrayed the pace of it with your words. Really created a tense, exciting atmosphere - well done missy, that was too cool!

And oooo la laaaaaaaa to the end and precap! Mr MSK has got her YAY! =D but omg.. I thought he chose a secluded place to hide her for the reason that she wouldnt be able to escape... but its actually a dodgy secluded area, where dodgy dealings and deeds take place.. omg..! NOT COOL. This will either freak Geet out or, she aint gonna believe him... lets wait and see - so update sooooon =D and also, she's still in her nighty?? poor girl must be freezing lol

hmmmmm lets see how Maan's gonna handle Geet's misbehaviour... will it unleash the total monster within him? is he gonna get meaner? I think it'll just turn up the heat in its own way between them ;D

Can't wait!!!

And omgggggggggg my lovely, *big hug* for making me one of your dedicatee's =D love ya!

And a fatter OMGGGGGG - I Can't believe you saw / touched / met Akshay! he is THE FUNNIEST actor alive! He looked HOT eh?? awwww! *faints*

*Double faints at news bout Yasu09 - no way can that be true!*

umm.. I know you enjoy long comments, but that was actually unintentional as it always is 😆 its once I post I realise that woops! lol tolerate it now 😛 it was just the excitement that was caused by such a well written and eventful part!

YOU ROCK girl!

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Aww...Jassi..🤗 First of all sorry for not replying to the last chapter..I mean me of all people not commenting was ...dumb...but had wedding in the house n was superrrrr busy...!!!

Anyways....thanks for including ME in the fic 😆😆😆 I find it very funny....!!!!😛😛

Just when I was starting to think 'what is special in this part....???' Geet came up with another idea of escaping...!!!!!😕😕 Thank God she didnt succeed...of course I want Maaneet to stay together for more time....!!!😉😉😉😉 Update soon ya girl....!!!!⭐️

Amazing update! So, Geet's dad is responsible for Maan's being an orphan.....sad! Both their egos are sky high.....lolz.....even their anger.....Geet is really one of her kind......scared but still she is not giving up and really have to give it to her for trying to escape.....almost succeeded this time around. Maan really can't keep his hands off Geet na....lolz.....seriously! Can't wait to read the next part.....seems they are in danger.....do continue soon.