MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151

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millii

@millii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

i m very happyyyyyyyyyy u r back wid ur ff

and the part was owsem

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

loved it yaar..awsome one ...so now the fault s on handa !!! maan s ofcourse a nice person only i think.... precap sounds interesting !

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

hey jassi!!!!!!!!! 🤗
OMG....that was a wonderful update.........rocking...😃
i thing geet's father murdered maan's father...😆 i know weird thoughts...
when maan took her in her room from his...😍.....geet's plam flopped....😆
are they gonna fall in love....of course yes...😳
nighty's strap....😆😉.........it was funny.....
"don't miss me too much, jaan"........
he was actually sounding like a typical husband 🤣
i loved that part..where maan said...."Oww! You junglee!"😆
behari geet pakri gayi....😆 after all MSK se bhagna itna asan thodi na hai😆😳

will eagerly wait for next part.....
please try to update next part soon....see i gave a big comment..not because you told because you really deserve it..👏👏👍🏼

love
tasfia

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

Wow!! I was overjoyed when I saw ur PM!

Reading ur long long long update made my smile only get wider!!

Loved it how he was actually telling her to forget Dev and all that but the very next second,he's back to his old rude khadus self!!😆

Wow!!This time you told us quite some bit about why he kidnapped her.

Felt bad that he's an orphan...How Geet take that so lightly?

I know she has a good father but still...Sigh!

Maan actually traded rooms with her!She is really indolent..haha!No sign of a decent thank you! LOL!

Maan has become really naughty huh?

Looking at strappy! 🤣

Aur mauke ka faida toh koi Maan se uthaana seekhe! She was shocked and thus,he kissed her on her cheek....Buhahahahahahahaha!🤣

Geet is really desperate! She pinched him to run out....This is really too much for me to take!!

OMG...The last paragraph got my adrenaline level shoot out to the outer space....I get really CRAZY at this kinda moments!

I can't believe bechaari itna dauri aur phir bhi pakdi gayi itni aasaani se! Though,I knew that she can't run away so fast because he is MSK!He can catch her without any problem!

This update was awesome...loved it yaar!

Please update soon! Please try to update soon!!

Love you!

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#565

Very nice update! So maan has a terrible past, geet is so stubborn. Plz jassi u hv to make up 4 d lost time plz update early as story is gettin very intrestin. Plz update asap.