MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151

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nan_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

fab part... superb

loved the way they r neck to neck in replying with each other

the kidnap is very interesting

but not able to understand why maan kidnapped her.. if he thinks handas r stupid family n bit too dumb that means they have done something but he is not even informing them about her

very good cliff hanger Jassi!!!

n loved ur new user id name

plss continue soon asap

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MaansMishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Ok first off AMAZING, FABULOUS, WONDERFUL update yaar!!!! It was so good! Poor Geet tried so many things to escape but she's just not good enough to outsmart Maan 😆....she needs to think smarter! And wow Maan kissed her and bit her 😲....OMG I wouldnt say he's loves her now but mayb just attraction for now and he's just starting to like.love her! And awww he chopped the vegetables for her! 😉

As for the suggestions: I like the fact tht u bolded the dialogues....it is much easier to read tht way! There is no need to color code it yaar, unless u want to! 😉 And abt wat she saw at the end...I think it was his laptop...mayb he forgot to take it with him so she might try to email Dev or her dad to let them kno tht she's in trouble! Or it might even be his phone....I hope I'm right! 😕...Nways PLZ jaldi update karo yaar! Really wanna wat happens next!

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pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Jaldi update karo na. You already have soo many comments and guesses now.

Cant wait to read more

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

oh my awesome update 👍🏼 fab job. i loved the intimate scene😍

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Tuli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Hey, Jassi,

Awesome update yaar. 👏 keep it up...👍🏼 Just love it ....🤗 I am thinking why Maan kidnapped her? But one thing for sure, they are definitely going to fall in love...😃...just can't wait for that part....

Update soon, cant wait

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Jassi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Heyyy.

Thanks so much everyone! Will be replying shortly... And updating some time this week! -Jassi

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pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: MaanKiGeet...

Heyyy.
Thanks so much everyone! Will be replying shortly... And updating some time this week! -Jassi

Sometime this week?! Aaj ya kal nahi ho sakta? :-) plz

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Jassi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: pushpi

Sometime this week?! Aaj ya kal nahi ho sakta? :-) plz

Umm... I'm not sure, because I don't have even half the update done yet, but I'll tyr for youu! -Jassi

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pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: MaanKiGeet...
Umm... I'm not sure, because I don't have even half the update done yet, but I'll tyr for youu! -Jassi

Hi :-) I'll truly be so thankful if you could try and update today. Waise bhi just pick up your magic wand and start writing magical updates na ;-)

Pushpi

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Jassi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: nithi07
good update yar...

still thinking y maan do kidnapping....🤔
thnx for pm....

Thanks!!

Keep Wondering...

I think I mught add a few hints in the next update

-Jassi

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hey thanks for the update girl J The bolded dialogues did make it easier to read and created a sort of ambience while reading it. As far as your analysis question, I think its still too premature for it to be called love. Maan is attracted to Geet but its not love yet. Usually attraction can turn into infatuation or serious love. Since the attraction is mutual in its intensity and wariness, it will turn to love eventually but not now J For Geet's next step, here's a silly sort of clichd guess: she'll either play damsel in distress for the other guy with Adi or she'll try and feed them lasagna and trip them up for escaping.

Thank Youuu!

You'll find out if you guessed rite, in the next part!

-Jassi