MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151

First Previous

Page

105

Next Last

Frequent Posters

chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Nice update! I realy cnt guess wat is she upto bt m eager to knw, lovd ur update, waitin to knw why he kidnapd her. Maan 4 nw is jst attractd towards her bt its a beginnin of love.

Quote

Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Hey Jassi!

OMG! I loved it to the fullest! Was really laughing hard throughout.....Geet thinks her kidnapper is hot....lmao.....and Maan called her a professional eavesdropper.....🤣......I love their angry retorts dripped in sarcasm.....they are superb! Lolz.....Geet tried to stab Maan with that knife.....she is one gutsy person. Great! Maan thinks that the Handas are stupid and that Geet is an exception.....lolz....he is even attracted to her.....start of something I guess.....and is also a bit scared of her anger....me likes it! Lolz.

As for your analysis question, I too think that it's just an attraction.....which will mature into love.....he also cares for her a bit.....me thinks!

Love ya girl! Do continue soon.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#273

it was simply awesome

geet's anger is way too much for maan to handle.......bechare ko veg katne pare😆😆😆

loved their convo...thanks for bolding the dialogues it really made it easier to read

using colour code is up to u I m fine with bolding also

I felt sad for geet for wat maan did to her.....I mean getting physical n stuff....but still knowing he is the hero won't mind if he repeats that😉😆😆

n I think may b geet saw maan's ph on the table which he might have forgotten or may b the keys😕...

n as far as analysis ques is concerned I think maan is just physically attracted to geet coz some weak moments can't b love but then attraction is the first step to love😉😳😳😳

n a ton for the pm

hope to read more soon so plzzzz do update soon

I hope I have given a long enough reply😊

Quote

--Magnificent--

@--Magnificent--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#274

Hey Jassi ...good update yaar ...now i'm dying to know why MSK kidnapped Geet .....😊 so plz update soon ....

Quote

wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

superb!!!
loved the update
awesome work
do continue soon

Quote

bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Hey Jassi!

I really want to hug you and kiss you!!!

Thanks a lot yaar for the awesome update

I'm really addicted to this FF!!

I loved the update yaar

I'm gonna read it again and again till u update...

Please please please update soon😉

Now,my favourite parts...

"His name is Maan Singh Khurana. He seems to be a rich business dude. He's hot...What the hell! Where did that come from?" Haha..you don't know where did that come from,huh,Geet? LOL..

He leaned in and his lips touched her collarbone. Geet felt electric vibes running through her. Her eyes widened in shock and she stood there while Maan continued to kiss her neck.OMG... This was HOT!!Sent a chill down my spine..

Maan didn't feel guilty or anything. He was just enjoying himself.Of coz,MSK ko toh mazaa hi aayega...haha..Zaalim khurana kahin ka!!!

Her eyes were red from crying over Dev. Maan looked at her and felt a little bad seeing her state.Relieved that he's not ALL mean!!

Maan noticed a red mark just under her collarbone. That was where he bit her. It made him remember how heavenly those moments were for him. Yeah,right...Hurt our phool-si Geet and enjoy urself...wait till our sherni kills you,then we'll see who will smile.

"Maan Singh Khurana!" Maan heard Geet yell loud and angry. He wondered how she knew his name. He loved the way she said his name.

"What is it?" Maan asked as if he was really annoyed by her, while entering the kitchen.

"How the hell am I supposed to cut these vegetables, if there isn't a knife?" she asked with anger in her voice again, and her hand on her hips. She always got angry really easily.

"First of all, you cannot talk to me so rudely, and second, use your mind'That is, if you have one, and think of a good reason as to why I would let you use a knife after what you tried," Maan said. Geet shot him a glare.

Maan stared at her while Geet tried to come up with something to say. She was darn hungry, and she needed a knife.

"First of all, don't look at me because I hate when you do, and second, you will also get to eat the lasagna so I don't think you would want to eat it with big fat vegetables floating around," Geet said the same way he did.

Maan chuckled, "You think, I'm dying to eat lasagna made by you? Do you even know how to make it?"

Geet looked at him fuming. Maan was hurting her ego, with every line he said. While Maan looked at her a bit scared. Her anger was enough to set the building on fire.

"Okay, okay! Since you look like you are going to explode any second, I'll get you a knife, but please calm down," Maan said. Hahaha...darr gaya na...ooh...mere mu mein bhi paani aa gaya...give me some*with teary eyes*...haha😆

"She's probably seeing me in the vegetables," Maan thought.While he said that to himself, she was again, chopped loudly as if wanting to murder the vegetables. He was afraid, she might hurt herself so he made his way into the kitchen."Why the hell are you making so much noise?" Maan asked making an angry face as he entered the kitchen.She looked at him and started chopping even louder. 🤣🤣 Hahahahahahahaha...that's the kind of thing I'll expect Mrs.MSK to do....haha..can't stop laughing!

Just then, there was a knock on the door. Maan noticed Geet's hopeful expression.He smirked and said, "Don't get so happy. It's Adi, the guy who kidnapped you from your room." Aw...bechari ka dil toot gaya! 😆

Geet thought of Maan. To Geet, he looked like a bad guy just from his face. An angry, rude, arrogant, rich, intimidating, dangerous, villain. Geet sighed. Hahahahaha...that's exactly what my sister says!

Now I think she saw Maan's phone in the hall which he left accidentally...Am I close to the right answer? Yes I really appreciate that you bolded the dialogues😃No,no..there's no need to colour code yaar...bolding is enough!

My prediction >> I think he'll realise that he left his phone and he'll come back and Geet wouldn't know that and is still trying to figure out the code(security lock,like the one in the iPhone)...He barges in and snatches his phone...locks her in a room or something...

As you can see,I'm in no hurry for her to free herself..haha...wanting more intense moments between them!

Thanks a lot yaar for the awesome update

Loved it

Please update soon

Love you

PS:Was this long enough?😉

Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago

Quote

hermoini

@hermoini

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#277

i cnt guess what geets nxt step is ..maybe scream tht shes hurt or smething ...or fake illness ....

Quote

Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Loveeee the part.

Maneet r tough.

Want to know the reason behind kidnapping.

I hope maneet fell in love soon.

Continue soonnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

Quote

ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#279

that was superb update....really loved it

now that we know maan is attracted....

and the suspense is awesome....

keep writing

Quote

namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#280

Amazing update Jassi....👏
So Maan feels something for Geet....loved the way Geet answered him back...she doesn't seem to be the person who would take any nonesense......
Maan is brainy........it seems he knows how to cook tooo.....he chopped the vegetables in few seconds....I am impressed......Lolzzzzzzzzzzz.........😆
Now what's Geet upto......the suspense is killing me..................😉
so plz jass.......update jadi karna.........😊

love
Namita