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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 61

geet sat feeling shy & excited with raji & rano
she looked restlessly couple of times at the door, then she knew
with the feel that he was around, uske paas hone ka ehsaas dil ko choo jaata
she smiled & looked he stood there at the door. darji & papaji welcomed him,
they gave him a shervani to change. geet looked at maan scared if he would oblige
he calmly noded & took the shervani & went to change
rano - jaa ke dekh unhe kuch chahiye kya
geet - ji
she clutched her duppata & walked in & locked the door behind
maan did'nt say any thing, she held the shervani for him.
he slipped his hand & turned to see her closing his buttons
she put the buttons & checked his collar & shoulder
she seemed so confident around him, maan was scared with her getting comfortable with him.
ghabra sa gaya, uske badalte ehsaas ko mehsoos karke
maano uski unkahi aarzoo kahin beqaboo na hogayee
lekin use kuch keh kar, use toota bhi nahi dekh paata
she slipped her arms around him, his body jolted in respond to her touch
she kissed him on his cheeks bahut ache lag rahe ho, he slipped his hand in the
pocket avoiding the tempation to hold her in them
she tightened her grip around him & held him close feeling him
she missed it so much her whole body seem to long for it & she could feel
the same in his, how every part seemed to relax expect that he was holding back
she chuckled - chalein
maan looks away- umm
they walked in together to the hall, they were made to sit together.
maan was delighted to see her so happy & being herself. he was so missing her
this innocent smile since last night. He had no one to blame but himself.
He had hurt her by closing off a separate bedroom. he had seen the flash of pain
on her face when he told her to stay in mansion away from him.
maan bas yehi dua karta ki woh hamesha yunhi khilkhilaati rahe
lekin uski yeh khushi kitni uss pe mohtaaj thi yeh woh nahi samajh paaya shayad,
yah samajh kar bhi nasamajh ban raha tha
kyun nahi usse khush rakh paata main, kaise aapne kareeb aane de doon
mere kareeb aane se usse hi mushkil hogi.
it is definitly not safe for her & baby
its better they stay away from me, even if that means hurting her
but atleast they both will be safe.
guests came & wished them & blessed them. they moved to have dinner
geet went into the kitchen to pick her plate, maan came behind
she suprised, he took her plate & fed her
baby~papa love baby
geet smiled & tears rolled he kissed her stomach after wiping her tears
rano cleared her throat & came in. he walked out feeling odd
geet - woh main khaana & hugged rano
tai ji - aacha maa-beti ka pyar ho gaya ho toh, maan beta ka bhi khayal rakho
geet wondered
tai ji - humne room arrange kiya hain tumhare liye
geet was embarrassed & scared thinking about his reaction
tai ji - waise tumhe kuch batane ki zaroorat to nahi honi chahiye
u really know how to woo him
geet murmers yeh lo babaji woo him!!!!
tai ji - lekin puttar ji zyaada bhi dheel nahi deni chahiye,
thoda bahut intezaar karvana acha hain
geet murmers kya dheel, woh to paas hi nahi aane dete
rano - tu inki baat mat sun, jo unhe acha lage wohi kar
geet murmers babaji ab main kya karoon, mujhe to yeh hi nahi pata ki unhe kya pasand hain


geet goes inside the room & wonders wat to do
she stood behind the door bitting her nails
maan walks in & looks at the flowers & decoration
the bed looked beautifull with roses & lines of white jasmin hanging from top
he looked around for geet. she slips her hand from back, sensually rubbing her cheeks to his back, he leans back ward
Baahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Oh humse sanam kya parda
Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hai umar bhar ka
maan slowly moves her hand away & turns to look at her


she puts her hand around his neck
Baahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Oh humse sanam kya parda
maan opens her hand, she holds back his hand and kisses them
Mm, oh, chale hi jaana hai
Nazar churaake yun
Phir thaami thi saajan tumne
Meri kalaayi kyoon, hm
Chale hi jaana hai
Nazar churaake yun
maan pulls his hand back, she holds his collar lovingly
Kisi ko apna banaake chhod de
Aisa koi nahin karta
she pushes him to the bed, he tries to get away, she inches forward on her knees
Kabhi kabhi kuch to
Kaha piya humse
she opens his shernvani, he holds her hand back, she kisses them sensually
Ke kam se kam aaj to khulke
Milo zara humse, hm
he tries to get up, she sits on his stomach, he closes his eyes helplessly
she removes her top & hugs him. pressing her exposed part to his bare chest
Hai raat apne, jo tum ho apne
Kisi ka phir hamein darr kya
their hands move around each other passionately longingly
Baahon mein chale aao
Oh, humse sanam kya parda
Ho humse sanam kya parda
Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hai umar bhar ka
tears roll down maans eyes as they cuddle up & sleep together
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BytE1Qk1xcE[/YOUTUBE]

precap
geet trying to be understanding!!!

VM CREDIT to angadkripaa
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update, Muskan😊
Hug to you for the amazing part
Loved each and every line of the update😊
Everything was so good-with Geet waiting for him to Geet helping him with his shervani and Maan resisting his temptation to touch her. I loved it😊

Why is Maan not expressing his feelings? Is his past stopping him to making a move? Before marriage, he used to express his love in one way or the other but now he seems to have completely changed as if something is eating him from inside. But the good thing is that now Geet is taking efforts to understand him, she's more confident now since deep down, she knows that Maan too loves her.
So it seems like-All will be well soon.
Maan feeded geet, how sweet😊
Baby also happy, jumping in joy.

Tai ji giving gyaan to Geet😆😆

And then the best part of the update-Geet seducing Maan!😳
Loved the way you used the song, describing her actions while Maan trying hard to control himself but eventually giving in. Very beauifully described👏👏
And this part was hot too

In short, the update was really good, a step forward in Geet-Maan's relationship with Geet making the first move😊

And Muskan, you're simply the best


Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲GEET😲MAAN☺️☺️WOWWWWWWWWWWW🤣loved it muskan🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Muskaan,

That was the great update!!!!!!!
loved Geet's woo........'s
bechara Maan buri tarah se phas gaya,
he deserves it, gosh i hate him,
Excited bot precap......
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

so finally u update ..thanks .loved geet............. and maan to u know maan hai love them. love u too ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
oy hoy geet puttar getting very bold! Haha luved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan fab update
brave geet
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi hi muskan...
phir se 😈 update....😆!!!luved geet in dis part ...so cute she is and maan feeding her was so..😃
update soon....
rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute update
luved taji gyaan 2 geet this was geets expression tht time
im 100% sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update yaar..but i dont understand why maan feels so awkward suddenly....

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