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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!! Muski dear...!! 🤗
wat was that..!!!!...luv it...!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Maan defo give up...!!! due 2 Geet taking step unstopably...!!!😆😆😆😆
i seriously cnt believe Geet being so much Bold...!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳
Hahahah Taiji giving sweet n inncoent Geet lesson...!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣"hu 2 patao pati.."!!!! lolz...😆😆😆
Maan accepts her famali so easily...!! bt i felt he is paying ...like he is regreting wat he did 2 Geet...!!!
I think....that Maan wants 2 stay away 4rm her cos he think...he didnt deserve her n she dont luv him bt he do...v ol knw...!!!!😃😃😃😃
cont soon...!!!!😊😊😊
Luv Sugari..>!!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgggg wow dat was amzinggg geet tryin her best to do things 4 maan maan doesnt want her to be near herr and tai ji giving tips to geet hehehhe
i lovedd the endd and the songg amazingg
cnt wait for more continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG muskanp
i just love the update
👏Amazing yaar
👏
love it each and every line of this update
love the vm 😃
gr8 job baby
looking forward for next update...





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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet's end behavior 😲 ...I just loved it!! 🤣
Maan can't even pretend properly, he so wants Geet 😆

Precap sounds good and I'm sure the update is gonna be even better 😉

Thanks so much Di!
Really appreciate it!
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan,tats really a gr8 one...
loved each single line of it....
geet waiting 4 him,helping him,n maan didn't ignore darji about wearing shervani too...tat ia sooo sweet...he is looking concerned 4 d baby too...
n taiji is cool yaar...
i kind of liked her....
n geet wooing maan....n he is feeling helpless....tat was tooo good....loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!...
good to see that geet has started to understand maan!...and that shez trying to make this relation work!...
i still can't understand why is he controling himself???....why would it hurt geet and the baby if he will come closer to them???
contnue sooN!
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 62

Hain mohabbat ki ajab kashmakash
palkon ke daman mein mehfil-e-khwaish
kayanath ke ishaare karte madhosh
jism rooh dono chahe khone ko hosh.
hain saanson ki duri
phir bhi jaane kya hain majboori
na hum na woh khjo sake aagosh mein
(CREDIT to shreyabhra)
she kisses his tears - yeh aasoon hamari nazdeekiyon ki wajah se hain
he was quiet, didn't want to say or do any thing that would hurt her
she slowly wraps the sheet around her & goes to the wash room
she changes her dress & lies down next to him on the other side of the bed
without thinking he comes & hugs her from behind. he saw the mangalsutar
around her neck, loving the way it looked on her. She was his only his,
he did'nt want to claim though. she turned to face him - kya soch rahe ho
he looked down to meet her gaze maano hazaroon sawaal un ankhoon mein the.
jitni bhi koshish karti use samajhne ki, utna hi ulajh se jaati
why did he have to be so confusing she wondered. why can't things be easy. lekin yeh to
Maan Singh Khurana hain she thought
maan - main woh I was thinking about our first night tegather
he got up & sat - how innocent you looked, dari hui, sehmi sehmi
she was embarrassed & looked down quickly - aap ko laga hoga ki main ek dam jhalli hoon
maan - mujhe to tum bahut pyaari, beautiful aur tempting lagi
geet - you regret that night, don't you?
he turned & cupped her chin. Slowly he lifted her head until their eyes met
ek bar to aapne dil ki baat kehna chahta tha, she deserves to know
i regret that I took every thing away from u & got u pregnant but I don't regret the baby
baby~chuckled😳
geet - kya matlab
maan - agar us raat woh sab nahi hota to tumhe bhi tumhara pyar milta
geet - aap toh pyaar ko nahi mante
maan smiled - tum toh maanti ho
geet - umm!!! lekin how is that u regret getting me pregnant but not regret the baby
maan - baby is special, I feel blessed to have him, mujhe kabhi nahi laga ki
mere daaman main yeh khushi aayegi. is naayab tohfay ke liye main
zindagi bhar tumhara abhari rahonga
Her eyes misted over. he knew how exactly she flet. he wanted to attribute to her
emotional reaction due to hormone changes. he did'nt want to think further. he noticed her lips parted. mano tadap rahen ho uske saath ke liye. He could see her white teeth and the tip of her tongue. It would be so easy to bend forward and cover her mouth with his. Too easy and blissful. instead he hugged her.
geet kisses his chest - hum pehle ki tarah nahi reh sakte I promise not to bother u
with any stupid emotion like love
he pulls her closer - umm
feeling much lighter in heart. they sleep cuddled up.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xwnfZMxhiQ[/YOUTUBE]
maan reminded himself this just one night he had to , just to make her feel comfortable
She was his wife. It was his duty to be with her. His acceptance had nothing to do with
the warm feeling of contentment that began inside of him, growing large enough to start
filling the black hole of his soul.
tanhayio mein uska saath paaya
jaise pattjhad main phool khilaya
apna bana ke usse saato janam
dil ne uski karaar paaya
maano samet se leta in lamho ke najuk palon ko
kya pata ye pal phir ho na ho
ye pal ho to bhi, inn palo mein hamara saath ho na ho


next morning geet looked really happy & delighted
she had her shower & came to wake him up with coffee
she kept the coffee next to the bed & wispered suniye
maan opened his eyes sleeply to meet her glowing face
her wet dripping hair, her smile, her curls that teased her cheeks
she shied with his eyes getting intense
she kept her promise she kissed his cheeks - coffee and left the room

she met brij outside
brij pulled geet to the roof - does he treat u properly?
geet noded for a yes
brij - if there is any thing tell me now, he will not go back to delhi on his feet
geet raised her tone - VEER JI
brij was happy to see that reaction from geet & hugged her
brij - woh tumhara khayal to rakhta hain na
geet - umm
brij - tum khush ho mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye
geet - main khush hoon veerji
brij kissed her forehead & they came down the steps

rano - beta call him for breakfast
geet - ji
she went to the room to see maan was packing the luggage
geet - mujhe keh dete
maan - nahi its ok, we will leave at 11, umm
geet - umm
she sounded upset
maan - tum chaho to kuch din ruk ke aajao, I will come to pick u later
geet immediately - nahi I will come with u
baby~mujhe bhi papa ke saath rahena hain
geet murmers bahut mushkil se baat kar rahe hain...phir se inka mood badal gaya toh

after having the breakfast, they take blessing from every one & leave
rano wispers to geet - meri baat yaad rakhna, do what ever it takes to work this relationship
its all in ur hands now, I don't want u to ever give up on him, you are really lucky to
have me in your life, take care of him.
geet kissed her with teary eyes

they reach outhouse later in the evening. maan drops her & leaves to office.
geet settles herself in her room. she pulls out the dairy & goes back to page where she stopped
~kal unka janam din hain, kya tohfa doon~
geet - umm, kya dena chahiye...????
~ghadi taaki woh unhe har ghadi meri yaad dilayae~
geet - wow that will be great, I did'nt know watch could mean that
~nahi nahi kuch khas ~
geet - became curious & turned the page to read the gift part
~aaj sharmo haya ke bandhan ko chodke main ne unke gaalon ko chooma
pehli bar mere hothon ne aise kuch mehsoos kiya tha, kitna dar gayi thi main
sharam se pani pani hogayi thi main, lekin bahut khush thi unki ankhoon mein
woh nasha dekh kar, jis tarah se woh mujhe dekhe ja rahe the, main toh
shayad apni saari hadde bhool jaati , Uff meri tauba jaan kaha ye phas gayi
dekh ke unko lalchana tu kabhi hothon ka kapkapana, woh to sab jaan ke bhi
anjaan bane baithein hain~
geet - so sweet, first kiss..she blushed

precap
geet back to office

VM CREDIT Bee3nazz
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update, once again😊
You know I have begun to fall short of adjectives when it comes to writing comments on your updates😛

Loved this part a lot since after a long time Maan ne kuch kaha, apne dil ka haal bayaan kiya. Though he didn't totally spoke his heart out, but spoke enough to comfort Geet😊
Haaye, I loved it when he said-I don't regret the baby!!! 😍 I can very wel imagine the reactions of the baby😉
Got a bit confused in this lines-
'maan reminded himself this just one night he had to , just to make her feel comfortable'
Is he gonna distance himself from Geet once they reach back Delhi?😲
Liked the cheerful Geet in the morning😊
Brij-Geet conversation was good, he's happy that his sweet, little, innocent sister is happy in her married life😊
Leaving for Delhi, baby ko toh hamesha hi papa ke saath rehna hai, hai na?😉😛😊
Diary part-I missed this in the last update😛 But I am getting scared for Geet now. If this is really Sameera's diary, then she will be heart-broken on knowing that the person Sameera's been talking about is none other than her maan.
Lets see how you unfold this mystery😊
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi di...
was waiting for ur update for long tym...luvely update again...i like maaneet growing relationship...!!I donnow wht holds maan back but i think dis dairy also has sumthing to do wid his past...isit???update soon...waiting for ur truly magical too...1111
tC
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it

Brij is such a sweet brother.

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