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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part
love it
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Hey i really love ur ff.
All parts were mindblowing!
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Part 6:

Bhushan Manison was a wrong name for that house. It should be named Bhushan Palace; this was the thought that came to Samrat's mind when he entered the house. The place was beautiful interworked.

Samrat thought that Gunjan's details could be given well by herself only, so decided to meet her and take her details. He didn't know who to approach so went to one of the servants and asked for Gunjan Bhushan.

The servant looked at him as if the boy is front of him has gone mad. He is asking about Gunjan baby....

He asked Samrat to wait and went inside.

Samrat kept on waiting for atleast 1 hour. He was tired and was fuming in anger now. Such a irresponsible girl....if she couldn't have come down....so could have sked him to come at someother time.

Samrat (to himself): bade baap ki beti hai...yahan log apna form khud bharte hai....aur yeh hai ki jo form bharne aaya hai...usko wait kara rahi hai.

Just then he heard sound of anklets and felt that someone is coming down the stairs....he looked back and stood there shocked....

The girl was tall like a pillar and had shoulder length hair which looked as if she has just got an electric shock ....she was wearing a body hugging black dress.

She is wearing this:

Samrat had seen such kind of girls playing witches in his favourite cartoon show.

Girl: Hi Sweety, what can I do for you....???

Samrat: ........

Girl: Hello....cutie pie....me talking to you...???

Samrat: ......

The girl smiled and went to Samrat...who still stood there shocked.....she came in front of him, smiled and kissed him on his cheek.

Samrat felt a jerk and came back to his senses....he couldn't make out what happened. He realized what the girl in front of him did....and was now laughing....

Girl: So kaise laga...aksar log mujhe dekh kar aise hi react karte hai....atleast I expected ki tumhara reaction better hoga. Maine sirf 1 ghante mein tumhare liye tayaar hoke neeche aayi hu.

Samrat: ji....

Girl: yes...waise to main kam se kam 3 hrs leti hu...tayaar hone mein....

Samrat: woh....mujhe aapke details chaiye the....???

Girls: mere details....???

Samrat: yes....aapke dad ne mujhe kaha hai....aapka excel college ka admission form bharne ke liye...

Girl: (laughing) tumhara sense of humor bahut aacha hai....and thanks for the compliment...

Samrat: compliment??

Girl: Haan....compliment is baat ka ki tumhe yeh laga ki main college going hu....

Samrat: To aap ko college nahin jana hai....

Girl: tum saath lekar jaoge....to dobara chali chalungi....

Samrat:( Shocked): to aap Gunjan....

Girl: Ufff....phir us Gunjan ka naam.....har jagah gunjan gunjan.....nahin main gunjan nahin hu....

Samrat: to aap....

Girl came nearer to Samrat and said:

Girl Main Gunjan ki mom hu.....step mom....1 step ahead....

Samrat: oh...ok...I am sorry....

Girl: its ok....aksar log dhoka kha jate hai...tum bhi kha gaye....anyways main age mein to gunjan se sirf 10 years hi badi hu....but I am more beautiful than her.

Samrat: I need some details of her.....

Girl: Woh kal aa rahi hai.....apni budiya nani ke saath....ussi se le lena details...

Samrat: ok. Sure. Sorry was disturbing.

Girl: No probs darling....tumhara disturb karna mujhe aacha laga. By the way I am Kritika, u can call me Krits.

Samrat: ok mam. Bye.

Saying this Samrat runs from there.

He comes back to his room and looked at the form and said....Gunjan....

Scene shifts to large pub where we see a group of guys and girls dancing. Amongst them in a girl who is dancing in the centre with a glass of whisky in her hand and totally drunk...but still she was able to manage herself as compared to others. Dressed in a red top with her hairs curled from below....she looked beautiful. Song in the background.

Bring The Beat Yo Yo Yo'Yo Yo Yo'

Yo! Put Your Hands Up,Ah! Put Your Hands Up! Yeah!

Put Your Hands Up, Pull'em Up There' Ahaan!

Put Your Hands Up, C'mon! Put Your Hands Up! C'mon!

Put'em Up, Like You Just Don't Care' /Ha Ha!'

Hey! We're Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! I Wanna Get So Naughty'

Ooh! I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

Hey! We Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! I Wanna Get So Naughty'

Ooh! I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve'Takkna Ve' Takkna Ve'

Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve'Makhna Ve' Makhna Ve'

[ Main Talli Ho Gayi Song Lyrics @ http://www.hindilyrix.com ]

Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve' Ahaan!

Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve' Ahaan!

Dhak Dhak Dil Dhadkaave'Lakk Lakk Hun Tadpaave'

Patiala Peg Lagake' Teri Gali Vich Aake'

Sab Sud-Budh-Hosh Gavaa Ke'

Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

( Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve' Ahaan!

Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve' Ahaan! ) - 2

Lakk Lakk Hun Tadpaave'Patiala Peg Lagake' Teri Gali Vich Aake'

Sab Sud-Budh-Hosh Gavaa Ke'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

( Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi'Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' ) - 2

Baby Baby, I Feel So High'Baby Baby, I Can't Deny'

Baby Baby, Better Hold Me Tight'I'll Be Waiting For You Just Tonite'

Tonite' Tonite'/ Hey-Hey-Hey Hey-Hey'Hey-Hey-Hey Hey-Hey'

Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho' Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho' Yo! Yo!

I've Been Jigging In Here Like I Just Don't Care'/Hey

If You're Up In The Club, You Can Watch Me There'/Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho'

I'll Be With Mah Ladies'Ahaan

Taxi, Dropping Mercedes'/Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho'

Boy You Know, You Got Your Eye On Me'Ahaan!

I'll Put Up, What You Like, What You See'/What You See'

And I Know, That You're Feeling My Style'A-Aa-Aa' Aaja'

Dil Tote Tote Karke'Chal Chandni Chowk Pe Chalke'

Whisky Pe Soda Joda, Aa Chadhaayein'

Peeche Tu Aa, Kya Kaake!

Eh Kya Bola Hai Agge?'Pal Do Pal Do Kyun Na Ye Bhool Jaayein'

[ Main Talli Ho Gayi Song Lyrics @ http://www.hindilyrix.com ]

Hun Dil Te Chale Pataake'Hun Ho Gaye Dhoom Dhadake'

Patiala Peg Lagake'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi'Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi'

Oye!'Kaali Kaali Aankhon Wali, Kaali Kaali Aankhon Wali,

Kaali Aankhon Wali'Oye, Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali,

Kaali Aankhon Wali'

Hey! We Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! I Wanna Get So Naughty'

Ooh! I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

Hey! Hey'We Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! Hey' I Wanna Get So Naughty'

Ooh! Ooh!'I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

[ Main Talli Ho Gayi Song Lyrics @ http://www.hindilyrix.com ]

Ok! Let's Do It'Ok! Let's Do It'

Oye Balle, Balle, Balle'Oye Shava, Shava, Shava'

Uttowaan Tibbi Javaan Ye Sajaa Hai..

Utte, Khalota Mundaa'Mundaa, Bada Mushtanda'

Nakaara Kaise Zidd Pe Adaa Hai'

Hungama Ajj Machaa Ke'Main Dil Vich Rang Jamaa Ke'

Patiala Peg Lagake'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi'Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi'

( Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve' Ahaan! Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve' Ahaan! ) - 2

Lakk Lakk Hun Tadpaave'Patiala Peg Lagake' Teri Gali Vich Aake'

Sab Sud-Budh-Hosh Gavaa Ke'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

( Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi'Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi') - 2

Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

Work It Like You Just Don't Care'.

She turns around and her face is revealed, she is.....


Precap: Samrat slaps Gunjan in front of whole college.

Edited by rupal.sri24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
awesome....
really nice....

samrat slapped gunjan ? 😲 ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part
awesome
loved it
precap is 😲
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
Edited by ammykhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesome update dear!!!!!!
totoally loved it
do contnue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
awsome update
at first when u were describling guns step mom
i thought u were talking about gunjna lol
and precap sam slaps gunji!!
cont soon
luv tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey realy wndrful updt too gud n awsm.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg awesum part n precap ghos cnt wait plz do cont asap plz k m waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous ff...pls add me to ur pm list...........cont soon

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