ANJAANA RISHTA.. Maneet FF.. Thread 1 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
Sofna - mmmm u can say that 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Liked all 3 updates

Loved Geet n Brij's relation a lot
Maan was missing his sis a lot
Maan did good thg by saying the truth
Anu n Geet were dating each other for 2 mnths ye kaise hogaya
Good that they are gng far frm each other
Tani is gng to Delhi n she is working wit Maan lets c how Geet will react listening to this
Geet wil paka ask him to shift her to mumbai
Liked Geet carefree nature
She gets hyper soon
Maan n Geet both were loosing themself in each other
Geet is missing Maan abhi se😆😆😆


thanks lol...
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys sorry for delaying this part....actually i stuck up with my exams....as i haven't update any from last four days, so here is a lil longer one.....😉

recap

Pari: fight/nok jhok
geet starting remembering the fights she had with maan during the whole day.. 1st in car n others in her house..
even this time she kept quite..

Part 9 :-

Pari: anger
geet mummers "gussa toh unki naak pe chada rehta hai"
Pari: kya?
Geet: kuch nahi
Pari: stop it di...this is not fair...ek bhi ans nahi diya...
geet speaks to herself "what are you upto babez, why are you thinking about that khadoos.."
Pari: acha i'll start again but this time you have to give all ans
Geet: hmm
Pari: colour
Geet: RED
Pari: red
Geet: ROSES
Pari: roses
Geet: LOVE
pari: love
Geet: MA........ (she pauses) n said ANU in husky voice..
pari starts applausing.. geet looked her..
Pari: wow di.. not bad.. saare ans diye aapne..
geet gave a weak smile.. excused her n went to Balcony
she was getting confused that "why is she thinking about MAAN..why was she relating maan to every ques..why? he has nothing to do with her except that their "would be fake relation".. then why??"
she stood there glaring at moon for few mins.. it was the bright moon n suddenly the chilly wind started blowing.. it was brushing her.. everything seemed like that they were trying to tease her..

Aaj toh Chand bhi khush tha..
Hawayein bhi jhoom uthi thi..
mano has rahe ho uski kashmakash pe..!


Geet shouted "has lo.. has lo.. tum sab bhi mere upar has lo.."

Taani tapped on her shoulder from back: kya bol rahi hai..?? kisse baat kar rahi hai??
Geet jerked: hmmm
Taani: what happened
Geet: nothing
Taani: come inside...u'll catch a cold...
Geet: i think i should leave now..
Taani: yaaa....its already 12, aur zyada late hui toh waat lag jayegi aur waise bhi aaj anu bhi nahi hai tujhe drop karne ke liye... (said while taking her into the room)
Geet: i very well know how to drive..!! got it... (said irritatingly)
Taani: chill...gussa kyu ho rahi hai...
geet was looking upset...taani makes her sit on bed...
Taani: geet kya hua tujhe tu itni pareshaan kyu hai...??
geet speaks to herself "yaar aajtak kabhi itna kisi ladke ne pareshaan nahi kiya, fir yeh maan kyun?? ek kaam karti hun, taani se saare BF's ka puchti hun, tab shayad confusion clear ho jaye"
Geet: taani ek baat puchu tujhse?
Taani: hmmm
Geet: aajtak mere kitne BF's rahe hai...??
Taani: what?? (shocked)
Geet: m serious..tell me..
Taani: woh toh count karne padenge..
Geet: toh kar..
Taani: are you high or something.. u're gettin late... go!
Geet: no..just start counting...
Taani: ohhhhhkkkkkk but from where should i start...?? school se??
Geet: yup..
Taani: mmm jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, u had ur 1st BF in 9th std...
geet lifts her eyebrows with a confused epression on her face "WhO"
Taani: remember KARAN who took 8 months just to propose u (& starts laughing)
geet noded her head & smiled
Taani: then 2nd waala BF bhi u had in the same std or better i could say just after a week...bcoz ABHAY proposed u, but no doubts he was much smarter than KARAN.. lol
geet burst out laugh..
Taani: no i'm serious.. i must say he was the most happening dude of our school & the way he proposed u was hilarious.. do u remember he proposed u in front of everyone in auditorium when we were practicing for our annual day..oh gosh!! i can't forget that...hehe...pata hai that time our jaw drops opened n we were like *OH NOOOOOOO........*
Geet: ya & i spontaneously said YES aur karan ki shakal dekhne waali thi...
Taani: hmmm par geet toh GEET HANDA hai na... karan ko uske chakkar mein chod diya n she broke up with him also after a week..
Pari: what??
Geet laughed: yaar i agreed he was a good looking guy but he was actually not my types.... acha aur bata uske baad kon tha...
Taani: mujhse aise pooch rahi hai jaise mere BF's the woh..
Geet: arey yaar list toh tune banayi thi mere BF's ki...
Taani: hmmmmmm....then exactly i don't remember but i think after that u had around 8-9 BF's till 12th...GOSH geet u used to change ur BF's like someone shampoo their hair every week...tera kabhi koi bhi 1week se zyada nahi raha...
Geet: pagal hai kya...college mein tha toh...2 n 1/2 weeks tak ek...bhool gayi kya.... & starts laughing
Taani: very funny...idiot abhi hum school ki baat kar rahe hai...GOSH college ke count karne lagi toh list kabhi khatam hi nahi hogi.. remember college mein tera ek aisa bhi BF tha jis se tune 2hrs mein break up kiya tha...hahhahahahahahahahaaa....
Pari: hawwwwwwwwww 2hrs....
Geet: has mat zyada...aur tera BF jo tujhse 24/7 chipka rehta tha, lolz tune usse peecha chudwaane ke liye kya kiya tha...
Pari: roflmao...wow this is something very interesting...kya kiya tha..
Taani: chup geet...oye pari tu bhaag yahan se...
Geet: kyun sunne de use...wo ab bachhi thodi na hai...
taani rolls her eyes
Pari: bolo bolo
Geet: he was sleeping in the classroom, some boring lecture was going on, she took a small box full of medicines from his bag, like aspirin n all medicines, i dont know why he used to carry all that and taani make one own label.
Taani: geet bas...chup kar ab aage mat bol...
Geet giggles: n she made a label of "anti-gay pills" 😆& then put that box of pills back in his bag, after some time she acted like she has a headache n need disprin, she take out that box by herself only n checked that fake anti-gay pill made by one n only TAANI n she accused him of being gay....hahaha....uss bechare ki shakal dekhne waali thi...
pari burst out laugh
Taani: yeh kya bakwas seekha rahi hai bacho ko....
Geet: mai seekha rahi hun aur tu jisne yeh kiya tha....
Taani lifts her eyebrows: huh
Geet: abey chod yeh..aur bata mere college waale kitne the...
Taani: hahahahaha college mein yehi kuch 18-20 BF's rahe honge tere...
Pari's eyes poped out: 18-20???????? *scratched her head*
Geet: abey itna mat soch..itne BF banana bhi ek talent hai... *winked*
Taani: hehe...yaar mujhe saare toh nahi yaad but i remember AKSHAY he was sooooooo cute n hell u dumped him..
Geet: ohh really?? over possessive kon ho raha tha...n he wanted me to become his puppet..
Pari: matlab??
Geet: arey yaar woh hamesha kuch na kuch faltu bolta tha "GEET YEH MAT PEHEN..!! GEET ISKE SAATH MAT JA..!! GEET UDHAR MAT GHOOMA KAR..!! GEET USSE BAAT MAT KAR..!! GEET KISKA MSG AAYA HAI..!! n blah blah blah... ohh god...!!
Pari: ewwwwwww weird...
Taani: haan yeh toh tha...but yaar bohot maze kiye humne school n college time mein...
they kept on talking on all this....they burst out laugh throughout the talk..taani n geet were enjoying that moment to the core as if they got a chance to re-live those days...
they again start talking about school days

Gone are the days
When the school reopened in June,
And we settled in our new desks and benches.

Gone are the days
When we queued up in book depot,
And got our new books and notes.

Gone are the days
When we wanted two Sundays and no Mondays, yet
Managed to line up daily for the morning prayers.

Gone are the days
When we chased one another in the corridors in Intervals,
And returned to the classrooms drenched in sweat.

Gone are the days
When we had lunch in classrooms, corridors,
Playgrounds, under the trees and even in cycle sheds.

Gone are the days
When a single P.T. period in the week's Time Table, Was awaited more eagerly than the monsoons.

Gone are the days
Of fights but no conspiracies,
Of Competitions but seldom jealousy.

Gone are the days
When we used to watch Live Cricket telecast,
In the opposite house in Intervals and Lunch breaks.

Gone are the days
When few rushed at 5:30 to
"Conquer" window seats in our School bus.

Gone are the days
Of Sports Day, and the annual School Day,
And the one-month long preparations for them.

Gone are the days
Of the stressful Quarterly, Half Yearly and Annual Exams,
And the most enjoyed holidays after them.

Gone are the days
We learnt, we enjoyed, we played, we won, we lost,
We laughed, we cried, we fought, we thought.

Gone are the days
With so much fun in them, so many friends,
So much experience, all this and more.

Gone are the days
But not the memories, which will be
Lingering in our hearts for ever and ever and
Ever and ever and Ever...


Pari: I think you guys went back to your Golden Olden days..........
Geet: For a while......... I DID!!
Taani: NO FOR A WHILE....... WE DID..!!

they both hugged each other tightly n didn't even notice that their tears fall down due to overjoy or by remembering those best days of their lives....

Pari: aap dono ko nahi lagta aap log kuch zyada senti ho gaye...??
Geet: abey haan...ohhh shit, jaldi dekh mera make-up toh kharab nahi ho gaya?? lolz
Taani whack geet's head: pagal hi hai tu...
Pari: geet di waise aapke type ka ladka kaisa hona chahiye hai...?
Geet: hmmmm....thoda complicated hai....
Pari: batao na...
Geet: respectful, faithful, considerate, caring, ambitious, loyal, intelligent, family oriented, attractive, patient, gotta be strong - mind and body stable, established, well-balanced, understanding, experienced in all ways :P, self-disciplined, good sense of humour, no anger problems, successful, kind and loving, intelligent and articulate, straightforward, honorable, observant, confident, affectionate, intellectual, passionate, accountable, spontaneous
pari lifts her eyebrows...taani laughs out loud...
Geet: yeh sab usme nahi hoga toh bhi chalega... bas "USKI ZINDAGI KI HAR SUBAH, MUJHSE SHURU HO AUR HAR RAAT MUJHSE KHATAM"... (she blushed)....
Pari: arey wah di...aap toh bade filmy nikle...
geet speaks to herself "oye geet yeh kya bol rahi hai, tujhe toh woh saari qualities chahiye thi....chadho jiii, shayad yeh bhi maine apni list mein kabhi add kar liya hoga"
Taani: geet ab bohot ho gaya time dekh...
Geet: abey haan yaar chal mai jaa rahi hun ab...
Pari: di we'll surely make a plan some another day.. it was a lovely meeting you...
geet hugged them: haan pakka
Taani: oye geet tu sabse main BF toh bhool gayi..!!
Geet: kon??
Taani: 2months...ANURAG..
geet laughs out loudly & left
on the way to home, she started feeling low....she was still confused...she din't get her ans... "why was she thinking about Maan when pari asked her those ques.." she is the one who hardly cares for guys/never bother for some guys... then what was that...!!
she stopped her car near by Beach n went out of the car...she walked Barefoot towards the water.. It was the loveliest feeling in the world
"The clear Sky with the bright Moon n stars.. Soothing air brushing her hair softly.. barefoots looking for water.." she walked in water for sometime n walked towards her car, suddenly bumped into something n closed her eyes in fear..but someone holds her tightly before she would have fell on ground..it was the maskuline touch..she opened her eyes to meet his..
Geet shouted: YOU
before he could have said something, geet straightens herself n slapped him tightly.. {it was none other than ANURAG}
anu stood routed there with her act..
Anurag: what was that?
Geet angerily: haha very nice ques..but i think u better be aware of this reaction of mine before going to Bling Club
Anurag shocked: how do you know that..??
Geet: that i'm not interested in answering u... & walked off
Anurag follows her: Geet..! Geet..! Geet listen..
geet din't look back..anu felt bad n remembered how he walked off that time when geet was calling him...

Precap : sameera calls maan...

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

WoW....Mann,at first u make me smiling* then made me too senti.....

"Gone r the days,but not the memories......" those lines were awesome! plzz,kal Maaneet ka ek meeting karah deh na.....anxious abt next epi,bcoz of Sameera...... <3

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Posted: 14 years ago
made me senti senti about the good old days!!! nice work👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks... that was lovely update but no MAAN 😭.....lol... waiting for more updates from u now that u r done with ur exams(i hope)😃... plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent
soo geet cant forget thinking about maan lovely
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
aww love geet was about to say maan
aww so sweet reminds me the fun me and my friends have
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome..love it.. do continue plz.
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update. pls make a index page… i had to look through every parts lol for part 7 and 8 lol
xx

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