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Posted: 14 years ago
pls pls update soon .......
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting waiting waiting!!!!

jaldi update karo!
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Posted: 14 years ago
update coming soon 😊
it'll hardly take half n hour
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Posted: 14 years ago
Recap :-

Geet: naintara... woh thik hai..??
Naintara looked down: chodiye na geet.. aap uski baat kyun kar rahi hai..
Geet: par wo bhi toh humari.......................
Naintara interrupts: humari kya geet... geet wo hum jaisi nahi hai.. humara usse koi rishta nahi hai..

Part 12 :-

Geet: naintara wat are you saying?? she's are sister afterall.... u can't say sumthing like that....
Naintara shouts: nahi geet... SAMEERA humari behen nahi hai....

{a brief intro of NT n SAM- they are real sisters n geet's cousin... naintara is such a sweet lady, bilkul seedhi-saadhi bahu types n on the other hand sameera is just opposite of naintara....she a gold digger....}

Geet: but naintara wat happened???
Naintara: jabse usne vadde veerji ke saath dhoka kiya hai.... humne usse saare rishte tod diye.....
Geet: vadde veerji???
Naintara: haan... dev ke bade bhai.... aur dev ko nahi pasand ke hum sameera se baat kare.....
Geet: par..
Naintara in angry voice: ab hum uske baare mein koi baat nahi karna chahte hain...
Geet pats her shoulder: ohh chill maar yaar.. nahi karungi.. anyways u tell me, hows ur life going on with dev (geet winks)
Naintara smiles: Supercool
Geet naughtily: ahem ahem... Cool yah Hot...!!
Naintara blushed: aap bhi na geet
Geet: OMG.. u r blushing... hehe
they reached home n get off the car.. geet looked mesmerized by the beauty of Khurana Mansion, which was fully decorated with Flowers n Lights.. geet looked naintara
Geet: yeh sab..
Naintara happily: ohh sorry, i forgot to tell you... aaj Grah Pravesh hain aur choti si party bhi...
Geet confusingly: Grah Pravesh?
Naintara: haan dev ke chote bhai bhabhi... they got married in U.S n for the first time they are coming back to india after their marriage....
Geet: ohhh okkk.... waise dev ke kitne bhai hai?
Naintara: teen...kyun??
Geet: no...actually i was thinking, agar 4 bro's hote toh ek pe mai bhi line maar leti
Naintara laughs: bad luck... ab dev ki toh humse shaadi ho gayi hai aur humare devar Arjun ki Arohi se.... (naintara thinks for a sec) but u still have a chance, vadde veerji single hai...
geet rolls her eyes
Naintara: par ek problem hai.... unke saath rehna bohot mushkil hai... he's very short tempered... and after watever sameera have done to him, he never look after any girl.... he maintains a big distance with girls....
Geet avoids that topic bcoz she don't want naintara to get upset again: leave it yaar... i was just kidding... serious mat ho.....
Naintara: hey why don't you call taani n anurag here.....
Geet: yea....gud idea
Naintara excused herself: geet aap baat kariye.. hum abhi aye
geet calls them..taani picks it up
Taani: haan geet bol...
Geet: i'm at naintara's place, just come over here...
Taani: what happened...
Geet: there's some party...
Taani: are you mad...how come we are suppose to be there n attend it....
Geet: kyun?? wats the problem??
Taani: Dumbo... try to understand, wo naintara ka ghar hai... n me n anu don't even know her that much...
Geet: u know me....right???
Taani: itna kaafi nahi hota hai geet....
Geet: anu ko phone de...
Anu: yup sweetheart...wats up??
geet asks him to convince taani....
Anu: no ways.. i think u r high.. byeeeee we'll talk later..u take some rest...
Geet: W*F....
Anu: baby hum nahi aa sakte.. samajhne ki koshish kar..
geet cuts the call in anger.. she waits outside for naintara for few mins to take her in.. as she was feeling lil odd to walk in alone.. but naintara got busy with something.. geet was already angry on anu n taani & waiting for naintara was adding up her anger.. she started to walk towards the main entrance, adruptly a sudden jerk n she fell on flexed knee..
Geet: bloody heals...grrrrrrrrr...ise bhi abhi hi tootna tha...
she took out her heals n held them in her hand..n walks in the mansion without noticing the rice pot on the floor which slipped it with her right leg inward
Geet: What The Hell..
suddenly she gets conscious n jumps up n jumped on the red kumkum water..
Geet: bloody hell..!!
she runs inward nervously, leaving her footprints at the back n bumped into daadi..daadi gave her a glare, which was obvious.. bcoz that rice pot n kumkum water was suppose to be there for her choti bhau Arohi n not for her
Geet fumbles: woh...mai.........ji woh....
Daadi looks at her innocence n calmed down: you??
Geet: mai.....mai woh...mera matlab hai GEET HANDA...
Daadi: Why are you fumbling..??
Geet: actually that was all by mistake, i din't do anything intentionally..
Daadi: yea i know.. calm down (pats her back)
daadi tells servent to clear out everything n put another rice pot n kumkum water...
Daadi: beta...humne aapko pehchana nahi...aap??
naintara saw them n joins
Naintara: daadi maa.. yeh meri cousin hai geet.. aaj hi delhi aayi hai, toh hum ghar le aaye ise..
Daadi smiles: bilkul thik kiya aapne naintara beta..
Daadi to geet: beta aap thak gayi hongi.. aap fresh ho jao..
Naintara: haan geet chaliye hum aapko change karne ke liye kapde dete hai..
naintara n geet went to naintara's room..
NT handovers some dresses to geet...
Naintara: ye lo...inme se jo bhi pasand aaye wo pehen lena...hum neeche ja rahe hai...aap bhi jaldi se tayyar hoke neeche aa jayie...
geet nodes.. NT leaves.. geet selects red coloured suit having light embroidary round its neck..
geet quickly changes n came downstairs.... Arjun n arohi was about to reach... Naintara n daadi was waiting them... NT looked geet, she was looking stunning....
Daadi:geet beta... aap bohot sundar lag rahi hain...
Geet blushed: thankyou daadi...
daadi smiles n leaves to kitchen
Naintara: geet aap sach mein bohot sundar lag rahi hai... thankgod dev ki shaadi humse ho gayi, otherwise woh toh koi chance nahi chodte aapse shaadi karne ke....
Geet laughed: dhyan rakhna apne pati ka... phir dhyan rakhna, kahin extra marital affair na ho uska...
Naintara laughed: nahi...im sure, he'll never ditch me..
Geet: hmm.. u trust him a lot... haina?
Naintara said proudly: exactly..
daadi calls naintara... naintara rushed to daadi n tells geet in hurry to get some gift from maans room
Naintara: geet plz do me a favour.. go in veerji's room n get all the gift from there.... (points the finger towards maan's room, which was upstairs)
Geet: ok..
geet goes to his room n wonders "How could someone even think of spending his/her time in this room"... (room was very huge but very simple, white coloured.. bed in centre, wardrobe on one side, dressing on other, couch in one corner n nothing else...)
Geet: chi chi babji... kitna feeka feeka sa room hai... koi colour hi nahi hai...
she picks up all the gifts from bed..
n geet continues with her stupid talk about that room...
Geet: aisa bhi kisi room hota hai kya....?? mera room dekhna chahiye hai NT ke vadde veerji ko... kitna happening room hai mera, aur yeh... YUCK...
Maan in angry tone: haan dekha tha maine tumhara room, bohot happening hai... (maan was standing just behind her)
geet curiously turns to see "who have seen her room"...
she turns n stood numb seeing MSK standing infront of her....all of sudden, she shook her head n turns...
Geet: geet tu pagal ho gayi hai... maan yahan kaise aa sakte hai... sochna band kar unke baare mein...
n turns back... maan was still standing there crossing his arms over his chest... geet almost got a heart attack... she dropped all the gift n gave a faint smile to maan..
Geet: aap..??
Maan asks in fake anger: hmm.. kya keh rahi thi tum mere room ke baare mein...
geet looks round the room n then maan
Geet tries to holds a fake smile: kuch nahi... kuch bhi toh nahi kaha... infact mai toh bol rahi thi, kitna awesome room hai... mai mumma ko bolungi mere room ko bhi renovate karke bilkul aisa bana de...
maan smiles inwardly knowing what she was saying a few mins ago..
Maan moves closer to her: kyu tumhe mera room itna pasand aya..??
Geet stood there looking at him: nahi...haan...nahi mera matlab hai, acha hai aapka room
Maan moving even closer: yeh bhi toh tumhara hi room hai..
Geet smelling his perfume n breathing hard: hmm kya???
Maan said very softly: mera matlab hai shaadi ke baad yeh room tumhara hi toh hoga...
Geet lost in his words: kaise??
Maan: kyun tum mujhse shaadi nahi karogi??
maan's hand unwillingly slides on her slim waist, she din't protest..he lost himself into her, where his one touch sent millions of shivers down her spine...
Geet lost in some other world: hmmm...
there lips were mere inches away...
Naintara said loudly from downstairs: geet jaldi gifts lekar aayie....
Geet moves backward: woh.........
Maan: tumne jawab nahi diya geet...
Geet runs out with gifts n showed thumb downward: nahi karungi....
Maan smiled n holds his hair backward: maan yeh tu kya kar raha tha.... aaj tak kisi ladki ka tere upar aisa effect nahi hua.... toh phir iss geet mein aisa kya hai....!!

Precap : ........................


thankyou guys for your lovely comments and your support....do leave more...😉 n hit the like button
aditiwalia......your guess was right 😆.... naintara, geet n sameera are sisters....(a round of applause for you)👏
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read it before your PM.
You updated after so long😒
Loved the update😊
Hmmm, okay. So Naintara, Geet and Sameera are sisters. Interesting😉
I liked the way Geet entered the mansion with all the riti-rivaaz😆
Maan-Geet meeting in the mansion was awesome. Was waiting for maan to make entry in the update for so long😳
I want to see everyone's reaction on Geet talking to Maan.
BTW did Geet realize that NT's bro-in-law is Maan?
Please update the next update super soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Read it before your PM.
You updated after so long😒
Loved the update😊
Hmmm, okay. So Naintara, Geet and Sameera are sisters. Interesting😉
I liked the way Geet entered the mansion with all the riti-rivaaz😆
Maan-Geet meeting in the mansion was awesome. Was waiting for maan to make entry in the update for so long😳
I want to see everyone's reaction on Geet talking to Maan.
BTW did Geet realize that NT's bro-in-law is Maan?
Please update the next update super soon.


lolz thanks for the such a sweet comment....⭐️
sorry for the late comment😭 my exams are going on so i hardly get time to write it......
not yet....but she'll realize it soon n then her reaction will be . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 😆 lolz wait for it....
n will try to update next part tomorrow .......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmmm, okay.
All the best for the exams😊
Tomorrow? wow, this sounds cool.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi! It was short but soo perfect to the T :-D
When do your exams start dear? All the best for your exams. I hope they go well and you get to update us more frequently and with longer parts :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

love it..awsome..

cant wait for the nxt part.
plz..update soon.
thxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome update.....really loved it

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