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He came back to his room……

He paced to control his anger…why everytime……………

And thinking how can u control I anger………………….

And I cannot control himself…………………………….

Why……………….

And he got the call………………

And he answered.

Yes I will meet u tomorrow

At the same………….place……………..

Yes mandir,,,,,,,,,,,

Next day morning………….

She looks for him…………

But he is not there…………………..as she looked for jeep.

He won't go anywhere without his jeep……………..

Geet wanted to go to mandir……she asked john to help…and john took her to mandir………………..

She enter as with the gunghat……………….

And at the time……..she saw his jeep……

Yeh to inka jeep hay…….

Yeh kya kar raha hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He is talking to someone…..with a back to……………….geet.

She stretched her self to find the person

Lady:who teek hay na..

It is a familiar voice……………………

She listen to her voice.

M:donot worry she is safe.he cannot reach …………………

No beta…….u don';t know him he is powerful…and he is after her………………………………….

Pls donot leave her for a moment also……..

Maan:I cannot …..not for u….for me………I cannot let anyone harm her…….i cannot tolerate ,,,,,,,,,,,,just cannot……………..

Mean time…

Geet is confused…

She moved to find the person..

She Is her maami,,,,,,,,,,,

Maami……yeh ky a kar rahee hay,,,,,,,,,,aur kaun mere peeche hay.

Maan :isse pehle koi ap par shaq kare.aap yeha se chale jayee……….geet ke tension ab mat leejiyee……who safe hay.mere hoti huwe………ustak koi nahii pouch saktha ,it's a promise………………………..

Maami:jaanti hoo beta……barosaa hay…lekin armaan and his fathere are animals……….

They are after her property…

They try to kill her twice………………….but somehow…………..

But armaan……..is even ready for marriage…..just to kill ……………….her after marriage for her property…………..

His father…….scared him,to the death………………………..

Maan:I know…….how dangerous there are……………be care ful.maam.it is for u.they should not know that…………..ur trying to save……….her.other wise they literally kill u………….

Maam:I know………………but geet mother isa angel…………………………and her naani…………..also.they are nice people…………………..

Not like my husband and son………..

The mother an ddaughter gave shelter to my husband and me…………………………..

After few days armaan was born……….i always wished that armaan not become like father……………but my husband………………turned like him ………….

Im helpless.

After few years………..ranoo…………….geet's mom.had fallen in love and married to some unknown person……….

.

No body knows who he was.

After some days…………geet……is born………………………..

Maa…..died……..leaving ranoo……….and some years……….ranoo also died……..

I wan t to save geet….so I made arrangements…………………………..

I called my brother…………..manichanda………………withhis help………I always made geet..to stay with hostel………….

I always tried to save geet……………….maintained rudeness to geet…so that she cannot come back..

But geet is just like her mother angel………………………she used to take my tantarums…………………she never used to say anything……………………..

Beta.bahut dukh saha hay uss bachee………………..ne,,lekin uff nahii karthe hay…………

Sach mein bahut pyari,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bachee hay geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet eyes filled with tears…

She remembered ……………….the words she said to maan.

And all the time he is saving her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He saved her life…

And mamaji,,,,,and armaan.all their love and effection are acting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,they re trying to killme………………….

And all the time…….just like afool………………..

She cannot control…her tears…

She ran back ..

John………………..tried to stop her.but she is ran ………………….

She is crying………….

What 's wrong with geet.

Why is she crying………………………

And she came into the room.

And she shut the door……

Maan came at the evening…………

He find the cottage is silent……it is different……………………………

He always welcome d with geet giggles.oranger showing on ahmed…………and her jokes on john……..

She is entertainment package…..and there is no doubt in that…………………………………….

But silence….it is something……….different..

He came to dinner table.

Everything is set………..

But john and ahmed….ar esitting….

He looked at them,,,,,,,,,

They are serious…………….

He looked.at geet direction.

She is no where…

Where is she,,

Ahmed:she is in room………..locked herself….

Maan looked at watch…………………………………….

When,,,,,,,,,,,,

At the morning……………………….

Oh no……………..

U guys don't know she is scared of dark…………………….

She cannot stand darkness……………

And now…………………….she is locked her self.

There is something wrong……..

He kicked the door.

It is not opening………………………………..

And he cannot hear her sobbings……..

He ran to the window…

He became panic……put his hand oh his hair…….

And with a strong thrust.he broke the door..he didn't find…geet on the bed….

He looked the room…

He found geet is at the corner of the wall…………

She is in sitting position…………………………

Her head into her knees….

He go to her……………

And he checked her face……it is pale……….he checked the temperature.

She is burning with fever……………………..

He came back to his room……

He paced to control his anger…why everytime……………

And thinking how can u control I anger………………….

And I cannot control himself…………………………….

Why……………….

And he got the call………………

And he answered.

Yes I will meet u tomorrow

At the same………….place……………..

Yes mandir,,,,,,,,,,,

Next day morning………….

She looks for him…………

But he is not there…………………..as she looked for jeep.

He won't go anywhere without his jeep……………..

Geet wanted to go to mandir……she asked john to help…and john took her to mandir………………..

She enter as with the gunghat……………….

And at the time……..she saw his jeep……

Yeh to inka jeep hay…….

Yeh kya kar raha hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He is talking to someone…..with a back to……………….geet.

She stretched her self to find the person

Lady:who teek hay na..

It is a familiar voice……………………

She listen to her voice.

M:donot worry she is safe.he cannot reach …………………

No beta…….u don';t know him he is powerful…and he is after her………………………………….

Pls donot leave her for a moment also……..

Maan:I cannot …..not for u….for me………I cannot let anyone harm her…….i cannot tolerate ,,,,,,,,,,,,just cannot……………..

Mean time…

Geet is confused…

She moved to find the person..

She Is her maami,,,,,,,,,,,

Maami……yeh ky a kar rahee hay,,,,,,,,,,aur kaun mere peeche hay.

Maan :isse pehle koi ap par shaq kare.aap yeha se chale jayee……….geet ke tension ab mat leejiyee……who safe hay.mere hoti huwe………ustak koi nahii pouch saktha ,it's a promise………………………..

Maami:jaanti hoo beta……barosaa hay…lekin armaan and his fathere are animals……….

They are after her property…

They try to kill her twice………………….but somehow…………..

But armaan……..is even ready for marriage…..just to kill ……………….her after marriage for her property…………..

His father…….scared him,to the death………………………..

Maan:I know…….how dangerous there are……………be care ful.maam.it is for u.they should not know that…………..ur trying to save……….her.other wise they literally kill u………….

Maam:I know………………but geet mother isa angel…………………………and her naani…………..also.they are nice people…………………..

Not like my husband and son………..

The mother an ddaughter gave shelter to my husband and me…………………………..

After few days armaan was born……….i always wished that armaan not become like father……………but my husband………………turned like him ………….

Im helpless.

After few years………..ranoo…………….geet's mom.had fallen in love and married to some unknown person……….

.

No body knows who he was.

After some days…………geet……is born………………………..

Maa…..died……..leaving ranoo……….and some years……….ranoo also died……..

I wan t to save geet….so I made arrangements…………………………..

I called my brother…………..manichanda………………withhis help………I always made geet..to stay with hostel………….

I always tried to save geet……………….maintained rudeness to geet…so that she cannot come back..

But geet is just like her mother angel………………………she used to take my tantarums…………………she never used to say anything……………………..

Beta.bahut dukh saha hay uss bachee………………..ne,,lekin uff nahii karthe hay…………

Sach mein bahut pyari,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bachee hay geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet eyes filled with tears…

She remembered ……………….the words she said to maan.

And all the time he is saving her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He saved her life…

And mamaji,,,,,and armaan.all their love and effection are acting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,they re trying to killme………………….

And all the time…….just like afool………………..

She cannot control…her tears…

She ran back ..

John………………..tried to stop her.but she is ran ………………….

She is crying………….

What 's wrong with geet.

Why is she crying………………………

And she came into the room.

And she shut the door……

Maan came at the evening…………

He find the cottage is silent……it is different……………………………

He always welcome d with geet giggles.oranger showing on ahmed…………and her jokes on john……..

She is entertainment package…..and there is no doubt in that…………………………………….

But silence….it is something……….different..

He came to dinner table.

Everything is set………..

But john and ahmed….ar esitting….

He looked at them,,,,,,,,,

They are serious…………….

He looked.at geet direction.

She is no where…

Where is she,,

Ahmed:she is in room………..locked herself….

Maan looked at watch…………………………………….

When,,,,,,,,,,,,

At the morning……………………….

Oh no……………..

U guys don't know she is scared of dark…………………….

She cannot stand darkness……………

And now…………………….she is locked her self.

There is something wrong……..

He kicked the door.

It is not opening………………………………..

And he cannot hear her sobbings……..

He ran to the window…

He became panic……put his hand oh his hair…….

And with a strong thrust.he broke the door..he didn't find…geet on the bed….

He looked the room…

He found geet is at the corner of the wall…………

She is in sitting position…………………………

Her head into her knees….

He go to her……………

And he checked her face……it is pale……….he checked the temperature.

She is burning with fever……………………..

He came back to his room……

He paced to control his anger…why everytime……………

And thinking how can u control I anger………………….

And I cannot control himself…………………………….

Why……………….

And he got the call………………

And he answered.

Yes I will meet u tomorrow

At the same………….place……………..

Yes mandir,,,,,,,,,,,

Next day morning………….

She looks for him…………

But he is not there…………………..as she looked for jeep.

He won't go anywhere without his jeep……………..

Geet wanted to go to mandir……she asked john to help…and john took her to mandir………………..

She enter as with the gunghat……………….

And at the time……..she saw his jeep……

Yeh to inka jeep hay…….

Yeh kya kar raha hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He is talking to someone…..with a back to……………….geet.

She stretched her self to find the person

Lady:who teek hay na..

It is a familiar voice……………………

She listen to her voice.

M:donot worry she is safe.he cannot reach …………………

No beta…….u don';t know him he is powerful…and he is after her………………………………….

Pls donot leave her for a moment also……..

Maan:I cannot …..not for u….for me………I cannot let anyone harm her…….i cannot tolerate ,,,,,,,,,,,,just cannot……………..

Mean time…

Geet is confused…

She moved to find the person..

She Is her maami,,,,,,,,,,,

Maami……yeh ky a kar rahee hay,,,,,,,,,,aur kaun mere peeche hay.

Maan :isse pehle koi ap par shaq kare.aap yeha se chale jayee……….geet ke tension ab mat leejiyee……who safe hay.mere hoti huwe………ustak koi nahii pouch saktha ,it's a promise………………………..

Maami:jaanti hoo beta……barosaa hay…lekin armaan and his fathere are animals……….

They are after her property…

They try to kill her twice………………….but somehow…………..

But armaan……..is even ready for marriage…..just to kill ……………….her after marriage for her property…………..

His father…….scared him,to the death………………………..

Maan:I know…….how dangerous there are……………be care ful.maam.it is for u.they should not know that…………..ur trying to save……….her.other wise they literally kill u………….

Maam:I know………………but geet mother isa angel…………………………and her naani…………..also.they are nice people…………………..

Not like my husband and son………..

The mother an ddaughter gave shelter to my husband and me…………………………..

After few days armaan was born……….i always wished that armaan not become like father……………but my husband………………turned like him ………….

Im helpless.

After few years………..ranoo…………….geet's mom.had fallen in love and married to some unknown person……….

.

No body knows who he was.

After some days…………geet……is born………………………..

Maa…..died……..leaving ranoo……….and some years……….ranoo also died……..

I wan t to save geet….so I made arrangements…………………………..

I called my brother…………..manichanda………………withhis help………I always made geet..to stay with hostel………….

I always tried to save geet……………….maintained rudeness to geet…so that she cannot come back..

But geet is just like her mother angel………………………she used to take my tantarums…………………she never used to say anything……………………..

Beta.bahut dukh saha hay uss bachee………………..ne,,lekin uff nahii karthe hay…………

Sach mein bahut pyari,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bachee hay geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet eyes filled with tears…

She remembered ……………….the words she said to maan.

And all the time he is saving her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He saved her life…

And mamaji,,,,,and armaan.all their love and effection are acting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,they re trying to killme………………….

And all the time…….just like afool………………..

She cannot control…her tears…

She ran back ..

John………………..tried to stop her.but she is ran ………………….

She is crying………….

What 's wrong with geet.

Why is she crying………………………

And she came into the room.

And she shut the door……

Maan came at the evening…………

He find the cottage is silent……it is different……………………………

He always welcome d with geet giggles.oranger showing on ahmed…………and her jokes on john……..

She is entertainment package…..and there is no doubt in that…………………………………….

But silence….it is something……….different..

He came to dinner table.

Everything is set………..

But john and ahmed….ar esitting….

He looked at them,,,,,,,,,

They are serious…………….

He looked.at geet direction.

She is no where…

Where is she,,

Ahmed:she is in room………..locked herself….

Maan looked at watch…………………………………….

When,,,,,,,,,,,,

At the morning……………………….

Oh no……………..

U guys don't know she is scared of dark…………………….

She cannot stand darkness……………

And now…………………….she is locked her self.

There is something wrong……..

He kicked the door.

It is not opening………………………………..

And he cannot hear her sobbings……..

He ran to the window…

He became panic……put his hand oh his hair…….

And with a strong thrust.he broke the door..he didn't find…geet on the bed….

He looked the room…

He found geet is at the corner of the wall…………

She is in sitting position…………………………

Her head into her knees….

He go to her……………

And he checked her face……it is pale……….he checked the temperature.

She is burning with fever……………………..

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awesome update
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awesome update...so it was her maami who was trying to save her from start...
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Wow.. Simply nice... I just love the entire fan fiction... great story line.. so different... continue soon.. hope Maan share his past with Geet and try to live a normal married life..

I read to that you had met with accident... how are you and how are you feeling? Get well soon

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She is burning with temperature………………………..

he lead her to the bed…………….

He called the doctor………

Doctor gave medicines….

Through out the night maan is beside her…………………..looking at her.

His heart arched with pain………..

He know why.

He cannot stand her tears.

Tears striken face………………..

Pale………………no color……..he fear of loosing her…………………………

Had knocked his senses………….

Suddenly what happened………

Why it is…..

Why he always feel her pain……………………………..

On the other hand………………….

There is a building shown……………

A picture…….is with garland.

It is ranoos…………..

Mother of geet………….

I know I had commited mistake…………………………….

It is a sin……………………

But I promise I will find our daughter…….

I will give all the happiness she needed………………….

He remembered.

How he fallen for a village girl……

He is a big politician son…………

He went………….to… village…..HP for election compaign.

He is the youth leader………….

Where he need to reside the village head house…………….

She is gayatri devi…(nani of geet..and mother of ranoo)

He fell in love with the first sight of ranoo…………..

He like her simplicity.and beauty…………………..her kindness…………..

They made friends…

And on fine day they express their love……

And one night…………..

He need to go to near villages.for campaign where he and ranoo struck in rain……………..and due to the circumstances….

They made love ……..

And after that they realized the mistake…….

He knew…………that it is difficult to convince his parents.

As his father main aim is politics………………

His name is…………mr darmesh………………singh……………

And his son ….mohindar singh………..youth leader………………

Aspirant of his party……

Due to family .status………………..

He always give value for their family status and political status….

Ranoo and mohindar married in their kuldevi mandir………………

As mohindar promised that he will return and take her with him.and will marry infront of whole world…..

She believe him……………

And he left……..

Coming few weaks.

There is a surprise waiting forhim.

As the news flashed.that mohindar singh is going to …………….marry the other famous politican daughter……..

That was his father plan.to increase his political status…………………

Mohindar got home refused for marriage………..

But already the news………………broken…………….

After some more days……ranoo realized that she is pregnant of 3 months….

Whole family shattered………………….

The family reputation is on stake..

She try to………..call him………

But due to political………………….campaign.he is busy..

So he cannot attend the call…..

When he got free.work………he came back and realized that they left………………the place.

Andhe also…………………..learn that her daughter Is pregnant.

And the mothe r of ranoo died of this news………………………..

He felt very happy for becoming father…………

He wanted a baby child………..

He searched for her and daughter…..

But only one information he got that ranoo is died…

He felt helpless.

He never want any one in his life……he is living for his daughter………..

So he want his daughter ……………..

So he learn about maan and his activities…………….

At the same time..even geet maami also given the details of geet……inorder to save her…………………………

This is one part of the story……………………………..

On the other hand….maan is worrying as geet fever is not decreasing.

He is checking her through…………………..

He closed his eyes……………………

Due to frustuation………………………………

As time is increasing he is restless.

John and ahmed watching this…………….they feel.sorry………….

As…………….they also feel sad.

As they want geet to be bossy…….

He remember…………..

Ore oh john ke bachee..tere ander akal hay kya.

Yeh kya kiyeaa.tune…..phir karelaa layaa hay too…

Are tum log karelaa……………ke alwawa kuch aur nahii khata hay kya ……..isliyee sab ka shaqal yesi hi hay………

As john looking himself into mirror.where maan gave a look…..as none know she is referring to his chief.

Which is stealing glances…ahead of the news paper..smiling of her antics of teesing him……………………..

Ahmed also know that she is used to tease hi m by naming different names…but most of the names to maan…………………..

Maan is always her part of communication…

Are dust danav,das sa r wala raven……………….waigra waigra.

And he also use d to see a rare scene where maan used to smile at her antics..

He look at the sky..

Yeh allah…………yeh apke pyarri bachee hay…………….pls usee jaldi teek karna..

Zindagi aduri lag rahi hay iss ladki ki banaa……………..

Choti behen maanta hoo isko...

Pls allah...

Even john praying to jesus chirst……………

Maan closed his eyes

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loved the update...
thats the story of geet's parents
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ur too good...
keep writing...
cont soon...
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lovely update sri...please continue soon

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