kismat ka khel updt 05/11 last part - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...
patha nahin kab inke chuppa chuppi khatham hoga...
pl cont soon
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awesome di...
dont wait for next..
loved it...
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she closed her eyes

his hands are on her waist

completely lost in her.

Geet open her eyes

She want……………….to drown in his intense eyes

But suddenly morning incident stuck into the mind.

Chodiyee muje….tryi ng to escape from his hold.

He increase the grip…………….

She winced in pain……………………..

Ahh.

He left her………………….

But put hands……………….on either side of her head..

Straightly look into her eyes

Kya bol rahe the us doctor ko…….

Acchaa laga hay.woh doc

She observed the sarcasm in his voice

She find the some thing different

She smiled…

At that time.suddenly there is a knock at the door

Are madam………………..aap ke……………medicines ka time ho gaya hay……………………..

And he open the door.and went out……………………

Next day morning.

He enter the room to find geet is sleeping

A smile in her lips………………………….

He got smile in his lips.

He never attached to anyone

His mission is important for him………………

He always kept emotions away from his work……………..

But this girl..made her way to his heart………..itself………….

He wonders how.

And then the shot came into his mind.

The minute doctor words…………………

His heart goes on bleeding on seeing geet's condition……

His fear.came out.

Just then .dadimaa………..

Dadi:maan what 's wrong with u beta…why ur phone is switched off

What happened dadimaa is everything is alright………………………

Dadi:ha beta.next week annee and Vicky are coming………………….u know they love u very much………so.please…….beta come for one week……………………….

This time.last time u didn't meet him……..they felt bad………………….

Please beta…………

Dadimaa:don't worry dadimaa this time I will surely come…………

With that he cut the phone………….

And turned to find ahmed looking at him.

Sir this time we need to be very careful.

They know each and every moment of ours.i think we need to shift this place.

Ok…..

Ahmed..

He got a call.

The person…………sir.

Maan:haa bolo…aditya…………..

Sir…aapka shaq sahi tha.woh armaan hi tha.lekin

Maan:lekin kya..

Sir….woh pehle se tayari mein laga a tha

Abhi who out of country mein tha……………

Don't worry I will be ready for him now……….

With that he cut the call.

And call ahmed…………………………………..

A new place………………

Yes the place is safe for geet

But others.

he smiled………………………………….

I did'nt have no option……………………………….

Ok……………

Just then he saw anjali start gaping him….

Oh no this doc……………………

Next he saw amit is going to ……..geet's room………

Geet woke up………….and chatting with ahmed………….

It is not chatting

As ahmed is listening as geet is talking.

She became her usual.

Smiling….talking………………..

He saw amit…………

Amit also listening and smiling at her…………………

Amit:hello beautiful.u look more beautiful when u smile…………………….

Just then.maan enter into the room……………………………

Anjali enter the room.

Still looking at maan…………

She fumed in anger……………

Ahmed look surprised for the sudden change of expression

Geet are u ok………

Haa….chudail.agaii mere maan par nazar dale ne ki

Yese dekh rahi hya……………ki who koi gulab jamoon ho…….

Kaise dekh rahi hay babaji.

Uffo…….mein maan bhi na….

She looked at the shirt………………..

His muscles are clearly visible.

She saw john coming into the room…………………………

Amit and anjali left for rounds……….

John:hi geet .kaise hoo.pata hay ghar mein na………..muje bilkul mood nahii hay.is liye chale ayaa.kaise hay yaar tu………

Geet:john…yehkya pehen rakha hay tune…………..kaise kapade pehna hay..tuj ko na koi dressing sense nahii hay
john:geet what's wrong with u..this is the latest style……………….

Geet:style …………………….my foot………..isse par jacket kyon nahii pehn.

Luckily ahmed went out for some work…….

Maan looked at geet……………….

Her eyes are fix on maan…….but fuming at john.

John:super duper confused….jacket on this ……………….he looked at his outfit.it is really cool…………….

No ways it does n't suit

Kaise kaise kapde pehenke body kyon dikarahi hay hoo.sharm varm nahii hay tume………..

John:sharm……….varm……………………

Maan looked at her .and understood…………………that her point is towards her……………………..

He smiled at her possessiveness……….

Accha toh yeh problem hay………….

He smiled……………………

Just then geet saw him smiling…………

Yeh kyon has rahee hoo……………………

Dekhoo.john agar yesa kapde pehnke ayaa na.toh mein tujse baat nahii karungi……………aur tumare taraf dekhooungi nahii.

Sun rahe ho kya.

John:teek hay geet mein abhi issi waqt change karungi,,,,,,,,,,,

And with that he ran out………..

Geet:yeh john bhi na…….bilkul pagal hay

Jisko mein ne kaha usko toh faraq nahii padtha………………

Kyon faraq padega……………achaa kaasa attention mil raha tha na

Pehle who nurse..bahana doondthe hay kamre mein aneee ke.

Aur who doctor……………….

With that thoughts.

She moved from bed……………

And her leg ..slips.

Before she could fall.

The mascular hands.catche dher fromfall.

Mahii……………..eye lock…………………………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
loved geet's possessiveness on maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
poor john..couldnt understand a word.
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Pata nahi .subha se gayab hay….

Aur kaha hay………………….

Geeet is restless as she didn't see him..

As least to know. That maan had gone for some work……………

But he got his first sight………………………………..of his life………….sleeping beauty……………………………………

He touched her………..and said good bye and went to his work………………

He enter to the airport………………………………….to find a cute guy and a very beautiful girl standing at the entrance

They came and hugged maan……………………….

The boy is his little brother Vicky

And the girl is anee his sister……………..

He drove them to the HOME

To find a old lady welcoming them………………………………………

She is savitri devi…………………..

They hugged her….

And all set for chitchatting.

Suddenly Vicky noticed maan in different world.

He whispered at anee's ear

There is something change In bro na…………\anee

Kyon.

Are buddu dekho na.yeha par hay par yeha nahii hay

Anee CAME to him and poked his shoulder

Bhai.kaha hay aap.yesa laghta hayaap yeha hay dil kahi aur hay..

Nahii yesi baat nahii hay………….

Ek problem hay.uske baaremein Soc. Raha hoo.

Prob aur msk ko…..impossible……………vicky said in arrogance.

Maan gave a glare to shut him up.

Dadimaa

:kya baat hay beta aap hame batayee…………………………..

Ji dadi maa.woh mitra uncle…..hay na………..unke daughter ke residence ka problem hay…………………………………bas samaj mein ara hay kya karoon…………..

\mitra uncle.but there is no daughter for him only son na………..vicky sharply used his brain……………………………………

I mean not his orginal daughter………………..i mean……………..something un official……………………

Oh……vicky mind is thiking something is fishy….

Maan thinks.i know my bro….in mind ,his brain is sharp…………….

Suddenly.dadi maa.finds it.and said

Shut up Vicky.maan don't worry bring her to km.we will look after her………..after her problem solved then.we can think of…………………..

She thought.first time maan is saying something………………………………………/

She agreed……….

And anee and Vicky.went to their rooms……

Mean while .maan reached hospital………………………

To find geet is nervously playing with her dupatta.and looking constantly at the door….

Nurse..pagal ladki.hay…………dawaii dobaar kaha………….lekin dyann nahii de rahi hay……………

Pata nahii uss bale insaaan kaise sambaltha hay isko….

Maan laughed…………………….

No wonder he is the only person could handle her………………………

He enter to the room to find.his geet getting angry and mumbling to her self..

Recognized that she only cursing him……………………

Dust danavv….dus sar wala raavan.samaj kya apne apko yeha mein intezaar kar rahee hoo aur unka…….

Chaddo.kya faraq pata hay unko….

Lekin kamse kamek baar yeha ataa .subha se nahii dekha.

Suddenly she heard noise to find him staring at her with his hypnotic……………………eyes.

She turned her head.not willing to show her emotion s to him.

But his eyes are longer to her too……………………

Just then ahmed enter and said that geet discharge facilities are…..over.

And john came with longing face………………………and said everythin g is ready……………………..

And .geet greeted everyone In the hospital.

James uncle…………………

Neeta ..receptionist…………………

Nurse1……

Sheela nurse

Amit………..

And said anjee…………byee………………………

And everything…………………………………….

And she sit In the car.

Everytime he will come in jeep/

This time in car…………

As she about to open the back door……………………………………

He looked at her………………

And john came to rescue.and said. I will be at the back…………………

And they both sit In the car………

As due to medicines……geet drove to sleep…………………

Maan thi nks kitna sooti hay,,,

Less to his thoughts.whole day not able to sleep for his one glimpse……………………………………

He put radio on…………………..

The song is………….

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehti Ho

Jeevan Meethi Pyaas Yeh Kehti Ho

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehti Ho

Har Shyam Aankhon Par

Tera Aanchal Lehraye

Har Raat Yaadon Ki

Baarat Le Aaye

Maein Saans Leta Hoon

Teri Khushboo Aati Hai

Ek Mehka Mehka Sa

Paigham Laati Hai

Meri Dil Ki Dhadkan Bhi

Tere Geet Gaati Hai

Pal Pal ...

Tum Sochogi Kyon Itna

Maein Tumse Pyaar Karoon

Tum Samjhogi Deewana

Maein Bhi Iqraar Karoon

Dewaanon Ki Yeh Baatein

Deewane Jaante Hain

Jalne Mei Kya Mazaa Hai

Parwanr Jaante Hain

Tum Yunhi Jalate Rehna

Aa Aakar Khwabon Mein

Pa L Pal ...

He dropped john at some place……..

He joined……………………to ahmed…………..

Geet is still in sleep………………………….

The car stopped at a big mansion

The name km

Khurana mansion……………

He stopped the car……………turned off the lights

And bend to geet……………….and put a light kiss on her fore head and said…………..

Welcome home geeet

Welcome to ur sasural………..

A slight smile on his face

Precap:sasural.geet entry

Friends with Vicky and anee…………………..

And also dadimaa…….

Poor maan…………………..

Ab kya karegaa……………………..

Because here ……geet is boss not maan…………..

Let us see what happens next…………………………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
continue soon dear waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful...desparately waiting 4 next part...cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
finally he got her home...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
all parts fabulous
love it
cont soonnn

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