FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 69

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Posted: 14 years ago
U r a genius
D part was awesome, hilarious, mindblowing....... My vocablury is not rich enough 2 describe d update.

Gauri rocks. D oath & her insistence 2 loose her virginity cracked me up.

Pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oh God sri!! u r not goin to make this easy for anyone, are you??


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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGGGGG..tht's all i can say
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhhhhhhhhhh God.
I do not even know what will happen next.
I do not want to even think...because last time i thought something n den something else happened in your udpate.
You are teasing us Devi.
I m juss gonna wait......and is there a chance of an update today....................pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
your playing with us more thn with gauri-shiv!!
I want to know what will be happening next, before I start reading an update- *sigh*

Thanks for updating fast :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
that's the most hilarious pledge i have ever heard
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Posted: 14 years ago
any chance of an evening treat ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nanthini9

any chance of an evening treat ;)


Lol... I thought you only read my stories during your study break 😉

I am writing the next update now, but I doubt that I will be able to put it up soon. we shall see...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi27


Lol... I thought you only read my stories during your study break 😉

I am writing the next update now, but I doubt that I will be able to put it up soon. we shall see...




hahaha its more like when you update I take my study break 😉😆😆

I will wait patiently
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Posted: 14 years ago

(Recommended only for age 21+ and if you are still in doubt, maybe you should wait until you are good and married and save this post until after ;)

The Hours – Part 5

"Love is the answer, but while you're waiting for it, sex raises some pretty good questions." - Woody Allen

She wondered if this had been a bad idea during the fifth hour. He had kissed and nibbled and licked every inch of her skin and she marveled at all the things about her body that he seemed to know that even she didn't… what he had done to her could only be called an art… the part of her mind that was the author of all her caustic wit guffawed right then and she wondered if a completely sated body could cause one to be cheesy… an art indeed… but then again, it really was true. The jazz had certainly stoked the mood, but it had failed miserably at its intended purpose – to mask her cries of pleasure… and the evidence of its utter failure now lay floating around them… the feathers from the pillow that she had bitten so hard as to rip to shreds were still moving freely about the room, almost appearing to defy gravity… and making her feel like she was indeed floating on clouds…

And now she was wondering if this had been a bad idea… because there was always a tomorrow waiting… a tomorrow when the sun would rise and she would rise along with it from this bed a new woman… with the memories of the long hours on this bed with him… and she would have to go back to being "a stick-in-the-mud" as he loved to call her… while she knew that her body would be awakened and thrumming with a new energy that she wouldn't be able to act upon with quite the abandon that she was able to tonight…

Despite everything that he had done – and the nine times that her body had exploded like she imagined only the Big Bang must have – he refused to go all the way… what was the man made of, really? And she could see what it was clearly costing him… many times, he had looked like he was in pain and had had to walk away from her for a few minutes before her body – the insatiable mass that it had become – would start again and he would return to answer its need... She doubted that she had any nerve endings left and was amazed that it had not reached the threshold of saturation and burned out completely… she prayed to God to have mercy on Shiv and for this to end in an hour… she really didn't see how he could go for another three without being treated for exhaustion at the end of it.

Unless… unless… she could somehow figure out a way to break his iron-clad control… she didn't know how she could do that short of taking him by force… she almost laughed out loud at that thought… but then stopped herself… the idea was not without its merit. How would she be able to do that? She was not much of a seductress, seeing as how she had only been initiated into the carnal pleasures three short hours ago, but wasn't this an instinctual thing? She had heard somewhere that there were only two kinds of women in the world… the women who knew their power, and the women who didn't…

Shiv walked out of the bathroom just then and she saw that he had three ice-cubes in his hands which he was running down his chest and back and neck. The desire that she had thought was completely sated hit her again with the force of an avalanche, but this time, it wasn't a need for her body to find release… this time, it was the sight of him that brought it on…

She slid off the bed with the sheet held up to her chest and walked up to him. He paused in what he was doing as he saw her come towards him, just watching her. He could tell that something was different in her eyes this time… Lord, he may have to shackle himself to the walls to exercise any more restraint tonight… everything about her was driving him out of his skin. This had to be the worst punishment that he had ever suffered, pleasuring her, but not being able to share in that pleasure…

She leaned up to kiss him and he leaned down automatically and she took the opportunity to let go of the sheet and wind her arms around his neck. His body had been in a steady state of torture for four hours and it did not take kindly to such abuse. When he felt her tongue against his, he lost it completely and backed her against the wall to raise her up more. She helped and before he knew it, her legs were wrapped around him as he ran his lips over her every inch of skin that he could reach.

She pushed down his pajama bottom with her legs and he stopped her suddenly, groaning against her neck.

"No!" he finally managed to say.

"YES!" was her reply.

"No!"

Rather than continue with such useless back and forth, she said the only thing that could have ever made him reconsider.

"Shiv, you know it will hurt me the first time. It will hurt me less if I am this aroused and my body is this ready… and I will never forgive you if you make me beg tonight!… and I will always hold it against you when it hurts that first time if you don't do it today!"

His mind grabbed onto those four sentences like it was the sacred truth that would be mankind's salvation, but his body was already ahead of any such analysis…

"Your first time will not be against a wall, my little virgin." She didn't quite grasp the meaning of it right then, but she soon found out when he carried her back to bed and slid inside her without haste.

And both of them had been wrong… there was no pain for her… but the pleasure was so intense that she finally fainted…

She would later think that Akira could make a killing on his little research plant if he marketed it to virgins facing their wedding night…

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