FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#661

Lovd it! Ur update realy provd tat humans shld not b judged by their behaviours n outer appearance, b'coz their cn b a saint within a devil lookin man.

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Sofna

@Sofna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#662

From the chracter u r developin of Shiv it was obv he wud never tke advntge of this situation...n want her in his senses wen TheY actually hav SR.....KNWIN GAURI SHE WUD HOlD IT AGAINST HIM....Waitin to read wat happens next....Thnk u 4 thes frequent updtes....the past few days.........😆...i guess in a a sense wer in a similar state to Gauri..4 the .updtes😛.

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Suhasini

@.Suhasini.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#663

gauri's feelings and her state was well described and i now see shiv in very well understandable pati.........after all accusations from her, he is ready to help her......and i like this sentence lastly

She could always blame the aphrodisiac later…

hehe thats what gauri....................

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#664

I ddin't get my PM😒 Thank God I stalk this thread😆

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579908

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#665

OMG!

Shiv won't do it,

but Gouri wants to do it,

that leaves me wondering,

will they do it or not 😆

wonderful update Devi.

Nadia
xxx

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#666

for the first time...i like shiv ;)

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Bublish

@Bublish

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#667

i must say u r a great writer.. nd a different one too👏...

thx 4 the pm .. continue soon

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#668

Im sooo glad that Shiv will not be taking advantage of this situation for his benefit. Like he said/thought it would be better if they consummate their marriage when both are in their senses.

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#669

Women & men their is lot more than the bed they share few understand....few try n leave half way n others don't give a damn!!!!!

He's the best bad ass!!!! not only in ur FF but also on the screen that's another story the CV's change according to thr TRP's.

As for the woman that so called aprodhisiac it's jus a catalyst to what is hidden in layers in her.........certainly she can blame on it!!! But question is how long she can do like that.......... or how long a human can do like that....... They are wonderful characters!!!!

Edited by 1kaarzoo - 14 years ago

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Amna

@cutiepie9512345

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#670

Devi brilliant as usual!!
you captured their feelings really really well!!
aww Shiv wants to wait!!!
and Gauri is acting like shes PMSing!! LOLZ
i feel bad for him cuz of her insults but hes sweet!!
and again you left at a critical point!!
jaldi update karnaaa!!!!
muah muah!!

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago

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