'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 56

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

well my vote goes to mayank.
firstly,cuz i think there could be another explanation of his behavior. what if mayank and simran was good friends and could understand each other very well and decided to spend the life together. then nupur enters his life and with time mayank fell in love with her. mayank couldnt tell her about simran before knowing nupurs feelings. so he proposed her. and eventually he was going to call off the marriage but the card reached nupurs house before that. and you know what happened later.
besides i still believe he deserves chance to explain. just think what if mayank was right and nupur misunderstood him and never gave a chance to explain. and she goes on with tanmay. still it'll haunt her all her life. still she'll feel cheated. and mayankon the other hand will feel not trusted by his love! then the lives of all four will be destroyed.
secondly, i dont consider tanmay as an option. when i started reading this ff i totally hated him just being a typical mayurian. but as the story progressed, i found out he wasnt someone that special. he has almost no effect on nupurs life. and even if he has some effect, thats only as a good friend. i find him no exceptional from dia except for he's a boy. he cares for her which is the basic rule in friendship- you care for a friend. and as you said he has not expressed any emotion for nupur, he doesnt qualify for the category of '' who loves you''.
as for your question about the intikhaab, well they say one should choose the one who loves them. but i dont agree with that. cuz i think its utter selfish. when you choose the one who loves you abandoning the one you love, you choose your comfort, your happiness over love. and love doesnt work that way. cuz either you love or you act selfish, these two dont go together.
and well yes nupurs decision could be childish and immature but love is childish and immature! the emotion named love doesnt exist in the real mature world. there exists want and need not love. love is mad and thats why it makes people go mad on it. love cant be explained or formulated and thus cant be maturated.
so one again i'd want nupur to give her love a chance and choose mayank ,cuz loves worth all the chances in the world.

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

well my vote goes to mayank.
firstly,cuz i think there could be another explanation of his behavior. what if mayank and simran was good friends and could understand each other very well and decided to spend the life together. then nupur enters his life and with time mayank fell in love with her. mayank couldnt tell her about simran before knowing nupurs feelings. so he proposed her. and eventually he was going to call off the marriage but the card reached nupurs house before that. and you know what happened later.
besides i still believe he deserves chance to explain. just think what if mayank was right and nupur misunderstood him and never gave a chance to explain. and she goes on with tanmay. still it'll haunt her all her life. still she'll feel cheated. and mayank on the other hand will feel not trusted by his love! then the lives of all four will be destroyed.
secondly, i dont consider tanmay as an option. when i started reading this ff i totally hated him just being a typical mayurian. but as the story progressed, i found out he wasnt someone that special. he has almost no effect on nupurs life. and even if he has some effect, thats only as a good friend. i find him no exceptional from dia except for he's a boy. he cares for her which is the basic rule in friendship- you care for a friend. and as you said he has not expressed any emotion for nupur, he doesnt qualify for the category of '' who loves you''.
as for your question about the intikhaab, well they say one should choose the one who loves them. but i dont agree with that. cuz i think its utter selfish. when you choose the one who loves you abandoning the one you love, you choose your comfort, your happiness over love. and love doesnt work that way. cuz either you love or you act selfish, these two dont go together.
and well yes nupurs decision could be childish and immature but love is childish and immature! the emotion named love doesnt exist in the real mature world. there exists want and need not love. love is mad and thats why it makes people go mad on it. love cant be explained or formulated and thus cant be maturated.
so once again i'd want nupur to give her love a chance and choose mayank ,cuz loves worth all the chances in the world.

Originally posted by: Nisha-ArTiLover

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first of all Neela..sorry to say but i dont understand the logic and ur thinking about Mayank..i mean what you write in your note...you tried to show him "liar,cheater and what not..i am not agree with you what you tried to tell us about Mayank..he may innocent..but you tried to show us negative side of his character..

about Tamnay..i dont understand,due to just his some words,some words of sympathy ..he is perfect of Nupur..you tried to show him perfect ..i mean all the qualities in just Tamnay..i dont agree with you at all..

about My Vote

My vote for Mayank

i want Nupur should give him chance to clarify himself..she should listen him once as he loves her too...if he said yes for his engagment there is must be some strong reason..because"Life is not easy..we have to suffer a lot"Mayank too in some problem thats why he hid truth..

MayUr loves eachother..he proposed her..its mean he wanted to marry her..he loves her..he tried to contact her.he tried to explain her problem,he tried to tell her truth..as he loves her

MayUr should be together...as they both loves eachother...

Originally posted by: sharneel

Nisha..hi! I have been meaning to respond to you for quite some time now but I have been so busy lately. Anyways...I completely understand and respect your views and opinions but unfortunately I must say that you are no way near to understanding the characters...the true essence of all my FFs which has always been character driven. At every aspect of this story, you read it like a typical reader which is not wrong at all. But I have some readers who have been with me from my 1st FF till now and they know me very well. This FF was special because I repeatedly asked all readers to put yourself in Nupur's place and for that you have to accept her the way she is which you didn't. Nupur is sensitive, dramatic, naive, driven by her heart, loves a simple life...her character has been so deeply sketched by me only so that everyone can relate. So by repeatedly telling Nupur to be more realistic and do this and act like that will only put yourself in one of her friend's role like Diya, not her. And I think both Diya and Tanmay were trying to do the same is to put some sense into her. People like Nupur exist in this world whether we like it or not...they are simple in their own way..far from reality. Some of them grow up with time and learn from life experience depending on the circumstances and some live their whole life like this. We should accept them the way they are and always support them from their point of view which can be done...that's called empathy. I hate it when I react to certain things in my personal life and my parents or my friends come and tell me you should have done this...or reacted that way...blah blah. I feel like they don't understand me. So I will say the same thing to you, you did not understand Nupur. She may have over-reacted according to you but this is who she is! And she will not change overnight.

About comments on Mayank...no I did not try to make him a liar or a cheat. I also did the same thing that I advised my readers...I have put myself in Nupur's shoes who is going through a dilemma right now. She doesn't trust him anymore...she is so outraged in her anger that she is destroying herself although its not her fault at all. Now if I am to move the story forward where she has to bring herself to a state where she decides to confront him, these thoughts may come across her mind, wouldn't it? Trust is like a mirror sweetheart, once shattered or even with a minor scratch, it will never be the same. You are left with the scarred image that mirror reflects...So would it be wrong or completely impossible that she may be thinking all sorts of horrible things about Mayank? She might...I am just asking my readers that if she does then how should Nupur handle those?

And last of all, what you said about Tanmay that he was taking advantage of Nupur..honestly that did hurt me! I have always portrayed him as an honest friend just like Diya but he had to live with those allegations. You said pretty much what Abhi said before the BB match...that was sad from your part. You will know soon enough why it did hurt me so much.

Finally, we don't know each other but I'd want to say this one thing about myself. I am one of the hard core MaYur fans you will probably ever come across. Any love stories that I can think of, tragic or romantic, they always fit my MaYur profiles. And I love my characters...each one of them. Be it Mayank or Nupur or Tanmay or Mahak or Diya or Aparna. The reason why I can give such detailed touches to each character is probably because I can see them when I write and I feel what they feel. And I will never do anything to tarnish their persona...thats not my style. Everyone is just a victim of circumstances and sometimes because of the way we are, we lose the most precious thing in our life...Love.

I hope I managed to put forth my point across without any offense to you honey. I am glad that you have joined IF and my FF because from your detailed comments I can be sure of one thing...that you are seriously reading all parts of Intikhaab and following everyone's comments which is a great trait to have as a reader.

Thank you...

-Neela

Originally posted by: Nisha-ArTiLover

@Neela

Thanks for replying me😊

well if i did not put myself in Nupur's shoes then it was not easy for me to write long comments..but i always tried to give my POV clear as i read all the parts clearly and relate to myself with characters..so i m not agree with you at all ..

yeah you right i recently joined IF..But i was the silent reader on IF..i have read many Fanfics..i strat to write your FF because your characters is very close to real life..thts why i always give my opinion according our real life experienced..😊

secondly what you said about Mayank..

"dear when you loves someone deeply,you will never think all the aspects of his/her deed..because you love him.."

"when you love someone you will never think about his bad habbits,his wrong deeds,his little mistakes because you love him.."

so what you write about Mayank..if i put myself in Nupur shoes..then i must Think

"i should give him chance,may be he innocent,may be he is in problem,i should not said him that what i said..may be he needs me..may be he got hurt because of my words..why i shouted at him,i should listen him..i know he loves me..why Mayank you did that..i want answer..as i love you...i cant live without you.."if i was in place of Nupur..i will never think like that what you write about Mayank..because i love him

you said Nupur is naive,driven by heart,then she will do what her heart says.and in her heart..there is a one person"Mayank"

she loves him deeply...she will choose him,she will give him chance..

about Tanmay...

if you show him as her friend..so let him her friend only..because she cant accept him in her life because she like him as friend..

according to writer his/her every character of his/her story has important place in his/her heart thats why he able to put his/her characters thought in the story..

i dont know why did you feel hurt about Tanmay?

but why you did not feel pain about Mayank?

Mayank,Nupur,Tanmay..these are all your characters in this story then why it difference.?

i am not writer but i read many novels,FFs,stories n according to my experienced,my POv i can say one thing

"a writer should be person for whom his/her every character has special place in his/her heart"

but why you feel difference between Tanmay n Mayank?

Why did not you show negative side of Tamnay character..may be he doest not Love Nupur..may be after marriage he cant bear the fact that his wife loves Mayank not him after all he too human being not Angel..

once again thankss for reply..😊