'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

pyar agr itna aqalmand hota tu koi na tu kabhi dhoka khata na hi daard pata

na kis k lyan jan dayta na zindagi bhar kis k intezar kerta


you're totally right dear. and thats what i've been saying in my posts. thats why nupur should go back to mayank cuz he's the one she loves. tanmay is still nothing but a friend! and if you remember he has never expressed any emotion other than friendship towards nupur.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

😉 khufay -e- eqrar humain khabi na tha

hum tu un kay inkar se darty thy
aj kah hi deejay



inkaar ki gunjaish hi nahi...ab to khauff izhaar-e-khayal se hai. kahin hamare alfaz unhe lajawab na kar de 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -roshnee-


you're totally right dear. and thats what i've been saying in my posts. thats why nupur should go back to mayank cuz he's the one she loves. tanmay is still nothing but a friend! and if you remember he has never expressed any emotion other than friendship towards nupur.

i know n on tht i agree with u
but if ur broken completly ...sum1 betrayed u ...u will looss ur scnces ...
meri jan its nt easy to thnk practicallyy...
anyways its just the diffrence of POV...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



inkaar ki gunjaish hi nahi...ab to khauff izhaar-e-khayal se hai. kahin hamare alfaz unhe lajawab na kar de 😕

loo hum kab se muntazir hain lajawab hony ko
woh hain k humary sawal hi nhi suntay ...
mana k hum khud nhi day paty apny sawalo ka jawab
kya pata mil jay sab un k izhaar-e-kayal mein
such a bad one ..haina
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Posted: 14 years ago
aur laptop k charge ja rah hai...per hum jab wapas yaha aay tu lajawab khud ko
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

i know n on tht i agree with u

but if ur broken completly ...sum1 betrayed u ...u will looss ur scnces ...
meri jan its nt easy to thnk practicallyy...
anyways its just the diffrence of POV...


i am not talking about practicality dear. in this ff i dont think neither nupur nor mayank is practical.i'm saying that in a broken state with no logic working on my mind would i fall for just a friend of mine? my answer would be no. cuz in a broken state i cant feel any emotion rather than feeling lifeless.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

loo hum kab se muntazir hain lajawab hony ko

woh hain k humary sawal hi nhi suntay ...
mana k hum khud nhi day paty apny sawalo ka jawab
kya pata mil jay sab un k izhaar-e-kayal mein
such a bad one ..haina



lol...chaliye phir ..yeh aap k liye..

aazamayishon me hai wafaayein meri
abhi to bas saansein tootna baaqi hai
qadam jo ruk jaate hai teri dar pe
bata issme khata kya meri hai?


ab jawab dijiye 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lo janab hum ko tu buaht azzi hain yeah kahtayein
awaragi mein hi sahi un k daar tak tu pohacthy hain...
woh kholy daar apna ya band rekhain darwazy
khaak samayat ker hi zindagi pa lay tay hain
ya khuda neela...aj shayad 8 9 mahinay baad qafiyay mila rahin hoon...sach mein bara muskil kam lag rah hai...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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first of all Neela..sorry to say but i dont understand the logic and ur thinking about Mayank..i mean what you write in your note...you tried to show him "liar,cheater and what not..i am not agree with you what you tried to tell us about Mayank..he may innocent..but you tried to show us negative side of his character..
about Tamnay..i dont understand,due to just his some words,some words of sympathy ..he is perfect of Nupur..you tried to show him perfect ..i mean all the qualities in just Tamnay..i dont agree with you at all..
about My Vote
My vote for Mayank
i want Nupur should give him chance to clarify himself..she should listen him once as he loves her too...if he said yes for his engagment there is must be some strong reason..because"Life is not easy..we have to suffer a lot"Mayank too in some problem thats why he hid truth..
MayUr loves eachother..he proposed her..its mean he wanted to marry her..he loves her..he tried to contact her.he tried to explain her problem,he tried to tell her truth..as he loves her
MayUr should be together...as they both loves eachother...
i agree with Nisha Neela
i vote for mayank
i olso want nups to give mayank chance to explain him self
why he did what he did as Nisha said there must be some stronge reason why he ok his engagement n the sometime he was acting to be in love with nupur even asked her to marry him 😕
as Tamney i don't hate him he's been veery good friend with nupur but i don't want him asher patner
in real life people said do marry some1 who loves u more then u love him
but here nupur she's totally n madly in love with her childhood friend mayank
so i think if h can't have mayank she wll bettr of with bothof them
onedy she'll fall in love may be not like the love she felt Mayank but sure she will
Neela as i said my vote goes to mayu
n i will pray he have reason why he did wat he did to nupur
other wise he wouln't propose if he dn't love her right?
i really don't wanna to be brove that mayu is cheater n did play her emotinal which will be heart broken to our Nupur
so hope he'll broke his engagement n have happly ever after with my Nupur 😛
n the update was superb glad that tamnay give nupur piece of mind of advice beautifully written sis
sorry for the late comment😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

lo janab hum ko tu buaht azzi hain yeah kahtayein
awaragi mein hi sahi un k daar tak tu pohacthy hain...
woh kholy daar apna ya band rekhain darwazy
khaak samayat ker hi zindagi pa lay tay hain
ya khuda neela...aj shayad 8 9 mahinay baad qafiyay mila rahin hoon...sach mein bara muskil kam lag rah hai...




haath jo uthe duaaon me tere
har khushi Woh likkhe falak pe tere
mere haalat pe na aahen bhare
khaak bhi nahi naseeb me mere


sorry...bhookh lagi to khana khaane chale gaye 😊 You're right..humain bhi arsa hogaya qaifiya milate hue. koi aisa mila bhi to nahi na...ab aap hai to saath dijiye. hum bhi dekhe kahan tak hum aapko samajh paate hai aur khud ko samjha paate hai

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