'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 30

Originally posted by: aancchal

hey dear please is bar mayur ko mila dena pichle bar ki trah nahi jisme mayur alag ho gaye the . ek bar to hamne unki judai seh li sayad is baar seh na paye.

Prachi...iss baar kuch bhi hamare haath nahi hai. faisla aap readers pe hai..jaisa ending chahenge aap log...waisa hi hoga 😊 so apne dil se iss khauff ko nikaal bahar kijiye and enjoy the storyline so far.

-Neela

Originally posted by: sharneel

Prachi...iss baar kuch bhi hamare haath nahi hai. faisla aap readers pe hai..jaisa ending chahenge aap log...waisa hi hoga 😊 so apne dil se iss khauff ko nikaal bahar kijiye and enjoy the storyline so far.

-Neela

first of all i wana introduse myself it's not prachi my name is ragini . and for your story your story is wonderful but sab se main muda ye hai ki ye mayank aur nupur ki kahani hai . or being a obsessed mayur fan i really dont like when they get separated . i read ff only for my mayur .



but all above points are my personal views .you are a terrific writer your last ff(QAYAMAT) IS MINDBLOWING BUT kya kare hum majboor hai complain to karenge hi naaa.

i telling only my point of view it's your story and you can end what you think is better .we love to read .but hum demand to kar hi sakte hai par aap wahi karna jo aapne socha hai hum logo ki wajah se story mein change karne ki jarrorat nahi hai.

hope we get more and more ff on ( best jodi in the world mayur)

Originally posted by: aancchal

first of all i wana introduse myself it's not prachi my name is ragini . and for your story your story is wonderful but sab se main muda ye hai ki ye mayank aur nupur ki kahani hai . or being a obsessed mayur fan i really dont like when they get separated . i read ff only for my mayur .



but all above points are my personal views .you are a terrific writer your last ff(QAYAMAT) IS MINDBLOWING BUT kya kare hum majboor hai complain to karenge hi naaa.

i telling only my point of view it's your story and you can end what you think is better .we love to read .but hum demand to kar hi sakte hai par aap wahi karna jo aapne socha hai hum logo ki wajah se story mein change karne ki jarrorat nahi hai.

hope we get more and more ff on ( best jodi in the world mayur)

Ragini...so sorry yaar. I thought your name is Prachi (now I have to find who Prachi is 😆 ).

Ok..about your views...I surely agree and trust me you're not the only one who is a hardcore MaYur fan and is complaining about my non-stop separation track for them (I think you didn't read my 1st FF KAJ, trust me you will flip 😆). So I decided and promised my readers that at a certain stage of the story in Intikhaab I will ask them to choose the right ending for me. Hence, I always keep some flexibility within the track so that any of the ending will fit properly (read my writer's note or concept). and story me koi change nahi hogi...it will be by your choice. I will take majority votes and take the story to its rightful ending. So keep on reading...the idea is to keep yourself in Nupur's shows all the time and see the world with eyes...it will help in due course of time.

Thank you for your lovely comments 😃

-Neela

p.s. oh btw, my last FF was Qayenaat

ya your last ff Qayenaat . sorry for mistake . so you are asking us our opinion at nupur's place . agar koi aur naam hota (instead of nupur)
to main thodi der sochti bhi but bat jab nupur ki ho to nupur ka naam sirf ek hi jagah fit hota hai . wo bhi apne mayank ke sath .


warna dono bahut adhure lagte hain mayank and nupur completes each other .



so here goes 1 st vote to mayur .before polling start.

sorry yar but main kya karo main wait nahi kar sakti . hope you don't mind.

Originally posted by: aancchal

ya your last ff Qayenaat . sorry for mistake . so you are asking us our opinion at nupur's place . agar koi aur naam hota (instead of nupur)
to main thodi der sochti bhi but bat jab nupur ki ho to nupur ka naam sirf ek hi jagah fit hota hai . wo bhi apne mayank ke sath .


warna dono bahut adhure lagte hain mayank and nupur completes each other .



so here goes 1 st vote to mayur .before polling start.

sorry yar but main kya karo main wait nahi kar sakti . hope you don't mind.

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Originally posted by: -sam-

Neela,
Pata hain aapko, hum is kahani se dur rehna chahte the...
Kyunki kahi na kahi
hume aise lagta hain, ki isme bhi shayad aap Mayank aur Nupur ko ek na kare 😳

Kya kare, aapne yeh sochne par majboor kar diya! 😕

Lekin phir socha ki padlu,
aur phir khudk rok na paye
Aap likhti hi itna accha hain :)

Hume nahi pata ki isme kya hoga, baki Mayur ki kahaniyon mein, to pata hota hain ki woh khush honge
Lekin isme nahi 😳
isiliye hum utsuk hain, yeh padne ke liye...

Samidha...you may not believe this but i was thinking about you yesterday. I think I saw your comments on one the FFs last nite and instantly realised that you're one of the readers that I lost for the reason you stated above. With a sigh, I looked away only to see your comments this morning. I dunno why but for the first time I felt ..ermm weird! I felt like I am not a good story teller and my writing does not actually entertain anyone, it brings tears and people prefer to stay away from such stories.

pata hai Samidha..Qayenaat ki khatam hone per Maria (maria_soniarti) ne humse bohat lari..she fought ..she cried and my relentless efforts to calm her down, to this date, has failed each time. But she is one of the readers whom I am proud of the most because she related so well with the story and above all she did not walk away in silence. She was hurt and she screamed..she screamed at me and asked for reasons...and I will love her for that always. I wish all my readers would do the same and let the vent out rather than walk out on me.

I cannot promise anything new for Intikhaab Samidha...so read at your own risk. The next few updates may hurt but the ending remains in readers' hands. So up to you...aur agar jaana chaho to sunaa ke jaana, aise khamoshi se nahi.

Take care

Neela

Originally posted by: sharneel

aap ne bilkul ghalat kaha hai...I was actually expecting exactly similar kind of feedback from my readers. You have portrayed your feelings quite well in response to this update. All the things you stated above reflect the facts. Mayank-Nupur-Tanmay all 3 are friends...whats the difference here? Mayank-Nupur have been friends since childhood but the 10 years of gap has created a vaccum between the two..now the question is can distance and being "out of sight" really have a significant impact? Then there is Nupur-Tanmay, only been friends for few days but have become very close and they do care for each other. So can we say that Tanmay has actually filled a vaccum in Nupur's heart that was created by Mayank's absence simply by being so close to her? Is it possible that distance can define destiny sometimes? Think about it and perhaps your confusion will take a turn to a little more clarity.

Any ways..aap ki dil aur dimagh me jo uljhan chal rahi hai usska jawab to agle update me hi mil jayega 😊 Thank you..

-Neela

I'm not saying ke jho jaagah Mayank ki thi Nupur ke dil main woh jagah ab Tanmay ne le liy hai. Un dono ki alag alag jagah hai. Lekin waqt ke saath saath insaan bhi badal jata hai, aur ab 10 saal h gaye hain. Mayank aur Nupur dono he kafi badal gaye hain woh nahi rahe jho 10 saal pehle the. Aur Nupur dus bhaar sochti hain usse koi bhi reply dene say pehle... Itna sochna kyun?

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

hey neela🤗
OMG...you dedicated me this part..you know i couldnt sleep the whole night..kahin ap humse narz na hojayen😭...par shayed ab ap nahi hain...aur haan sach hai hume ap par bohot yakeen hain😃

now coming to the update😳

OMG...that was truly amzing part neela...surely it was surprising too...nupur can dance..well that was sure a hidden talent of her..loved tanmya's reaction🤣🤣..becahare ka mu khula ka khula reh gaya🤣.😆...yea itni boding kyun horahi hai nupur aur tanmay me..kuch thik nahi lagraha mujhe🤢...and the repky which nupur gave to mayank..was lke nupur apni baat nahi tanmay ki zaban bol rahi hai...hmm..me too waiting for the next part😊

i still feel tanmaya is releated to mayank..will end up falling for nupur...and how can i forget those las lines...awesome👏⭐️

and one more thing ...you concept says...

Can you be so much in love with the hatred you have for that one person that you are willing to throw away the unconditional love someone else is showering at you?

yea someone else tanmay hai itna pata chala gaya mujhe...aur yea harted😲..mayank nafrat kyun karega nupur se😭😭...OMG..neela kisi din mujhe doc ke paas jana parega apke ff parke🤣🤣

continue soon😳
love
tasfia

aap ko kis kambakht ne keh diya k hum aapse naraaz nahi hai. Of course...I am!! aur ghalti to aisi ki hai aap ne k bhulnay ki kaushish bhi karte hai to kuch na kuch aisa hojaata hai aur phir se yaad aajata hai 😡 phir bhi aap ko dedicate kiya kyunki aap ke intentions acche the 😊

By the way...ek FF pe sochne k liye itna dimagh kahan se laati ho aap 😉 itna sochoge to do hi jagah bachegi aap k liye...doctors ya mental asylum 😆 aur yeh concept ki dhamki kisse de rahi ho...Nivrithi ki yaad dila di..I miss her 😔 Anyways humain apna concept yaad hai...and you are right, that someone else is Tanmay. baqi ka to aapko sahi waqt pe pata chal jayega 😊

Thanks for your sooo soo sweet comments.

-Neela

p.s. yeh achanak INACTIVE kyun hogayi??? natak khatam kab hogi????

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

IM speechless...neela hw beautifully...😍 ...describe dem..

.u r just rockstar...seriously...👏 da letter part was really cute...luved tanmay n nupz bonding..tanmay is really sweet ..n caring 2wards nup..u r really

🤪..mindblowing WRITTER...😍

Thanks Summi 😃 Such precious words...I am feeling so inspired. Please keep reading and commenting 😊

-Neela