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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#801

Heyy Simi,

GASP!.....what is this i am hearing? you are planning to end it?....nahiiiiiiiiiiiii *kektaish style*😆

ahh chaddo, i will yell at you when the time comes😆

omgg this dev is like such a gadha, idiot, jerk, moron and ya lots more....*left to imagination*

he is soo sick really....but i don't wanna say more cuz the precap has made me super ultra happy....can you please show maan in dhishoom dhishoom style?😉....i lovee a fighting maan....just plain HAWTT!!😳

i am just sooo happy today....it snowed almost 2 feet in NJ and apparently in delhi also😆....but also gussa at you that you left us hanging in all ffs....how are we poor souls suppose to manage?😭.....yes, thats a hint for you to update soon!!*muhaha*

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: macho_muffin

Heyy Simi,
GASP!.....what is this i am hearing? you are planning to end it?....nahiiiiiiiiiiiii *kektaish style*😆
ahh chaddo, i will yell at you when the time comes😆

omgg this dev is like such a gadha, idiot, jerk, moron and ya lots more....*left to imagination*

he is soo sick really....but i don't wanna say more cuz the precap has made me super ultra happy....can you please show maan in dhishoom dhishoom style?😉....i lovee a fighting maan....just plain HAWTT!!😳

i am just sooo happy today....it snowed almost 2 feet in NJ and apparently in delhi also😆....but also gussa at you that you left us hanging in all ffs....how are we poor souls suppose to manage?😭.....yes, thats a hint for you to update soon!!*muhaha*

hahaa Macho Muffin yeah I am ending it I figured that it is better to end it rather than dragging it I don't want it to go Ekta way lolz...I think I have torturted you guys engh with this Dev track and to tell you the truth I am out of juice for this fan fic lol...hehehe Dont worry pretty soon I am going to start a new fan fic and I really really hope you guys will like it lolz....

hahah OMG I know it has been snowing like crazy since yesturday here in CT as well....I wanted snow so badly and now I finally got it lolz...but let me tell you shoveling the snow is not fun lol..atleast I will get to make a snow man now :D

P.S. You can yell at me all you want! 😆😆

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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#803

Yeh!!!!! Finally that loser Dev can leave Geet alone.

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#804

dev turned complete physco n I loved it bcoz it makes story more interesting

n u r doing gr8 job n going in write way making audio despotic 2 wait for next update

awesome dear

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#805

urghh!
i hate dev
hez sooo sick!
hez hitting on his frndz wife
hate him!hez disgusting
thnk god hez gnna get caught!!
really nice update!
update soon!

love
Navpreet

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divareena

@divareena

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#806

please add me to your PM list

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#807

Hey guys so this will be the last update for this Fan Fic 😭😭😭 I decided to end it rather than drag it...I just want to take a moment out to thank EVERYONE who liked/comments this fan fic it was truly a Walk To Remember with you guys! I really appreciate every single comments that everyone made it truly made this fan fic for me to enjoy writing about!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU so so so much!!!

Note: I don't know if some of you will like this ending but I tried to give as much justice as I could lol...ENJOY!!!!

LAST CHAPTER: Chapter 23

Maan went upstairs to change after meeting Dev to see how he is doing after all it is his engagement today. He was about to enter his room when he heard Geet voice coming from inside his room. He stood outside the room to listen to what they were talking about.
Geet: Listen Dev please don't do this

Dev: I love you Geet I always have the mintue I set my eyes on you (Maan was shocked to hear what Dev just said..past events of Geet trying to tell him about Dev played in his head..he closed his hands making a fist out of rage and anger mostly at himself for not believing Geet when she was trying to tell him the truth all along)

Geet: That is not love its sick..I am your friends wife..the same friend who considers you as his brother you are sickest person I have ever met in my life..You need help Dev go to mental institution

Dev became angry: My love for you is not sick Geet...you are mine and only mine..rememeber what I told you to do?

Geet: If you think I am going to divorce my husband for a bas***d like you than you are wrong..I will never ever do that

Dev: Ohh really??? If you don't leave him than I am sure I can arrange something for you and your precious daughter

Geet: Don't you do anything to my daughter (Maan couldn't take it anymore... "he just threatened my daughter"...he opens the door..both Dev and Geet are shocked to see him there..Geet looks down on the floor while Dev looks at Maan smiling..

Dev: Thank god Maan you are here...you need to control your wife (Maan looks at Geet who looked at Dev in disbelief)

Maan: Geet what are you doing here?

Geet: Woh main..

Dev: What will she say..I will tell you..she came here begging me..she was saying that she loves me and telling me not to get married to Meera...can you believe it?

Maan got angry: Is that true Geet?

Geet: Woh Maan baat

Dev: Please Geet don't try to explain it..you are lucky that I didn't tell Dadima or Maan till now because I thought that you would realize what you are doing but now I can't handle it anymore

Maan: Geet what he is saying is true or not? (Geet looks down with tear forming in her eyes...she didn't know what to say or do)

Maan goes up to Dev and looks at him while he smiles at Maan. Maan puts his head down and looks at Dev in anger and punches his face...Dev stumbles back and falls on the floor...he looks at Maan shocked

Dev: Maan what was that for? You should be hitting your wife and not me

Maan: And you think that I would believe you over my wife? (Geet looks at Maan with tears following out of her eyes)

Dev: What do you mean?

Maan: How dare you threaten my daughter?

Dev: I don't know what you are saying?

Maan: Ohh really?? Than maybe this should help jog your memory.(He picks Dev out and punches him on the face again and again until blood was coming out of his mouth) Did this help? (Threw Dev on the floor)

Dev: Just because I am quiet doesn't mean that I will take this beating very easily

Maan: What are you going to do?

Dev tackled Maan against the wall... "Maaaannnn" Geet shouted...Maan sat on the floor after Dev had tackled him...Dev punched Maan on the face...Geet came towards Dev and Maan and tried to push Dev out of the way...Dev held Geet by her hair and threw her on the floor. This made Maan mad and he quickly got up and punched Dev on the stomach. Dev laid on the floor gasping in pain and tried to get up but couldn't. Maan went up to Geet who was on the floor..he looked at her and saw blood coming out of her forehead..he got mad seeing the blood. He went towards Dev again, sitting on him and started punching him until he was knocekd out...Geet came here Maan

Geet: bas Maan bohat hogaya

Maan got up from Dev: Im sorry Geet I didn't believe you

Geet: No Maan it is not your fault you did what you thought was right..I should've told you about what he said but I was scared that he would've done something to you and Sargam

Maan: Don't worry I will make sure that he never does anything again...(Both Geet and Maan huged)

Dadima: What happened here? What happened to Dev?

Maan: Dadima I will explain later but for now tell everyone the engagement won't happen

Dadima: What are you saying

Maan: Please Dadima I will explain later

Geet: Dadima main aapke saath chalti hoon..I want to talk to Meera

Dadima looked confused: Alright beta (as both of them left Maan called the police)

Everyone had left the party after hearing the annocement of engagement being canceled...Meera was glad that the truth of Dev came out before she actually got married or engaged to him...Dadima was shocked after hearing what Geet had to tell her...she couldn't blieve that Dev had dared to hit on a Khurana bahu and a married woman with a kid. Dev was jailed for threatening his and his kids life. Geet was glad that nothing had happened to her happy family...

EPILOGUE:

After the incident of Dev Maan became externally possessive about Sargam. If Sargam had any boy's as friends Maan made sure that she would ONLY hang out at home with them that too only on weekend where he can keep an eye on her. Geet tried convincing Maan but knowing Maan Singh Khurana he never changes his mind once making a decision.

Geet is about seven months pregnant with a baby boy...Sargam couldn't be happy as she would finally get to be a older sister and plus she got a puppy she always wanted. Geet had to pursuade Maan to finally let Sargam get a puppy or else no baby boy...It was a tough situation for Maan..he couldn't say no to his two ladies that he loved dearly. Maan had promised to take Geet and Sargam out for Ice cream in celebration of the new baby that will arrive soon and plus because Geet was craving for the ice cream. Maan again was held up in the meeting and came home late...this time he snuck in the house knowing that the history is again about to repeat...

Sargam: Papa you are late?? You were suppose to take us for the ice cream...(He looks at Sargam who was sitting in the living room with arms crossed over her chest)

Maan: Sshhhh don't speak so loud..where is your mom?

Sargam: Mom just went upstairs...let me call her to tell her you came...MOO..(Maan came running to her and closed her mouth with his hand)

Maan: Shhh I know I missed the ice cream and I promised but I got stuck in the metting..don't wake your mom..

Sargam removed his hand: what will I get?

Maan: you and your mom always trying to rob me and blackmail me

Sargam gasps: alright fine I will call mummy right now

Maan: No..ok ok here takes out money from his pocket

Sargam: This will do for now tomorrow I want ice cream and chocolates...

Maan: Alright..can I sleep in your room tonight

Sargam: why?

Maan: wohh (thinking about the last time time when Geet was preganant and threw him out of the room when he had forgotten his promise...) nothing I mised you thats why

They both went upstairs towards Sargam's room..

Sargam: Papa you go in first..I will say good night to mumma so she doesn't think of something

Maan: Yeah that is a good idea

Sargam left Maan alone..Maan sighed in relieve and entered Sargams room..only to find Geet standing with a bag..she puts her hand in the bag and one by one starts throwing it at Maan..

Maan: Geet no!!!

What Geet does to Maan I will leave it you your imagination 😆😆😆

Thank you guys for enjoying this fan fic and I hope I did justice to it 😳😳😳